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you can now choose betwen two bosses

use the link under vvvvvvvvv the other one is locked

http://lbp.me/v/5ws-jw

if you find any glitches pls tell me.
thx for all help you have give me so far here on lbpc. what more can be done to my level?
heres a video of the level with the old boss:


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kWofJ_u5vBs&feature=related

http://lbp.me/v/5tby9q

http://i1.lbp.me/img/fl/361a0fc446af44229971a7947b0eabf647889bcc.jpg

http://i8.lbp.me/img/fl/db8fc1291fe9330bf43d3764aa518e2cfe2203f8.jpg

http://ib.lbp.me/img/fl/7fb7a3385e4ae170e9fb7ffbaece86b8a1ad3980.jpg

http://i3.lbp.me/img/fl/f33bcbe27e8e3c645785508207390d05268169ec.jpg

http://i7.lbp.me/img/fl/717408e1d33fcde74ffef0b576536e2bcc6b0854.jpg

http://i1.lbp.me/img/fl/39150e246b9d37902942dcf4170a233bd39c9a2f.jpg

http://i7.lbp.me/img/fl/49784b9344a328d36bf67fd8181dcd75f2aeb7c6.jpg

http://if.lbp.me/img/fl/f1fc1d67f8538430c176ef243009d0e24e857911.jpg

http://i4.lbp.me/img/fl/4e43c7237b0fe2cef3de1d71a072a0bca98080fc.jpg

http://id.lbp.me/img/fl/dbd58a0fadc95801fc42923c8368a654e796a787.jpg

http://ie.lbp.me/img/fl/22e86e79caf8359907fd4a99b8bdb931ad9b47cb.jpg

http://id.lbp.me/img/fl/8edbb45407369135df033c150af2e95981176e8c.jpg[video=youtube;kWofJ_u5vBs]		2011-08-02 16:02:00

Author:
Unknown User

sounds good, queuing now.2011-08-03 18:56:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424

hey, I tried to check this out... have you taken it down? I queued the 1st Mysterious adventure level so I'll check that out instead.2011-08-05 13:43:00

Author:
Mr_Fusion
Posts: 1799

Hello there, I'll try your level. I'm not looking for F4F though, so don't feel obliged

Well, I played (some) of your level, I say some as I had difficulty in knowing exactly what I was supposed to be doing. It felt a little bit cluttered (some slow down) and it wasn't clear where or what I was trying to achieve. Add to that the lighting was poor and needs addressing if you want to elevate this above other similar levels.

While I understand YOU know what you're trying to do, the player isn't privy your thought processes, this means players (who can find some amazing levels at the push of an X button) probably won't invest the time if its not clear whats going on.

These are, of course, my own opinions, and, while it may seem I'm being overly critical (it is a feedback thread after all) it doesn't mean your level was without its merits. You obviously have some good ideas going on, and it was certainly scenic it just lacked some refinement. Time will tell, but I think that with that time, you will be a pretty good creator.		2011-08-07 12:43:00

Author:
FourteenInchGaz
Posts: 110

I just finished playing and had fun with this level

The Cons:
*Some of the lights seemed too colorful and oversaturated (the yellow ones in the indoor section were really foggy)
*Some sections were really laggy because they were so detailed
*The boss glitched out and I couldn't finish the level

The Pros:
*Great balance of difficulty
*Very good looking and detailed level
*Nice music choices
*Good length (a lot of these detailed levels are usually too short unfortunately D:, thanks for making it 2 parts!)

I really enjoyed this level overall, but unfortunately I couldn't finish it because the both just vanished while I was fighting it and never reappeared out of its cave so I couldn't continue. The only other suggestions I have is to make some of the lights a little less foggy / colorful (mostly the yellow ones) and maybe cut down on some of the detail in future levels to avoid lag. Other than that the level was perfect, amazing job on it!

If you could take the time to play my music gallery I'd really appreciate it also: RPG Music Pack (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=56614-Enigmatic-Music-Pack)		2011-08-15 19:10:00

Author:
roflwaffle
Posts: 69

queued it...pics look amazing. will defo play this later today and report back.

F4F - https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=61717-Space-Station-A.I-(BETA)

check out my latest when u can		2011-08-17 09:42:00

Author:
wolfy_616
Posts: 202

Looks well done. I'll give it a go.2011-08-17 20:52:00

Author:
Unknown User

I'm playing it now.
The environments are breathtaking... It had a ethereal feel to both parts that I haven't seen for a while in LBP! The platforming is decent, although I did have trouble triggering the anti-grav to get around the spike tunnel (had to go left of the bounce pad then walk right to trigger it. It then sounded loud with the audio fx tweak (had to turn my speakers down-prob should set to 90% instead of 100%) Also it was hard at the beginning to jump across the pads (almost had to undecorate!) The gear was cool in part 1, but overall I just like gadding about these dreamy worlds you have here. Don't want to get all OCD on it, but it is very enjoyable...I'll give you that!

Oh- I just got stuck under the 3 layer arch somehow by the snail type boss thingy. I popped and it re-triggered an empty cutscene. Wasn't a fan of the boss tho... should tweak the ground to not grabbable and widen the camera a bit.		2011-08-18 01:28:00

Author:
Unknown User

queued up looks great to. i play itt when i get time today.

Looks like you lost track of which profile you were on for a moment there!		2011-08-19 17:00:00

Author:
FourteenInchGaz
Posts: 110

queued! looks great!

heres my level
http://lbp.me/v/4wr838		2011-08-19 19:44:00

Author:
YUBOY3
Posts: 116

My only suggestion for this level is add a checkpoint before the race in part 1. And for part 2 I would fix this one glitch I had: sometimes whenever the spike ball would hit the boss at the end the counter wouldn't recognize it as a hit. But other than that great level! 2011-08-24 19:00:00

Author:
Unknown User

Looks like a great level! Adding to queue right now.

Try my level and tell me what you think!
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=62121-The-Chase-(Gardens)		2011-08-24 22:06:00

Author:
FEAR
Posts: 337

Hey if you keep your F4F (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=61060-beyond-imagination&highlight=imagination) thread for this same exact level up to date and make changes according to feedback or reply to those that have left feedback on your F4F thread (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=61060-beyond-imagination&highlight=imagination) it should get you more attention and keep the level alive. It's kind of hard to follow when you've got two other posts the same.

Plus you've got some good feedback going on from others on your other post linked above, so take advantage of it.

UPDATE: Played it but didn't get to finish, but I'll try again and leave some proper feedback on your F4F post later.		2011-08-30 12:12:00

Author:
LittleBigDes
Posts: 920

I just played your level and it's great! It looks really good and the platforming is fun as well, not too easy and not too hard.

Just 4 things I noticed.
- At the start you can jump to the left and end up below the level in the water. May want to add an object there to block the way or just make sure you can't jump up there since it didn't look pretty down there.
- The 2nd part after the level link is a bit dark. Might be better if it's a bit less dark since I couldn't see where I had to go sometimes, also didn't see the moving blocks with the spikes the first time.
- At some parts of the level you can randomly fall down into the water and die. Usually sackboy changes to a different layer automatically but didn't happen here, don't know why. No big deal though, just annoying for someone who wants to ace the level.
- Some of the lights you used are a bit too bright, especially some yellow one (don't remember exactly where). Would look better if it was a bit less bright.

For the rest I didn't run into any problems and I really liked the level. I can see you spent quite some time on it and you did a really good job!


As for F4F, would be cool if you could try my level and leave some feedback. The Secret Temple of Elements (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=61708-The-Secret-Temple-of-Elements)		2011-08-30 16:00:00

Author:
Firehuntah
Posts: 75

hey, I tried to check this out... have you taken it down? I queued the 1st Mysterious adventure level so I'll check that out instead.



yes it was but now its up again. this level is much more better than mysterius adventure so try this one if you get any time


I just finished playing and had fun with this level

The Cons:
*Some of the lights seemed too colorful and oversaturated (the yellow ones in the indoor section were really foggy)
*Some sections were really laggy because they were so detailed
*The boss glitched out and I couldn't finish the level

The Pros:
*Great balance of difficulty
*Very good looking and detailed level
*Nice music choices
*Good length (a lot of these detailed levels are usually too short unfortunately D:, thanks for making it 2 parts!)

I really enjoyed this level overall, but unfortunately I couldn't finish it because the both just vanished while I was fighting it and never reappeared out of its cave so I couldn't continue. The only other suggestions I have is to make some of the lights a little less foggy / colorful (mostly the yellow ones) and maybe cut down on some of the detail in future levels to avoid lag. Other than that the level was perfect, amazing job on it!

If you could take the time to play my music gallery I'd really appreciate it also: RPG Music Pack (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=56614-Enigmatic-Music-Pack)

thx you very much! it helped me alot.

i have fixed the lights and the boss fight.

on my tv works the level just fine but i have cut down a little of the details so i hope its not laggy anymore.

i shull definitive try out your music gallery but i dont have the time today but hopfully i try it tomorrow.

thx again for your words. peace


My only suggestion for this level is add a checkpoint before the race in part 1. And for part 2 I would fix this one glitch I had: sometimes whenever the spike ball would hit the boss at the end the counter wouldn't recognize it as a hit. But other than that great level!

thx for the help checkpoint added and the boss problems are fixed.try it again if you get some time much more is fixed on the level also.peace


I'm playing it now.
The environments are breathtaking... It had a ethereal feel to both parts that I haven't seen for a while in LBP! The platforming is decent, although I did have trouble triggering the anti-grav to get around the spike tunnel (had to go left of the bounce pad then walk right to trigger it. It then sounded loud with the audio fx tweak (had to turn my speakers down-prob should set to 90% instead of 100%) Also it was hard at the beginning to jump across the pads (almost had to undecorate!) The gear was cool in part 1, but overall I just like gadding about these dreamy worlds you have here. Don't want to get all OCD on it, but it is very enjoyable...I'll give you that!

Oh- I just got stuck under the 3 layer arch somehow by the snail type boss thingy. I popped and it re-triggered an empty cutscene. Wasn't a fan of the boss tho... should tweak the ground to not grabbable and widen the camera a bit.


hi milton2x and thx for your help i have fix the bounse pad that sets the slomotion and tweaked down the sound now

the boss problems are also fixed.

thx again for your help. try it again if you find some time.peace


Hey if you keep your F4F (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=61060-beyond-imagination&highlight=imagination) thread for this same exact level up to date and make changes according to feedback or reply to those that have left feedback on your F4F thread (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=61060-beyond-imagination&highlight=imagination) it should get you more attention and keep the level alive. It's kind of hard to follow when you've got two other posts the same.

Plus you've got some good feedback going on from others on your other post linked above, so take advantage of it.

UPDATE: Played it but didn't get to finish, but I'll try again and leave some proper feedback on your F4F post later.


hi im have deleted the other posts or lbpc fixed that : ) going throu all post right now and fixing some of the problemes on the level. i have also played your level and left some good feedback on it. and Iam looking forward to your thoughts about my level.


I just played your level and it's great! It looks really good and the platforming is fun as well, not too easy and not too hard.

Just 4 things I noticed.
- At the start you can jump to the left and end up below the level in the water. May want to add an object there to block the way or just make sure you can't jump up there since it didn't look pretty down there.
- The 2nd part after the level link is a bit dark. Might be better if it's a bit less dark since I couldn't see where I had to go sometimes, also didn't see the moving blocks with the spikes the first time.
- At some parts of the level you can randomly fall down into the water and die. Usually sackboy changes to a different layer automatically but didn't happen here, don't know why. No big deal though, just annoying for someone who wants to ace the level.
- Some of the lights you used are a bit too bright, especially some yellow one (don't remember exactly where). Would look better if it was a bit less bright.

For the rest I didn't run into any problems and I really liked the level. I can see you spent quite some time on it and you did a really good job!


As for F4F, would be cool if you could try my level and leave some feedback. The Secret Temple of Elements (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=61708-The-Secret-Temple-of-Elements)



thx for your help i have fixed all things you told me and i think it turned up good. thx again for your kindness.

i have queed your level too ive play it as soon as i can.peace

for all that dont like the boss so much heres a link to same level w?th a funnier boss

http://lbp.me/v/5ws-jw

thanks for all help you have give me here on lbpc		2011-08-30 19:36:00

Author:
Unknown User

Hi, muleRR!

Great level! Excellent visuals and very fun and dynamic gameplay! I love it! It was really cool! And my respect to you design skills and imagination!

here is the video of your level:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kWofJ_u5vBs

From Russia with love,
Domik12		2011-09-02 16:10:00

Author:
Domik12
Posts: 838

Hmm you have two F4F posts for this level?! I played your first one but found two areas that actually made me quit so I never got the end. The gameplay I had was different to that in the video so I am now going to do my feedback on your newer F4F post on this level since I assume it's the more up to date one.2011-09-04 00:44:00

Author:
LittleBigDes
Posts: 920

Hi, muleRR!

Great level! Excellent visuals and very fun and dynamic gameplay! I love it! It was really cool! And my respect to you design skills and imagination!

here is the video of your level:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kWofJ_u5vBs

From Russia with love,
Domik12



thank you so much! i have try to record this one with diffrent cams but always turns up bad. so this one really makes me glad : )

can you record the other beyond imagination with the new boss too for me it shuld appreciates mucho

what can i do more to make this one better?		2011-09-06 13:47:00

Author:
Unknown User


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