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Overkill trailer level

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Hello,

Please watch this and F4F. This is my first time using movie cameras so I hope you like it.
http://lbp.me/v/5nj77z
2011-08-25 19:46:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hey, got it queued, and expect to try it out soon.
I am also working on the beginning of my series of levels, and have this level finished for now, but seeking more feedback:
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=62094-A-Quest-for-Stratta-Various

Thanks,
Alismadia
2011-08-26 06:26:00

Author:
Alismadia
Posts: 77


Your movie cameras are working well, but I'm more interested in the subject.

You seem to be advertising a platformer level, and not a story one. If you want to showcase your platforming, consider turning the lights up a little bit, and pan the camera through the obstacles so people can see what to expect from your level. The way you have the trailer laid out now, all I can guess is that the level will catch fire as you run through it.
2011-08-26 14:36:00

Author:
coyote_blue
Posts: 422


Your movie cameras are working well, but I'm more interested in the subject.

You seem to be advertising a platformer level, and not a story one. If you want to showcase your platforming, consider turning the lights up a little bit, and pan the camera through the obstacles so people can see what to expect from your level. The way you have the trailer laid out now, all I can guess is that the level will catch fire as you run through it.

Yeah well it was mean't to be kinda mysterious and just the show the main character and one of the enemies. Also a test to see if i needed to improve the movie cameras particularly for when i do cut scenes in my levels.

Thanks for the feedback
2011-08-26 17:32:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hey, that's cool for a teaser. If you're planning on having dialogue in the level, adding some in here would be a good idea. Are you using a sequencer, or stringing game cams together?2011-08-26 18:51:00

Author:
coyote_blue
Posts: 422


Hey, that's cool for a teaser. If you're planning on having dialogue in the level, adding some in here would be a good idea. Are you using a sequencer, or stringing game cams together?

Yeah I may try and add some dialogue and I did string movie cameras together for it.
2011-08-26 21:23:00

Author:
Unknown User


I heartily recommend this reference material.
http://www.youtube.com/user/LBPlanetorials#p/u/15/s4UaPCFkfTM
2011-08-26 23:06:00

Author:
coyote_blue
Posts: 422


I heartily recommend this reference material.
http://www.youtube.com/user/LBPlanetorials#p/u/15/s4UaPCFkfTM

That was really helpful just what i needed thanks for recommending it to me
2011-08-26 23:40:00

Author:
Unknown User


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