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Me and RyanB_HD have this idea, it is about a man called Cookie and a woman called Creme (names may change). They live in a world similar to the real world. Cookie and Creme are walking down Sweet Street with there son when the son wants a chocolate bar. they turn and enter a stereotypic sweet shop. As they walk in their son wanders of to look at the sweets, moments later there is a loud crash. he had knocked over a tower of glass jars. Miraculously he was unharmed. the shop keeper appears at his desk and starts shouting at Cookie, Creme and their son. he demands that they pay for the damage, but Cookie and Creme refuse to do so as the keeper had been so rude to them, and exclaim the jar was in a stupid place. The Shop keeper mutters "You'll regret saying that." he draws a long staff from under the sweet cabinet, "i'll curse this world for what you have done, and everyone will blame YOU!" The staff creates a strong blinding light, sweets fly around, violent shaking begins. Title runs with the shake. You are then able to select your character, either Cookie, the man with numerous weapons, or Creme, the female with charm. In the next cutscene, Cookie and Creme wake up, eyes blaring from the light that once emmited from the staff. It turns out that the old man was going to create earthquakes around the world and destroy the littlebigplanet, but some of the sweets that had been knocked over had gotten infused with the magic, and now the world had been turned into a world of sweets. The shop owner, who was now very angry, blames the child for whats happened, he grabs the child and Cookie charges at the shop owner. before he even reaches him, the owner casts another spell which turns Cookie into a pink fluffy creature. his weapons are lost! The Shop keeper then flips over the parents and runs out of the door. So the adventure of Cookie and Creme begins! Well, the reason I've posted this is because I'd like feedback, so what do you think? Good? Bad? Something you would change? leave your thoughts below. Thanks

2011-09-09 22:43:00 Author: keanine Posts: 114

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