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Just Desertsthe_puzzler312 The second level I have created. Welcome to the land of Just Desserts, populated by... just desserts. Travel around in this candy themed place. You will see and befriend desserts, and start on a journey that's just beginning. Hope you guys enjoy. Feedback is appreciated. [Sorry there is only one picture, my others wouldn't upload correctly]

2011-08-04 14:58:00 Author: Unknown User

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I should be completing story mode first but why don't give this a shot, feedback is coming up.

2011-08-04 15:55:00 Author: nysudyrgh Posts: 5482

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okay, I'll be looking forward to it.

2011-08-04 16:06:00 Author: Unknown User

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Will give this a try pal, sounds good.

2011-08-04 21:26:00 Author: JetArtois Posts: 232

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I will play it soon. Oh btw, you spelled "deserts" wrong. 2 "S" muchacho.

2011-08-05 01:34:00 Author: Random Posts: 673

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Yeah, knowing you are trying out adventure type levels I thought this was a desert adventure level . It's spelled dessert So, I'm glad that you listened to your feedback form your last level and used more corner editing. Because of this your visuals were much better than the last, and I could tell you've greatly improved. Some things to think about for the final level: First off I recognize you are a newer creator, and you are making much better things than I did when I first started out. So its not expected you pick all this up and perfect it in a week. Camera angles: I noticed a few spots in your level where you see the template background. It's not a big deal, but it can take the player mentally out of the level. Try fiddling wit this a bit, and it can greatly improve your level. Gameplay: No matter how good of visuals are in the level, it can become very boring without great gameplay! I know this beta was more about feedback on the visuals and such of the level, just be sure to include fun platofrming in the final level Not sure if this is how you wanted it, but try shrinking down your characters a bit; it gives a much nicer and more realistic feel to the level. Hope my feedback is of use, and good luck! If you could, in return for my feedback, give my intermediate logic pack a play if you havent yet? No f4f necessary, it'll probably be my last level on PSP

2011-08-05 01:58:00 Author: Ricky-III Posts: 732

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Yeah, knowing you are trying out adventure type levels I thought this was a desert adventure level . It's spelled dessert So, I'm glad that you listened to your feedback form your last level and used more corner editing. Because of this your visuals were much better than the last, and I could tell you've greatly improved. What I did with this one was more of a relaxed level, for this one I basically wanted to see if people would be up to the idea, and if so, then I would start making levels about it. This is more of an introduction to what "could be". And thank you. Some things to think about for the final level: First off I recognize you are a newer creator, and you are making much better things than I did when I first started out. So its not expected you pick all this up and perfect it in a week. Thank you again. Camera angles: I noticed a few spots in your level where you see the template background. It's not a big deal, but it can take the player mentally out of the level. Try fiddling wit this a bit, and it can greatly improve your level. Gameplay: No matter how good of visuals are in the level, it can become very boring without great gameplay! I know this beta was more about feedback on the visuals and such of the level, just be sure to include fun platofrming in the final level Not sure if this is how you wanted it, but try shrinking down your characters a bit; it gives a much nicer and more realistic feel to the level. Yeah, I noticed in the "Milky Mountain" area that you could see the blue, I'll make sure to fix that. I tried to put some platforming into this one just so I could keep your attention, and also collecting bubbles, but this one was more for an introduction, I have many story ideas, and those would have good gameplay, if people want to see those. I could shrink them a little, but I wanted the characters to seem larger than the sackboy. Hope my feedback is of use, and good luck! If you could, in return for my feedback, give my intermediate logic pack a play if you havent yet? No f4f necessary, it'll probably be my last level on PSP Your feedback was very helpful, and thank you. I'll give your level a play, I haven't yet. I look forward to playing it.

2011-08-05 15:58:00 Author: Unknown User

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