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Manhole

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They looked homeless, because they were.They'd been homeless for the last few hours.
They stared endlessley at the small ring of sky a few feet above them, their freedom.
Their captor. The street above buzzed with the wheels and horns and footsteps of the
city.
Individual conversations seemed to stand out from each other, he could hear them.
One woman stood out to him most. So pretentious, talking about her career and her hair,
her amazing boyfreind. He looked across to his companion. He looked as though he could
hear the same obnoxious voice.
Night would soon come,and then what. What if the manhole is simply re-covered? They'd
tried to climb, to support each other and escape. It had just joined the host of mistakes
for the day, lingering heavily over their heads. The city had eaten them...
The smell of hotdogs trickled down through the open hole.It danced around the putrid
hollow, dancing around hand in hand with the gristly stench of the sewers. How will
anyone find them. So lost, this close to home.
He could see the other, yelling at the top of his voice. He couldn't hear now, what
happened in silence. No voices stood out. A van had stopped over the manhole and the
cave blacked out. The man had risen and was approaching him. His face had crumpled under
the pressure of fanatical rage. He was shouting in silence as his hand wrapped around
his neck.
Time raced past, a greasy wave of weight over his bones. Adrenaline lightning shot
through him as a beam of light hit his face. Pure, unrelenting light...

He could hear the muffled sound pf the truck through his helmet. Lonie was shining his
spotlight in his face.
"wake up dribble *******, night raid is on!"

"CLEAR 1,2,3,4..."

The gunners announcment delivered another shot of white fire to his flesh. With Lonie's
hysterical laughter and the 58cal's own heart of fire beating right next to his ear for
comfort, he went through his weapon checks exactly as a complete novice should, shaking
and failing every stage.
In this five second period he had glanced up again, just enough to take a memory imprint
of Lonie's face, missing a portion of cheek. He was still grinning. Another charmonic
patter of rounds doodled across the steel wings of the truck. This was it, brought to him
by his own bravery as he straightened up over the truck's side panel and aimed at the end
of his rifle. His gun was already firing by this point, and he was sure he hadn't pulled
the trigger.
The light had a voice this time. A voice of rotary blades and a chaingun building momentum,
it almost seemed to be greeting him.

"CLEAR 1,2,3,4..."

He woke the next day, to the sun, not sure if it was dawn or dusk. It was warm. A chunk of
shrapnel hit him in the face.

"That s*** hit me in the face, I nearly ate it. I nearly ate lead! it's about time it came
true ain't it?"

He walked away, looking quite glad with himself. It wasn't lead. It was the outer casing
of a land mine.

"A gunship. that's what the light was. Lucky Canine was on the launcher, cus that thing spelt
bloody mess, must've have been spitting about nie hundred rounds per minute"

He likes to get technical sometimes. He was examining his new open-plan mouth in a slab of
relentlessley polished steel.

"Carl! Get up, get ready. We're moving in five!"

There were no formalities in Diver company. A trait he'd gotten used to quite quickly.
Diver company had become his family, disfuntional as it be, since they passed through
his home town of Fort Redbarb a week back. He could have stayed, defended his home. Diver
company stopped outside the church and called out only once, and started moving again.
Carl had sprinted and dived to get on that last truck. The next day Fort Redbarb joined
the rest of history as a forgotten memory.

1st gunner Lonie hot his nickname from a poorly written text to his 'girl back home'. Now he
keeps his phone in his shoe, and his shoe on his foot. That was before Diver company became
the army's 'dog on a long leash' unit. Carl had joined in just as the party was getting livley.
2012-01-30 19:10:00

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Cool story bro2012-01-30 23:14:00

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