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The Bounce Pad Factory - Learning the Ropes

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I published this level a few days ago and I haven't gotten a boo yet! Not bad I guess. Can you check it out for me? Thanks!
http://lbp.me/v/78qyy7

EDIT: 101 PLAYS AND NO BOO'S? I'm so happy! Thanks fellow sackpeople!
2011-10-29 01:26:00

Author:
Wolffy123
Posts: 406


Wow! Everyone who has played this has hearted it! Nice work Ill check this out when my internet gets back up.2011-10-29 01:46:00

Author:
DominationMags
Posts: 1840


Thankyou! Just to warn you.. the level is incredably short. That's because there are a lot of emitters and I wanted to make sure the level wouldn't crash. It is literally a 30 second to a minute play . Part 2 is well on its way though!2011-10-29 03:24:00

Author:
Wolffy123
Posts: 406


i'll check this out ! On Queue
Enjoyed the level, Good Job ^^!>
2011-10-29 13:06:00

Author:
Unknown User


Thanks so much!2011-10-29 19:01:00

Author:
Wolffy123
Posts: 406


OK, I'm writing this review as I play it, so bear with me

Opening looks nice. Perhaps put less bubbles or make them harder to get so the player has to work for multiplyers, but that's just nitpicking (if I do a lot of that, I apologize in advance xD). Nice how the sign lights up, but it seems a little late. Nice movie, the text went a bit slow for me, but all text seems to, I must just read quickly. I don't think you should have the wall thay goes in, at first I thought I was stuck, add a sign or something. I like what you did with the bubbles in this area, well done. Carrying on to the area with the switch, I found the puzzle a little basic, but that's not a bad thing to start the player on, provided it gets harder later on. I guess I'll have to wait and see. The movie went on a bit long. The conveyor section was lovely, well done. I missed a bit of the movie saying to avoid the obstacles typing this, but it seemed to go on for a long time. This section is great fun, not too hard, not too easy, and the bubbles are great fun to get as well, well done. And...that's it?

Overall, a very fun level. Graphically it's simplistic but in a good way, and the gameplay is fun and engaging. It is however, very, very short, but I can see your working on another level. I personally wouldn't have released this until that was finished, but to each his own I suppose. The only other thing I can ask is that you shrink the movie times.

A happy face and a heart from me, well done
2011-10-29 21:13:00

Author:
kirbyman62
Posts: 1893


THANKYOU! That's the kind of review I was looking for! I will take your advice with the cutscene about the obstacles ahead. But when it comes to the text, there are kids who are 8 or 9 playing this game so I thought it would make sense to give them a chance to read it. And yes I know the level is incredably short but, as I said in a comment above, I wanted to make sure the level wouldn't overheat because of the emitters that make the scrolling bouncepads. Part 2 is on its way though! Thanks soo much!2011-10-29 22:50:00

Author:
Wolffy123
Posts: 406


THANKYOU! That's the kind of review I was looking for! I will take your advice with the cutscene about the obstacles ahead. But when it comes to the text, there are kids who are 8 or 9 playing this game so I thought it would make sense to give them a chance to read it. And yes I know the level is incredably short but, as I said in a comment above, I wanted to make sure the level wouldn't overheat because of the emitters that make the scrolling bouncepads. Part 2 is on its way though! Thanks soo much!

Yeah, I see what you mean, perhaps take out the bit about the grapple hook? That seems pretty self-explanatory to me. I'll keep an eye out for Part 2.
2011-10-30 13:04:00

Author:
kirbyman62
Posts: 1893


Alright. I did everything that you mentioned. It's republished if you want to check it out. Thanks Again!2011-10-31 01:29:00

Author:
Wolffy123
Posts: 406


just now finished playing it. Looks nice, but I think a few more deco pieces could go a long way. Add some more details. chrome pipes and what not. That's just me. There was one thing that really got me though. Please, there is no need for a movie camera to pan to the bounce pads that I turned on with that switch. I'm standing right next to the bounce pads, I can see them already. No need for this camera. The obstacle section could use better obstacles, it seemed a little bland. maybe some moving obstacles? I hate to nitpick like this, I did enjoy the level and thought you did a good job on the overall design. very clean looking.2011-11-03 03:11:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


Thanks for the feedback! And yeah I agree, that little cutscene was a little dumb. Instead of changing everything on this level, I will add what you said in my next one! Thanks!2011-11-03 22:25:00

Author:
Wolffy123
Posts: 406


77 Plays --- NO BOOS!!2011-11-11 23:37:00

Author:
Wolffy123
Posts: 406


Great level, i also did good on the score! cant wait for part 22011-11-12 17:11:00

Author:
Unknown User


It's almost done!!2011-11-13 02:53:00

Author:
Wolffy123
Posts: 406


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