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I am working on a 10 part series called Minastril Science and I really need some feedback these are the levels descriptions and status. Part One: The Brutal Beggining - Complete You are a subject, complete the tests. Part Two: The Rats Freedom - In Progress Finally free you set out to start the war. Part Three: The Devastated Man - In progress You meet a soldier during a difficult time. Part Four: Road to Disaster - Have not started You hitch a ride with the soldier the soldier. Part Five: A Friend Gained - Have not started You meet the man who taught you all you know. Part Six: The Fun begins - Have not started You infiltrate the old science labs to destroy it, but what lays inside? Part Seven: An Enemy Made - Have not started Learning the harsh reality of the old tests. Part Eight: The Betrayal - Have not started The soldier tells the enemy about you, what will happen? Part Nine: The Frontline Base - Have not started Going to the enemy base and setting your story straight with the soldier. Part Ten: The Final Night - Have not started You and the soldier are now going to finish what this war has started. PSN: TheUsedBullet

2008-12-31 01:37:00 Author: LittleBigGamer Posts: 48

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Please tell me what you think of the first level? Is it good, okay or bad? Is it fine the way it is, change it up a little or give up on it?

2009-01-12 04:24:00 Author: LittleBigGamer Posts: 48

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I will try it and post my thoughts soon. Its very ambitious to start a ten level project :eek:, id grow bored of the concept very fast. So far I've just almost completed my first level and im desperate to be done with it and start on another project. You must have a lot more patience than me.

2009-01-12 16:30:00 Author: Marklin80 Posts: 458

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I will try it and post my thoughts soon. Its very ambitious to start a ten level project :eek:, id grow bored of the concept very fast. So far I've just almost completed my first level and im desperate to be done with it and start on another project. You must have a lot more patience than me. More patience? no. More spare time and no life? yes.

2009-01-12 22:42:00 Author: LittleBigGamer Posts: 48

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Ok i played the level and gave it three stars, but it could easily reach four if you improve some parts, the major problem is the length as it was very short and people (or at least i) usually prefer the longer levels before shorter ones. This will of course be easily fixed by lengthening the level or by putting level 1 and 2 in the same level, take some inspiration from the hard version of vr training (but remember to not just copy everything). Another suggestion is to make all the emitters and magic mouths invisible and fix the censored magic mouths (they only say *****). it would also be good if you added some camera zones and lighting. As it is now its an ok level which needs to be improved, but theres no reason to give up on it

2009-01-13 06:50:00 Author: Marklin80 Posts: 458

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