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Yellow & Green.

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Yellow & Green.valmassoi
http://i1233.photobucket.com/albums/ff393/valmassoilbpc/Yellow%20n%20Green/IMG_4866.jpgAfter a nasty fall while mountain climbing, Sackboy finds himself stuck in a deep valley. The only way out is a trip through the bumpy route.
Well, I finally got this one out. It wasn't a fun one to make, nearly every 'contraption' I made broke and it got really frustrating. It's definitely not my best work :/ But I wanted to publish this one so I could get working on my next level which will definitely be better.

Some minor hiccups to be on the lookout for: lag on bubbles, weird launchers, and screwy dialogue at the end. I just wanted to point these out so you all know I'm aware of them lol.

This level takes place before A Bubbly Garden and was originally called Green & Yellow. But I found that lil' Wayne has a song called that so....

Not really looking for oodles of feedback, but it's still encouraged

http://i1233.photobucket.com/albums/ff393/valmassoilbpc/Yellow%20n%20Green/IMG_4866.jpg
http://i1233.photobucket.com/albums/ff393/valmassoilbpc/Yellow%20n%20Green/IMG_4869.jpg
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2011-09-09 02:51:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


Nicely done, now, off to play this level.2011-09-09 02:58:00

Author:
Silver39
Posts: 1703


Aaaaaaaand the originality of the name of my upcoming level, 'Green!' goes back with 138%.

Looking forward to play once I have time. which is over ten hours or sumthing.
2011-09-09 06:21:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


PLEASE! Do not spotlight it by yourself
Play level SOON!!!
2011-09-09 12:55:00

Author:
doggy97
Posts: 964


PLEASE! Do not spotlight it by yourself

Do you really think spotlighters can spotlight themselves?
2011-09-09 15:05:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


A short review from me.

The Goods:
- Great visuals and corner editing
- Good choice of music
- VelcroJonze reference

The Bad:
- The level was TOO short
- The spikes by the part with those moving rocks should be glued to something
- The switch looked weird. It was like glitched...

The Most Confusing:
- The guy at the end xD

Overall Rating: :star::star::star::star: (Too short. C'mon I know you can make it better)
2011-09-09 15:50:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378


Yah, spotlighters that release one of their levels can kinda make a recommendation on it, but they don't get to give an actual vote/verdict.

Good work Val, the level was very fun, and I liked that material choice. Shame it was so glitchy in Create, that always holds back the level. Sam stuff happened to my Logic Pack level. Can't wait for your next level!
2011-09-10 00:03:00

Author:
Ricky-III
Posts: 732


ahhh does this have to do with the youtube sensation green and yellow by any chance lol2011-09-10 00:15:00

Author:
Unknown User


PLEASE! Do not spotlight it by yourself
Play level SOON!!!

haha no. I actually don't think I deserve a spotlight for this one.....


A short review from me.

The Goods:
- Great visuals and corner editing
- Good choice of music
- VelcroJonze reference

The Bad:
- The level was TOO short
- The spikes by the part with those moving rocks should be glued to something
- The switch looked weird. It was like glitched...

The Most Confusing:
- The guy at the end xD

Overall Rating: :star::star::star::star: (Too short. C'mon I know you can make it better)

I'm really surprised you even like the visuals lol. The level is too short, I know :/ I really wanted to glue those spikes, but every time I glued those, a cute animal would die, so I didn't. The switch was indeed glitched! I tried ungluing it, but I got a red screen 0__o So I tried again and my PSP just crashed. I was hoping the guy wouldn't be confusing at the end D: Maybe it'd make more sense if you read the description (i hope).


Good work Val, the level was very fun, and I liked that material choice. Shame it was so glitchy in Create, that always holds back the level. Sam stuff happened to my Logic Pack level. Can't wait for your next level!

I'm surprised you liked it Ricky! By looking what I've said before I'm obviously not very proud of it
2011-09-10 01:09:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


Pretty fun level Val, but I agree it could be longer...2011-09-10 19:01:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


Okay, feedback time.

Awesome Stuff:
-Visuals were alright
-Some of the dialogue made me laugh my A$$ off.
-Challenging platforming

Stuff That Needs To Be Sent To The Void:
-Y U so short?
-Theeeere wasss sommme lllag
-*Boing* one of your launchers killed me

Stuff That Was Strange,Yet Awesome:
-A new kinda switch, place here, use there.

The Rating:
Even tho random launchers killed me outta nothing and the level should be longer,
I had fun playing it a few times for that it gets:
:star::star::star::star::star:

@Val-: BTW, nice new avi, strange to see you without green, its like me without Voids.

@Schark-: Aced it before you, BAM!
2011-09-11 00:36:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


@Schark-: Aced it before you, BAM!
Yeah... couldn't find the bubble emitter before, but now I'm also on the 1st place.^^
2011-09-11 08:29:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378


Yeah... couldn't find the bubble emitter before, but now I'm also on the 1st place.^^

What!? I found it on my first try. :lawl:
2011-09-11 09:48:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


You might be wondering why I've been less active lately. Well, I've been sick for a few weeks now. I'll play this level as soon as possible.

EDIT: Just played it.

:star: :star: :star: :star: :star: and a <3

It was short, but still an excellent level.
2011-09-11 15:52:00

Author:
ConverseFox
Posts: 2333


hmm, interesting ... by the screenshots it looks great. i'll test it in a moment

EDIT!:Well, I just downloaded the level and...
I really liked their environment, it looks very nice. I liked the difficulty spikes, good! The only bad thing was that it is a little short, but I like your work, well done!

I give you :star::star::star::star::star: + <3
2011-09-12 22:24:00

Author:
Pulparindo15
Posts: 334


Gratz on the nod.
(I know you aren't proud of this level, that's why I posted that. /Evil)
2011-09-18 19:19:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Just Played this.

@Val: Brilliant at most parts but felt too short and I Know this Isn't your Best.

So only......

:star::star::star::star:

@Nys: BAM!!! Top of the Leaderboard
2011-09-19 18:13:00

Author:
butter-kicker
Posts: 1061


Higher than me, or my score isn't showing up?2011-09-19 19:26:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Great level, BUT too short as my review :
GOOD: Visual, Outlook and Inprusiblity!
Bad: I got away from rock :J "...Succesful Escape!..." (No! This doesn't mean that IT COULD BE happen to anyone without trying!)

:star::star::star::star::star: + <3
Great Level agin from Valmassoi!
2011-09-22 14:48:00

Author:
doggy97
Posts: 964


I really liked the choice of texture for the walls, it felt very finely woven together and nice on the eyes. And the spikes were definitely a threat to my not-as-hardcore platforming skills. >.>

You've already mentioned any buggy issues I noticed. It was a shame the level couldn't have had more to it, but it sounds like your heart wasn't fully in it after so much trouble. I hope you'll have a better time with the one you're working on next.

:star::star::star::star:
2011-09-27 12:03:00

Author:
Unknown User


Sorry for really late feedback. The level was super fun and amazing! The visuals were really good and the whole level was outstanding! It was bit short, but overall it was an amazing experience. I rated the level :star::star::star::star::star: and <3. I hope you keep creating more awesome, amazing, outstanding levels!2011-10-03 17:24:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


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