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spoons

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This level was made out of love :3 and randomness. i wanted to get some proper good analytical reviews on this instead of "i liek et plz ply my lvlz " so if anyone wants to do F4F with me just ask.
http://lbp.me/v/6vhwm7
2011-10-08 08:20:00

Author:
nerzdadestroyer
Posts: 1527


Gonna give it a try later on!
(Got it queued! :3)
2011-10-08 22:36:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196


'Proper good analytical reviews', huh?
Exactly what do you have in mind? Cause I don't even understand what I just saw, let alone have the ability to critique it. Haha.

It was certainly... Strange.
Now, I'm not sure if you were deliberately trying to create a movie that would get 'WTF?' reactions, or if you were going for humour.
If it was humour, then, sorry, I didn't get it. I love flash animations with that sort of... unexpected, illogical humour in it, but I didn't feel this had it.
If it was supposed to be just flatout bizarre, it was a bold attempt, but I think you could get weirder with a bit more imagination. I love Cyriaks animations and stuff, he's the master of WTF.

Now, audio-wise, given it was primarily a music video. Eh, it was sort of funky, but it felt like the same rhythm over and over. I can't compose to save myself, but some more variety as the animation progressed and got more wild with the camera shake would've been great, or something to that effect.


There's clearly been a fair bit of effort in this, and the movie is certainly both a little amusing, and a little odd, but if this level is supposed to be taken so seriously you want critiques.. Then I think you'll need to try getting alot more bizarre.

And I chuckled at 'spoons are the new knife' or something like that at the end. I thought that was quite funny.


EDIT - plz ply mai lvlz hurp durp!1
2011-10-08 22:50:00

Author:
Ostler5000
Posts: 1017


So, I just watched your movie...

It's really random and sometimes it's actually quite funny!
The visuals are good too, the potato-people and the...'childish-like drawings' undeline the randomness! :3
The music was good too but a little monotonous...

All in all a good and random level!
2011-10-09 11:11:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196


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