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The Kupa tribe.

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This level is the start of the saga I'm working on. You will get the key for my confrontation level at the end. I appreciate feedbacks and comments. Thank you for your time.
http://lbp.me/v/ybsmtp
2011-07-29 21:59:00

Author:
Unknown User


Queued for next time 2011-07-30 03:42:00

Author:
Masseyf
Posts: 226


Tried it out and I think it had a pretty interesting theme. There were some challenging platforming as well.

Overall, I'd say it it was a decent level at best, but it could be improved by polishing the design (corner edit tool is your friend here) and increasing the length of the level.

If you got the time, would you mind checking my level too, and leaving some feedbacks on it?
Here it is:
Title: Sinner's Redemption
Thread: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=60154-Sinner-s-Redemption
Link: http://lbp.me/v/3hcswv
2011-07-30 04:16:00

Author:
romancrisis
Posts: 138


Thanks for the feedback!2011-08-01 00:00:00

Author:
Unknown User


Just recently played this level and here is my feedback:

This was a decent level. It could use improvements. A lot of the choppy corners can be corner edited for better presentation. Could use some decorations and stickers to spruce things up a bit. Also, focus your gameplay in the front most layer and leave the rest to show detail in the background. Instead of leaving all three layers open, close the unneeded ones with background and detail. This will greatly improve your level.

Overall, a good start. Really liked the the story and the level itself. With a few improvements, this could turn out to be a nice level.

Since you are doing F4F, please check out my newest level Neptunia. Let me know what you think, if you feel like it. Link is below.

https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=60269-Neptunia
2011-08-01 01:08:00

Author:
Garak101
Posts: 101


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