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If you're unable to play levels without being lethal, go to my level for a free cure and instructions. Leave feedback, comment, review, yay, boo, heart, i dont care what you do, just get cured! http://lbp.me/v/e79xqk

2012-02-22 04:26:00 Author: Unknown User

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Hello and welcome Army_of_two. I just got through playing your level and it is rather helpful. I wasn't aware that there was a new version of this, and I don't really hang out with sneaky people so never had an issue or need for this. Anyway, as you have asked for F4F I will get a bit more detailed on your level. The Music and a material choice fit together well. As the level is focused mainly on informing I will start with the speech, it's well paced and easy to read for the most part there are some confusing steps toward the end and your grammar gets a little wobbly toward the very end. I think the confusing part could be counteracted if you were to show the prize before giving it away. You would have to set it up in such a way as to be visible in play mode but maybe it would help with the explanation. I also think that having multiple version of your sack person is a little distracting. I would have liked it more if you had the character walking to a point, stopping and saying some lines, you could then introduce your friends by having their costumes standing in the level (thats if they are OK with that). The only other confusing part was at the very start with the bots on the lethal material, I thnk I get the structure of the level, but it's not too clear. If it was more set to into three areas it may flow better. 'This is the problem' - Show the bots and mention your friends 'This is the Object' - Show a version of it in the level and have your character talk about your friends 'This is the solution' - Have your character point out the bits of the object and how to use it. Maybe you could make a fake example of it working... Anyways I hope that this level doesn't get too many plays in a nice way, like I hope that SPC doesn't come back, but I hope that if people do get it they get quickly to your level and fix it. On that note, take a look in the Help! (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?126-LBP2-Help!) section because I have seen some people recently posting that they (or the children) have had this problem. In relation to F4F if you could take a look at my level Miserable Flying Weather (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=57390-Miserable-Flying-Weather-Back-To-The-Future) (queue me (http://lbp.me/v/yzhyj3)) it would be appreciated.

2012-02-23 08:14:00 Author: Mr_Fusion Posts: 1799

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