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X-MEN THE MOVIE by XCO http://lbp.me/v/5290p-/reviews X-MEN THE MOVIE by XCO http://lbp.me/v/5290p- X-MEN THE MOVIE by XCO (The best Movie Ever made on LBP ?) http://lbp.me/v/xco

2011-09-05 22:58:00 Author: Unknown User

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Notes: You really captured the feel of the comic: cast of thousands, corny dialogue, and so on. But I think you should proofread ALL of your speech balloons, and try using punctuation and spacing instead of capitalization. Like this example: Before: PROFESSOR X: "Oh My HaHa NowNow Children..." AfterROFESSOR X: "Oh, my... *chuckles* Now, now, children..." See what I did there? People in personal relationships in X-Men don't use call signs to refer to each other. Pretty much everyone calls Storm "Ororo" outside of combat. Gambit is "Remy". Logan calls younger girls "punkin". Use the internet to pick these other names up...Jubilee isn't "Jubilee" to her parents, is she? I really liked the alternate costumes. Try painting Iron Man pieces purple, then using those for the sentinels.

2011-09-10 14:56:00 Author: coyote_blue Posts: 422

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