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Fantasy ( Chapter One )

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Fantasy ( Chapter One )
[ 1 PLAYER ONLY ] - Chapter One - Introduction
This level is based of some of my favorite games.
Chapter one is my original idea and the rest of my chapters require a game hero. Please comment a game hero you would like me to create to relive the memory of as sackboy. Chapter Two - Ezio

Living on a peaceful island is great but not everything goes so swell when the civilians of the island are having strange dreams which are hinting to crazy ideas.
You encounter with a strange scientist which is forcing you to do unthinkable tasks which could lead to unknown consequences.
Does your dream mean anything?



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2011-11-09 03:23:00

Author:
Unknown User


Looks interesting. I'll take a look at it.

Also in a most friendly way, because I see the troubles you encountered... Make sure you switch to advanced mode when editing and look at the input boxes, there should be a place for the LBP.me link. There is also an option to delete a post in one of the dropdowns. If you create a thread you also have some options in a dropdown called Administrative to delete it.
2011-11-09 05:38:00

Author:
Mr_Fusion
Posts: 1799


First up, a great introduction stage. You can see the music sequencer on the first screen though. I really like the timing of this level, nothing takes too long to happen. Your scenery design is really well done, some areas do seem a little bland and you do repeat some decorations a few times. Nothing overly negative, as you haves built a fairly large intricate world to explore, but its all so densely packed, which is a good thing. It doesn't take very long to get any where.

Try not to have the character switch 3 layers at a time, only one spot that I noticed this in was the entrance to the cave.

I thought your use of music was really good and sets a great tone. I'm not sure what game this is referencing exactly but I'm guessing a square-enix game and that's the mood you give off. In regards to communicating what your story is about I think you need to write it in your level description, as I am left rather unsure of what is required next. I'm guessing you will have small stages based on other heroes but you only briefly mention this in this thread.

Anyway, I didn't see much wrong with it, except I don't like the super happy sackbot at the start, especially considering I wake up from a bad dream. Also, I hate that the All Blacks got lucky in the rugby.
2011-11-09 06:42:00

Author:
Mr_Fusion
Posts: 1799


The first level is my own orignal idea but from onwards is other games that I have re created.
Level has been fixed and is ready for the updated version to play.
Thanks for your review
2011-11-09 09:29:00

Author:
Unknown User


I have this queued and should be able to play tonight or Friday and I must say to Mr. Fusion, nice review sir.2011-11-09 21:08:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


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