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Narbardia's Tale

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Its my new story for LBP2,I would appreciate it you all would play it and tell me what you think.It took a while to make and I put a lot of hard in it. I would also appreciate more if I got at least 50 plays,that will make me one step closer to my platuim trophy. I'll play your level(s) if you want me to just comment my profile Thanks

http://lbp.me/v/03e691

i have republished the intro & chapter 1 i have made quite a few changes if you have any problems plz contact me via LBP2 profile(NOT my PSN) and i'll fix the problem
now i have finish working on the second chapter on the story*sighs* so much to do
i also want to thanks all my friends who helped me & everyone who played my level i appreciate the feedback

2011-08-05 20:30:00

Author:
Unknown User

i have made some changes to both the intro & 1st chapter of Narbardia's Tale,i will re publish them on august 15 sorry if there were any problems or bugs

2011-08-14 22:14:00

Author:
Unknown User

How did I miss this? Got it queued. Oh and if you could, please no double posting. Use the edit button on the OP (original post) Thanks.

I played last night and thought it was good. Nice design and sackbot acting. Did I miss something though? Is there a playable part?

I went and looked again and there is indeed a playable part. It was good but I felt it could be better. The level while clean looking, seemed a bit empty.
Maybe add some deco that would fit the theme of the level.

Getting the prisoners out was a bit easy. The ones on the top just had a big red button to jump on. Maybe make it where you have to find a key or solve some sort of small puzzle to obtain the key. Maybe it takes three switches to open the doors?

when you go to the side of the prison, you can see into open air. Is it a floating prison? I would extend the wall beyond the players view

try and hide this light http://if.lbp.me/img/ft/c3f2e66ec001c93c31f856b5e744b0f95351e7e6.jpg

also, when placing powerups there is no need to put them two and three wide. it's unsightly.

I hope you don't mind me being critical, just a few ideas to make a good level better. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

2011-08-15 01:14:00

Author:
biorogue

Posts: 8424

How did I miss this? Got it queued. Oh and if you could, please no double posting. Use the edit button on the OP (original post) Thanks.

I played last night and thought it was good. Nice design and sackbot acting. Did I miss something though? Is there a playable part?

I went and looked again and there is indeed a playable part. It was good but I felt it could be better. The level while clean looking, seemed a bit empty.
Maybe add some deco that would fit the theme of the level.

Getting the prisoners out was a bit easy. The ones on the top just had a big red button to jump on. Maybe make it where you have to find a key or solve some sort of small puzzle to obtain the key. Maybe it takes three switches to open the doors?

when you go to the side of the prison, you can see into open air. Is it a floating prison? I would extend the wall beyond the players view

try and hide this light http://if.lbp.me/img/ft/c3f2e66ec001c93c31f856b5e744b0f95351e7e6.jpg

also, when placing powerups there is no need to put them two and three wide. it's unsightly.

I hope you don't mind me being critical, just a few ideas to make a good level better. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
oh no,not at all i dont mind you being critical,i appreciate your honesty
a real review was exactly what i was looking for thank you. i'll take everything into consideration and continue to improve the level but as for now im working on chapter 2 so the improvments may take a while so when i have time i'll do it thank you very much

2011-08-17 22:59:00

Author:
Unknown User

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