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Stella sacris

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Hey everyone! This is my first level created in LBP2. I've worked very hard on it, so please... try it and let me know what you think.
http://lbp.me/v/9jxk1h
2012-01-24 22:17:00

Author:
Unknown User


Stairs make me want to break stuff sometimes.

Lol, actually, you have built a rather nice looking world. It was interesting, but was sort of over quickly, like you built some nice scenery that I ran past.

Try to avoid story objects because they do detract from your other design. The part in the clouds was a little tight to play, try to avoid having bounce pads under the next level that close. You just hit your head each time you go up and it seems inelegant.

The second half of your level seemed a little disjointed but again, the over all design was good.

Also, try to avoid a long line of point bubbles, if I can mindlessly run through them and get an 18x multiplier, then that means so can everybody else so what's the point? You could just put a single point bubble there tweaked to give 1000000 and it would feel just as rewarding.

Overall the gameplay and design are good, but a little more tweaking would make this great

Also, you mentioned that you worked really hard on this level, keep in mind that a lot of other people in the showcase thread also worked really hard on their levels so support them and the community by giving feedback on their efforts, I am sure they would appreciate it as much as you will appreciate them leaving great feedback on your efforts.
2012-01-25 11:22:00

Author:
Mr_Fusion
Posts: 1799


I couldn't agree more! thank you very much for the advice mr_fusion. And yeah... other people worked as hard as me, so I will support them.2012-01-25 12:52:00

Author:
Unknown User


Would you mind uploading some pictures ?2012-01-25 19:18:00

Author:
VenemoX
Posts: 197


You know, I really want to upload some pics, but I don't know how to do it... See, I've actually uploaded some photos to my lbp.me profile, but they are awful too blurry and tiny. Is there some other way to upload decent quality pictures?2012-01-26 01:53:00

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Unknown User


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