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College Essay LBP style!

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Hello everyone, for the pass 4 months I was doing college work, thanks to this I haven't played a lot of LBP and didn't have any time to talk to people in lbpc. Today I finish a very important part, which is my college essay and it has to be about something that inspired me in life and the best example I can use is LittleBigPlanet!

After playing the game for years I always wanted to write about it and now im done! so if you have a chance read it and tell we what you think (please dont tell me if I have any grammar errors I just dont like it lol jk)

BTW is only 500 words long so yea XD

Enjoy ^_^

Have you ever rode a rat around a race course, jumping and avoiding dangerous obstacles along the way, eating cookies for points and muffins for boost? Have you ever fought your way through a majestic, corrupted forest with the power of your mind? ?This creates a world, an imperial dreams case with infinitive possibility's, an abstract environment just waiting to be explored? a quote from LittleBigPlanet, produced by Media Molecule Studios. LittleBigPlanet, a game that allows people to create their own games. The creativity, the inspiration, and endless possibilities changes your way of thinking and overwhelms you with a rush that goes from the tip of your toes to the hairy forest in your head. Over the course of 5 years I still create with the same passion as I had from the very first day. The excitement of sharing my world and exploring the world of others course throughout my blood. This has not only changed the way I look at the world, but for my future as well, I want to become a video game designer.


I challenge people who say this game is silly or childish; with this childish game, I meet people from all over the globe! London, Australia, Japan, England, India, Korea, France, Spain and other country's around the world. Who can say they have a conversation with people from around the world on a daily bases? I envision the world without limits where your imagination expresses and changes people in a way that only LittleBigPlanet can. It's community is a multicultural Paradise where everyone can express their deepest thoughts, share their creativity with the community. Game designing is about community, ideas, and expression. One of the biggest projects I?m making in the game has taken 8 months and is not even finished! My determination holds no bonds and I will finish this project even if it takes me a year to finish.


This skills have not only developed my communication and leadership but submerged me into a sea of knowledge and creative ideas that can revolutionize the world. Originality is what everyone wants to achieve in every field especially in the field of game designing. I not only display my work so everyone can see, but also accept criticism, and get advice on what I can improve on. I want to become the next person to reform the world, by reconstructing it, channeling my ideas to improve life as we know it. I strive to be fearless, passionate, and become a distinguished student that love learning with other peers. College will guide me in the right path for becoming a game designer.
2011-11-28 23:18:00

Author:
Arnald23
Posts: 1843


Bravo. That is a wonderful essay, although my english teacher would have a fit because it dosen't have 5 paragraphs.2011-11-29 01:28:00

Author:
junk-Warrior7
Posts: 276


Bravo. That is a wonderful essay, although my english teacher would have a fit because it dosen't have 5 paragraphs.

Same here but college essay like this one to get into college is only 250-500 words and this is 440 ^_^
2011-11-29 02:00:00

Author:
Arnald23
Posts: 1843


?This creates a world, an imperial dreams case with infinitive possibility's, an abstract environment just waiting to be explored?
I think you mean an ethereal dreamscape with infinite possibilities.
2011-11-29 11:38:00

Author:
Ayneh
Posts: 2454


Fantastic work. Loving the recent introduction on games into schoolwork. my cousin recently did a 3 page report on "Dead Island"'s release trailer. exellent stuff! I really hope you get there someday!2011-11-30 00:01:00

Author:
grayspence
Posts: 1990


Awesome Essay!! Smart choice of word usage.
I think you nailed it.

I hope you get to your dream of game designing someday, just remember what you're working towards and keep at it.
2011-12-02 09:29:00

Author:
Unknown User


Thanks you so much everyone!2011-12-02 12:21:00

Author:
Arnald23
Posts: 1843


Awesome essay arny ^_^!!!2011-12-02 13:16:00

Author:
calyst_aayla
Posts: 217


Great essay! I have done a few essays about video games myself, although regrettably I haven't done one about LBP. I have done essays about Gran Turismo 5 and Test Drive Unlimited 2, and generally felt I was in my comfort zone. Then I thought to myself, "Maybe this could become my career"...I can always wish.2011-12-04 06:53:00

Author:
Unknown User


Great essay! I have done a few essays about video games myself, although regrettably I haven't done one about LBP. I have done essays about Gran Turismo 5 and Test Drive Unlimited 2, and generally felt I was in my comfort zone. Then I thought to myself, "Maybe this could become my career"...I can always wish.

Don't wish make it! I love lbp and it inspire my way of thinking! and now I want to be a game designer!
2011-12-05 01:44:00

Author:
Arnald23
Posts: 1843


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