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Crystal Adventure : The day it all began

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http://oi55.tinypic.com/33ufslk.jpg

After months of work i finely published the series featuring 3 Levels.
1.Crystal Adventure : The day it all began
2.Crystal Adventure : The Hidden Treasure Quest
3.Crystal Adventure : The Hidden Treasure Quest Part 2

Story
A lucky old man find a mysterious map, bored, he start traveling to find where the map leads. After around a month, the old man seems to have found something. A dark enchanted cave. It's too dark to go there but he remember he had a torch somewhere...After finding it, the old man finely walks in. Fascinated by the water, the old man already felt the treasure. Suddenly, a weird falling noise attract all his attention, what is it?.....

Credits
Fading_Monkey for the music on Crystal Adventure : The Hidden Treasure Quest.
Rily-Robo For all the voice acting.

Pictures

http://id.lbp.me/img/ft/40d732610a67b53a6c67af0fca29652b5513fb31.jpg
http://i4.lbp.me/img/ft/3b45df4220f64691ef9dbe53fd9c0b3b814902b7.jpg
http://ia.lbp.me/img/ft/b9a319b699c14958527a88e3d8815e80bbd08dd4.jpg
http://if.lbp.me/img/ft/19fa10883fa65752b7160ee9b6337d7b994ae600.jpg
http://i4.lbp.me/img/ft/724d277d89509893a0202bc0dafe0b0061556fa7.jpg

Reviews and feedback are really appreciated.
http://lbp.me/v/5kh5zj

**I'll give feedback once yours is posted**
2011-08-23 23:22:00

Author:
Sport_dude
Posts: 622


That looks excellent! Queued it up! 2011-08-24 10:18:00

Author:
Oddmania
Posts: 1305


queued. looks great.

F4F: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=61939-Space-Station-A.I-(BETA)
2011-08-24 10:22:00

Author:
wolfy_616
Posts: 202


Hey I like caves, in fact my 1st level published is a cave, so I'll definitely do F4F with this one. It looks great.

If you could do F4F on my Caverns of the Lost, that would be great and I'll do like wise. You can post your feedback on the link here: Caverns of the Lost F4F (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=62046-Caverns-of-the-Lost).

UPDATE: May not be able to play until the weekend.
2011-08-24 11:25:00

Author:
LittleBigDes
Posts: 920


Will do, thanks for playing.2011-08-24 20:18:00

Author:
Sport_dude
Posts: 622


I have it queued! Looks good! Heres my level: http://lbp.me/v/4wjqx-2011-08-24 20:38:00

Author:
Unknown User


Adding to queue.

https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=62121-The-Chase-(Gardens)
2011-08-24 21:57:00

Author:
FEAR
Posts: 337


@FEAR

Can you give feedback, that way i will do the same type of work on your level. Just saying added to queue and linking me to your level isn't really appreciated but of course thanks for playing.
2011-08-24 22:12:00

Author:
Sport_dude
Posts: 622


@FEAR

Can you give feedback, that way i will do the same type of work on your level. Just saying added to queue and linking me to your level isn't really appreciated but of course thanks for playing.

Actually, I can't play right now, but I will promise to play your level and give feedback, okay? If it makes you feel any better, don't even play my level until I played yours and have given feedback.
2011-08-24 22:16:00

Author:
FEAR
Posts: 337


No it's okays i'll play it, the F4F system mean that you leave feedback and i'll do the same to your linked level. Thanks for playing!2011-08-24 23:26:00

Author:
Sport_dude
Posts: 622


WTH!!! Me and a group of guys are currently making a series named this, lolz
Currently still in brainstorming...

Ill try it though, looks pretty good...

Story better not be the same as ours... LOlZ...
2011-08-26 21:12:00

Author:
BonBonBoi
Posts: 246


That's a very colorful level you made.

VISUALS:
The lighting, decoration usage, and materials are great, and the intro movie has great cinematics and sackbots.

SOUND:
Great custom music in part 1, voice acting, and music choices.

GAMEPLAY:
The platforming is quite clever in part 1, and the boss battle in part 2 is awesome. However, I think the changing checkpoints during the boss battle is a bad idea (or you must have forgotten to tweak that).

OVERALL:
The series is a blast. A yay to all levels and a heart to part 1.

F4F Cybernetic Adventures Zeta
2011-08-27 02:40:00

Author:
JustinArt
Posts: 1314


Thanks a lot Justin, the problem is: There's no middle, if i put the checkpoint on only 1 spot it will favor 1 crystal. But i'll take i look what i can do.

Can you leave link of your level?


WTH!!! Me and a group of guys are currently making a series named this, lolz
Currently still in brainstorming...

Ill try it though, looks pretty good...

Story better not be the same as ours... LOlZ...

Lol i don't think it's the same...hope not xD.
2011-08-27 03:30:00

Author:
Sport_dude
Posts: 622


Well, like I said, we have been brainstorming throughout the summer (vactions ect.) and most of our team have been gone for awhile...

Before, I play yours, what is it about?

Ours is a post-apocalipstic world, powered by these magical and powerful crystals scattered around the world. And our hero has to travel with his gang of fighters to get them.

It is a aligment choice level... (Choose good or bad like Infamous)
2011-08-27 19:15:00

Author:
BonBonBoi
Posts: 246


It's not the same .2011-08-30 22:06:00

Author:
Sport_dude
Posts: 622


That's a very colorful level you made.

VISUALS:
The lighting, decoration usage, and materials are great, and the intro movie has great cinematics and sackbots.

SOUND:
Great custom music in part 1, voice acting, and music choices.

GAMEPLAY:
The platforming is quite clever in part 1, and the boss battle in part 2 is awesome. However, I think the changing checkpoints during the boss battle is a bad idea (or you must have forgotten to tweak that).

OVERALL:
The series is a blast. A yay to all levels and a heart to part 1.

F4F Cybernetic Adventures Zeta

I played your level recently and I must say I agree with everything quoted above. I also left some feedback in a review. Excellent opening scene, well put together & thought out. Along with a nice 1st person view & details. Very impressive.

Also, you can call me stupid but I really could not tell at this part that there was a hole in the back layer behind me to go through to get over to the ledge on the right, here in the picture. It's covered by scenery/decorations:

http://i8.lbp.me/img/fl/af8d0fe72bb6806d90dad4e125a63495ab9606e1.jpg

So you may want to open it up a bit or make it more obvious as I thought I was lost or had missed something. I see from my activity list that you've played my level. Thanks for playing, from the 'yay' I'm glad you liked it. You can leave some feedback on my link in my signature.
2011-08-31 10:39:00

Author:
LittleBigDes
Posts: 920


Played it, and my thoughts:
-The intro movie was really well done, fantastic use of 3d layers and first person camera, loved the ladder climbing
-Only problem though, it was a bit hard to hear sometimes. Maybe add magic mouths to narrate?
-The part when my sackboy dropped in made me lol, great way of putting your audience in the adventure without making up some cheesy story straight to the point , loved it.

Unfortunetly I could only play the first part of the main level because my level link wouldn't work :/ Just black screened.
But my thoughts:
-Scenery was breathtaking, multi-layered, really felt like a sprawling cave. Colours contrasted very well, the blues worked well with the dark stone.
-Collectables , great feature I actually felt like i was collecting these things for that old man
-Gameplay, very challenging but I found the use of grapple a bit repetitive, (at least in the first part , sory if it is different later) and as I said, the collectables made it really fun , and I actually found myself going after them really well done.
Overall- Great gameplay? Straight-to-the-point story? Fantastic visuals? Makes this level an absolute gem and I'm really sad to see it have so little plays. But don't get me started on that stuff on the cool pages atm
2011-08-31 21:19:00

Author:
onaga666
Posts: 293


I really enjoyed it. Very well done.2011-08-31 23:45:00

Author:
Lady_Luck__777
Posts: 3458


Thanks for the reviews, LittleBigDes reviewed your level.
Onaga666, Queued your level.
2011-09-01 22:03:00

Author:
Sport_dude
Posts: 622


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