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The "Attract O Gel" Eiffel Tower Race

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http://lbp.me/v/9rbjy2


Well,
I found the Attract O Gel and I thought to use it to climb on things we are not allowed to do in real life...An example, why not making a race on the Eiffel Tower in Paris.
I hope it's not getting to slow when it played by 4...
I am really interested on F4F,cheers and have fun
2012-02-01 00:53:00

Author:
Unknown User


Ill try it
F4F: Assasins creed single player
2012-02-01 02:55:00

Author:
lilballer22
Posts: 63


It was pretty good, I played it alone so I cant imagine how fun it would be with a friend. I think the tower should be a bit longer though its a pretty short race.
But I Like the detail you put into the tower and the scenery, this is like the 2nd best level ive played with the attracto gel.
Visuals 4/5
Gameplay 3.5/5
Overall it was good
2012-02-01 03:07:00

Author:
lilballer22
Posts: 63


got it queued2012-02-01 03:17:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


Queued, i will try it out tomorrow.
Ig you have got the time can you F4F my level?
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=59163-Cosmic-Carnage-Beta(Twin-Stick-Shooter)-Now-with-2-Player-Support!!
2012-02-01 03:44:00

Author:
arsenalfan_1995
Posts: 229


I just played your level! Here are my thoughts:

The Gameplay was without being mean, nothing innovative. Other than 2 jumps over some electric that's about it. It's also incredibly laggy. I cannot imagine what it's like 4 player but it cannot be nice.

The visuals were not as bad as the Gameplay with some nice little details such as lighting and the houses at the start.

And considering I did the level (got to the top of the tower) in about 30 seconds, Unfortunately I have to rate the level 3/10.

I didn't give it a because I could see some effort being put into this. But you can do much better in the future!

P.s Please don't take this review in a bad way, I'm saying all this as constructive criticism Just trying to help you improve as a creator
2012-02-01 08:41:00

Author:
fruitmanlolli
Posts: 151


I just played your level! Here are my thoughts:

The Gameplay was without being mean, nothing innovative. Other than 2 jumps over some electric that's about it. It's also incredibly laggy. I cannot imagine what it's like 4 player but it cannot be nice.



Thanks Fruitmanlolli.
I agree with you and that's why I posted this F4F. I really appreciate advice.
You tell it, It took to me few hours to build the scenery, and for the moment I didn't work on traps and obstacles in the race which is too short. From there, I will do it today and make the race harder and longer.
2012-02-01 10:56:00

Author:
Unknown User


Queued, i will try it out tomorrow.
Ig you have got the time can you F4F my level?
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=59163-Cosmic-Carnage-Beta(Twin-Stick-Shooter)-Now-with-2-Player-Support!!

Thanks to get it in queue.
Tell me if you specially play in multiplayer game. I have a slow internet connection, but I hope it is not getting too slow.
In the lastest version, there is a different way to go, surprises from pigeons...and much more balloon...hope you like it!
2012-02-01 14:21:00

Author:
Unknown User


Wasn't able to finish :/ actually, i barely started it, i couldn't get past te electric cable, i couldnt see it and wasn't able to get past, if someone could reply telling me what i'm meant to do that woud help lol. From what i played though, the visuals do look nice but it is very laggy2012-02-01 22:53:00

Author:
arsenalfan_1995
Posts: 229


Wasn't able to finish :/ actually, i barely started it, i couldn't get past te electric cable, i couldnt see it and wasn't able to get past,. From what i played though, the visuals do look nice but it is very laggy

I done things now,you can't be stuck anymore. I add my balloon if you want to visit from air and more checkpoint and some surprises...and to improve the gamespeed,I separated elements.
Thanks again
2012-02-02 17:06:00

Author:
Unknown User


I will give it another to and get back to you! 2012-02-03 02:24:00

Author:
arsenalfan_1995
Posts: 229


reviewinng while playing
with the day or night changer, I think you only need one switch
It is very laggy :S
Ok, reachd where you changed sides... You can't actually see the checkpoint, so I'm not sure where I am when trying to jump over the spikes...
I tried to cheat by taking the baloon and jumping down, but I missed...and lost the baloon.
Didn 't finish it, but I did like it
you're great a scenery....but there are a few areas that need some work
2012-02-03 11:36:00

Author:
Valeview
Posts: 1581


It is very laggy :S


Ok, I appreciate all comments and I really was disappointed by the way it was so lag...from there, I realized a new level, just bigger ( add few things also but couldn't do more with my temperature...still my biggest problem)
I separated elements and now it should be faster than ever,specially if you play with friends( which is more funny because that's a race...)
Well after 3 days on it, I think the result is not so bad.
Few tips: the hot air balloon get a checkpoint,like that you can jump and if you miss the tower, you can try again. The lift and the third floor have been managed. The first floor is still a bit laggy, but really want as my "pigeons" as obstacles. More checkpoint, more points... a tower bigger. Hope you like it like it is now!
2012-02-04 13:57:00

Author:
Unknown User


For first time I didn't see stairs to actual Tower and missed the whole level. Later I climbed it. but what I'm supposed to do at the top?2012-02-06 22:51:00

Author:
Unknown User


For first time I didn't see stairs to actual Tower and missed the whole level. Later I climbed it. but what I'm supposed to do at the top?

I had many troubles with my tower and the idea is mainly to make a nice Eiffel Tower. It's more tourism for sackboys to describe this level now. I really appreciate well scenery.
I had 2 choices. One was to make a basic steel tower with not much ornamentation and many danger to rise the top. Second,just a basic race which alloyed the level to as not lag as it was in the past( again sorry for who played).
To conclude, the level's goal now is no more VERSUS and just enjoyed a walk in Paris( or in air) easily and make the highest score.
I have in mind an other monument and this time I guaranteed you It will be a standard level with a great final boss and well ornamented too...


I ll check your library,and see what's you get in there.
2012-02-07 00:12:00

Author:
Unknown User


I mean, how to finish level? Where is the score board? : )2012-02-07 20:00:00

Author:
Unknown User


I can tell you,fellows! Without your many advices, my level should be as boring as a visit to a dusty stamp's museum! Thanks
Polishing seams to be part of the rules on LBP creation, with also imagination and madness.
It's great fun to get picture from level,I will be happy to do same in your level if ever,I like to photograph on my best profile...
Ah,and for the score board,I add many clues to not miss it anymore, and instead balloon there is the military school in background (thorough work)
If you see something to change,tell me, I will be glad to give you all the comfort you need in this journey.

Niki noticed it, I have still one big problem.When you look the binocular and see different views on the tower, there is few elements which just obviously disappear (parts of the tower,or even worst the ground get out...) I know I need to separate elements,but which one? I try to clean up the first level,and then lights...It's because everything is really closed in a vertical zone? Be patient with more than 2 players
2012-02-09 16:05:00

Author:
Unknown User


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