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Hello, I am KaoTheSpaceCow. I am new to this site (so I hope I am making this post correctly) and I am fairly new to making levels as well. Breaking Free is my first real level that I put time into. I am definitely aware of certain things I need to improve on but I am still open to any type of feedback of course. I do plan on fleshing out the story in the second level and improving on how the story gets told. I am still trying to figure out the best way to use most of the tools so hopefully the more I mess around with it I'll get better. I'll F4F as much as I can. http://lbp.me/v/6cen6x

2011-09-18 22:35:00 Author: Unknown User

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Have queued your level and will give it a go next time I'm on, quite excited it's always a great experience playing someones first level.

2011-09-19 02:21:00 Author: shotgun_69 Posts: 157

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you did a great job on this level, i loved your attention to camera angles. the texture in the level was really great!

2011-09-20 04:23:00 Author: Unknown User

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It's jolly good, especially if it's your first time making a level. Those first jumps are a bit extreme for the average player though. I just made my first one too, please check it out: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=63559-The-Abandoned-Mine

2011-09-20 21:44:00 Author: SnipySev Posts: 2452

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I got your level queued. Based on the feedback, it sounds like a real good level. I'll leave feedback asap. If you could check out my level https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=62439-Chip-s-Challenge

2011-09-21 04:21:00 Author: Greensmurfy Posts: 300

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I'll play those two levels as soon as I finish studying.

2011-09-21 04:25:00 Author: Unknown User

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Just finished your level and it is very nice. It's way better than my first level. What I liked -The atmosphere, textures, and decorations were spot on. - The story was great. - I enjoyed jumping out the window and into the water. - I liked that there was more light when I broke the window. - It was a good idea to free the sackbots at the start. Some problems I found -At the start, I accidentally jumped into the sackbots jail cell and couldn't get out. When I reset using the pop-it, it brought me back to the title screen. - Jumping over the bridges was a bit hard. The fire balls were dropping down too fast and I got passed it more by luck than skill. Those were the two things that jumped out at me that could use some work. Other than that, very good level.

2011-09-21 22:00:00 Author: Greensmurfy Posts: 300

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Hey KaoTheSpaceCow, i have queued your level and i shall play it tommorrow, giving feedback after Please could you return the favour by trying my newest level: Madness Uncaged! https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=63440-Madness-Uncaged!

2011-09-21 22:31:00 Author: Unknown User

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Thanks for the feedback guys. I've made some changes such as the jumps being a bit easier and the falling rocks. Hopefully it should be less frustrating but still a challenge. Also I fixed the problem with jumping into the cells with the other sackbots. It happened when you grabbed onto to them, thus pulling yourself in. I managed to catch up on everyone's requests as well.

2011-09-22 05:42:00 Author: Unknown User

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All i can say is: Why isn't this on the cool pages? It's excellent! The amount of detail put into this is ALOT and i mean it! The thermometer must be full to the top? The level could maybe be improved by maybe shortening the start by a second and when you pull the switch at the cages, there maybe could be a hole in the wall that opens so you can drop down to the floor below? But other than that, i don't think there is anything other bad about it! Well done and keep publishing! I'd like to see more!

2011-09-22 16:49:00 Author: Unknown User

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