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Paper Zone

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Paper Zonenysudyrgh

Sooo ... I decided to revamp Paper Zone a bit and this is the result.
Have fun playing trough my very first level when I joined LBPC.
Ah, I was such a noob when I first came here. /Nostalgia
Anyway, I hope you like the minor changes I made. Have fun.



Hey, it'sa me!

The Bad

Not enough check points
-There wasn't enough checkpoints for the obsticles-

The Good
Lovely Visuals
-The visuals were really unique and well done-

Original Platforming
-Self Explenetory-

The What

A Lot of Paper
-Umm....That's it-

The Verdict
:star::star::star::star: & 1 <3


Hey man, this level was pretty fun! Good platforming. And now I'm 1st place. (against one other...) Hope you get some more plays!


Wow, glad you put that back on the moon mate. Thought the level looked nice with all the paper style, hence it called Paper Zone. I was gonna attempt a paper type level, guessed you beat me to it. Liked the different shaped moving parts, but lost a few points on the spinning parts with the spikes. Music again fitted nicely. Also liked the pencils and book objects you made, also appear on your toxic waters minigame, which is a nice touch. All in all, a nice little platformer mate, not to hard not to easy, nice.
2011-10-28 15:31:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Where is the link to it?2011-10-28 16:11:00

Author:
carringtonandrew
Posts: 85


ignore him nys....he's a lost PS3'er

2011-10-28 16:15:00

Author:
butter-kicker
Posts: 1061


Hey I'm planning to do the same with my City Bouncing Survival. You know BIG UPDATE!
Will play it when I grab my PSP.
2011-10-28 16:26:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378


Where is the link to it?

In my sig.
2011-10-28 18:22:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Dangit PSP-Side, Y U no give feedback to Nys?





2011-10-31 16:26:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Dangit PSP-Side, Y U no give feedback to Nys?







Relax MAN!
I'll p?ay it now IF YOU ARE SOOOOO sad... :3
2011-10-31 16:32:00

Author:
doggy97
Posts: 964


^do et nao!2011-10-31 16:36:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


^do et nao!
Playing it!
Good good! I like it! :star::star::star::star::star:
Badbad! I hate that there wasn't enough respawnpoints! >:C
Good was that it was great platformer level! "Paper ?verallt!"
(+ Hard as hardest game )
2011-10-31 17:20:00

Author:
doggy97
Posts: 964


Nys doesn't want any review from me, so I just say that I liked it, gave it :star::star::star::star::star: and Doggy's right because the level was hard.

...

Just kidding!

Here's a quick review:

The Goods:
- Great visuals
- Nice music
- Good platforming
- Challenging
- Bubble combos like in VJ's levels!

The Bads:
- Too much paper (JK)
- The-Questor said: "There wasn't enough checkpoints for the obsticles" and I agree with him.

The Most confusing:
- What's the update again?

Overall rating: :star::star::star::star::star: (If someone likes some challenging platforming then this level is the right one)

Oh one thing left: it isn't hard!
2011-10-31 17:27:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378


What! You guys tought this was hard?
You should've played the original.
2011-10-31 17:30:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


D-D-D-d-d-d-Double Post!
Thanks for your feedback Sckark. (I'm late)
Anyway, is it me or are Doggy and Schark the last ones to give feedback in these forums?
2011-11-02 21:12:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Wdll msybe whole PSP Community
PS: Too much video games? N-n-n-n Nysudyrch shot! (Maybe N-n-n-nyancat kill?)
And one more thing! Why did u changed your name D: Nysudyrch was better
Now your name is like Thennis "...Bonk ?*★ Bonk ?*★..."
2011-11-02 21:56:00

Author:
doggy97
Posts: 964


R-R-REVIEW!!!

The Good

- A certain Quality about it!
It felt like a Professional Level by Someone like Fastbro or Jonze

- Challenging
A good Challenge can be a good thing

- Style
Classy.....nearly as Classy as me

The Bad

- Bad Placement
That Spike spinning bit was Really annoying and a bad placement

- Challenging
GRRRR!!!

The Ok?

- You LV! Paper

Rating : 8.0
A Good Level but A few Flaws hold it back from Greatness

http://i1209.photobucket.com/albums/cc395/photoman1002/Darkhorseaward.jpg

The Dark horse is awarded For levels that didn't sound That good but Turned Decent if not Brilliant
2011-11-03 20:58:00

Author:
butter-kicker
Posts: 1061


Its even more awesome now, I added a race.

The fun has been doubled!
2011-11-07 19:22:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


When the fun ends...
NEWER if the Nysdyrkhys is HERE!
2011-11-09 16:13:00

Author:
doggy97
Posts: 964


I have a screen shot.
http://i1133.photobucket.com/albums/m597/sackboy7789/snap008.jpg
2011-11-11 07:19:00

Author:
sackboy7789
Posts: 280


Sackboy7789 has 7788 Points! One more to go. 2011-11-11 10:16:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378


The goods:
Challenging race.
Nice details.
I liked it when I grabbed onto the book and ended up inside of it.
The race was fun.

The bads:
Colors, but what can you expect from paper.

I gave it a 4 star and a heart.
This is a pretty well made level.
2011-12-21 21:15:00

Author:
unc92sax
Posts: 928


hmmm.....I just played this again and im proud to say...I TOPPED THE LEADERBOARD 2011-12-22 09:30:00

Author:
butter-kicker
Posts: 1061


If you beat 50000 points, then you're better than me.
My score on the board is from a friend.
2011-12-22 12:31:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/301/a/b/smosh___double_facepalm_by_bronzeturd-d4e9yld.png

2011-12-22 12:50:00

Author:
butter-kicker
Posts: 1061


Is that pointed at yourself? or me? 2011-12-22 12:51:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


If you beat 50000 points, then you're better than me.
My score on the board is from a friend.
Oh hold on! Wait for it... Yes I got highscore 9999999999...

But seriously... How did you get over 50000?
2011-12-22 13:03:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378


Lets just say I play tested alot. 2011-12-22 13:19:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Review time (I'm having a frenzy!)

Great level. The gameplay was top-notch and incorporated a ton of different ideas. Each was different from the last and none over-stayed their welcome. Sheer platforming bliss. It was all very well-done and professional.

Now for the bad. Despite the premise being 'Paper Zone', I find myself wishing it wasn't made out of paper. Even a simple material swap could drastically improve the visuals which were the low-point in my opinion. It all looked so bland, but a well-designed, best execution with the materials kind of bland. It didn't look bad, per-se', but it lacked the visual flair which could have pushed this level into sheer awesomeness. The background, especially, could use some color and variety. Maybe you could turn the paper into colored paper and have a black background (giving it a neon kind of look). Or, perhaps, add some doodle-art. I just feel like it needs a bit more of a punch visually.

Still gave it five stars and a heart. It's just preference that made it lose a bit of ground in my books.
2011-12-22 19:52:00

Author:
Fading-Dream
Posts: 164


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