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Littlebigcave

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http://lbp.me/v/kipkorn

This is my first level, its not very original but i think it is very funny. Play it and leave a comment so i know what to do better next time. And if you heart i heart you back. ( 1-2 player recommended)
2011-07-27 17:02:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hi, Just played your level

+Enjoyed some of the challenges, there was some cool use of water in this level
+ Great for a first level and good to see you're using a lot of the new tools! You could use even more tools though, i think you could have some fun with the creatinator!

-The level is a bit sparse, put some theming in there to liven it up a bit

Main thing is to keep making levels and they'll get better each time

For F4F please could you play my snake game and leave me some comments https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=60164-Snake-v0.1
2011-07-27 23:27:00

Author:
turnipeater
Posts: 83


Thanks for the comment, your advice is very good. I am now working on al level with the controllinator wich is very original. And i will play some of your levels this evening.2011-07-28 10:36:00

Author:
Unknown User


As promised I'll give you feedback.

Pros
+It has platforming elements in it
+Nice use of some of the tools like the water and grapple hook
+Not bad for your first level
+Had some close calls on some parts. Gotta love the thrill lol.

Cons
-Try not to use the floor of the level as much unless you have a good theme and detail to back it up.
-I don't know whether there was no music or my sound on LBP2 was off. I played music in my headphones to kill the silence. Add music to your levels to get people in the right mood to play.
-Some areas felt a little dry of gameplay. Also never put a closed gate next to the scoreboard.

Rating: 5.5/10

You have the potential to make good levels from what I can see. Keep up the good work and never stop creating.
2011-07-28 14:14:00

Author:
siberian_ninja15
Posts: 444


I updated my level now.
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1. I added music.
2. I fixed the bugs and glitches.

When I am back of my vacation (15 august) I will make a new level.
2011-07-28 16:05:00

Author:
Unknown User


Does anyone have more tips to make your level played alot?2011-07-28 19:32:00

Author:
Unknown User


Played it, was ok for a first level - better than a lot of the random things you can find anyway!

Something which bothered me a lot is you only used 1 layer the entire level, it's a cornerstone feature of this "2D" platformer, so take the time to get more use out of them, lots of tuts out there, get watching and reading (as I am, I'm still very much learning too).

And I wouldn't really ask for hearts, they become meaningless if your just throwing them around hoping to randomly get some back

As for getting more plays, I'd love to know the secret too lol, apart from the obvious h4h and free blah blah copy levels. I think I've gotten most of my plays so far as a result of playing random ppl's levels and leaving appropriate feedback. Good luck and keep at it!
2011-07-29 00:20:00

Author:
Masseyf
Posts: 226


Thanks for your advice2011-07-29 09:54:00

Author:
Unknown User


And do i have to make my next level a bit more challenging or just keep it as easy as this level is?2011-07-29 20:25:00

Author:
Unknown User


thank for the plays and and the comment you all gave me. this site is really helpfull.2011-08-01 20:29:00

Author:
Unknown User


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