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Littlebigcave
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http://lbp.me/v/kipkorn This is my first level, its not very original but i think it is very funny. Play it and leave a comment so i know what to do better next time. And if you heart i heart you back. ( 1-2 player recommended) | 2011-07-27 17:02:00 Author: Unknown User ![]() |
Hi, Just played your level +Enjoyed some of the challenges, there was some cool use of water in this level + Great for a first level and good to see you're using a lot of the new tools! You could use even more tools though, i think you could have some fun with the creatinator! -The level is a bit sparse, put some theming in there to liven it up a bit Main thing is to keep making levels and they'll get better each time For F4F please could you play my snake game and leave me some comments https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=60164-Snake-v0.1 | 2011-07-27 23:27:00 Author: turnipeater ![]() Posts: 83 |
Thanks for the comment, your advice is very good. I am now working on al level with the controllinator wich is very original. And i will play some of your levels this evening. | 2011-07-28 10:36:00 Author: Unknown User ![]() |
As promised I'll give you feedback. Pros +It has platforming elements in it +Nice use of some of the tools like the water and grapple hook +Not bad for your first level +Had some close calls on some parts. Gotta love the thrill lol. Cons -Try not to use the floor of the level as much unless you have a good theme and detail to back it up. -I don't know whether there was no music or my sound on LBP2 was off. I played music in my headphones to kill the silence. Add music to your levels to get people in the right mood to play. -Some areas felt a little dry of gameplay. Also never put a closed gate next to the scoreboard. Rating: 5.5/10 You have the potential to make good levels from what I can see. Keep up the good work and never stop creating. ![]() | 2011-07-28 14:14:00 Author: siberian_ninja15 ![]() Posts: 444 |
I updated my level now. ------------------------------------- 1. I added music. 2. I fixed the bugs and glitches. When I am back of my vacation (15 august) I will make a new level. | 2011-07-28 16:05:00 Author: Unknown User ![]() |
Does anyone have more tips to make your level played alot? | 2011-07-28 19:32:00 Author: Unknown User ![]() |
Played it, was ok for a first level - better than a lot of the random things you can find anyway! Something which bothered me a lot is you only used 1 layer the entire level, it's a cornerstone feature of this "2D" platformer, so take the time to get more use out of them, lots of tuts out there, get watching and reading (as I am, I'm still very much learning too). And I wouldn't really ask for hearts, they become meaningless if your just throwing them around hoping to randomly get some back ![]() As for getting more plays, I'd love to know the secret too lol, apart from the obvious h4h and free blah blah copy levels. I think I've gotten most of my plays so far as a result of playing random ppl's levels and leaving appropriate feedback. Good luck and keep at it! | 2011-07-29 00:20:00 Author: Masseyf ![]() Posts: 226 |
Thanks for your advice | 2011-07-29 09:54:00 Author: Unknown User ![]() |
And do i have to make my next level a bit more challenging or just keep it as easy as this level is? | 2011-07-29 20:25:00 Author: Unknown User ![]() |
thank for the plays and and the comment you all gave me. this site is really helpfull. | 2011-08-01 20:29:00 Author: Unknown User ![]() |
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