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Sackboy Adventures - The keystone of Seth

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Changed title.2008-12-17 09:17:00

Author:
Senrir
Posts: 126


The idea you have for the level is great. And you have some really nice touches in it, like the incantation.

The incenrationmobile (for lack of a better name) takes off a bit too fast - it incinerated me before I could read the speech bubble. And there is a checkpoint in the sky above one of the buildings. I think it would be better to take it out, since you can't just walk across the electrified streets.

I love the multi-path way the bus ride works, though. Quite a surprise to end up in the clouds on the top path! And the house is quite clever. I am looking forward to seeing the other world.

Maybe turn down some of the lights on the scoreboard - my PS3 slowed down considerably there, and I'm guessing it is due to the lights.

And just an idea - maybe give some glows or something to signify at the moment you have been given the stone.
2008-12-17 22:36:00

Author:
Trystian
Posts: 59


The idea you have for the level is great. And you have some really nice touches in it, like the incantation.

The incenrationmobile (for lack of a better name) takes off a bit too fast - it incinerated me before I could read the speech bubble. And there is a checkpoint in the sky above one of the buildings. I think it would be better to take it out, since you can't just walk across the electrified streets.

I love the multi-path way the bus ride works, though. Quite a surprise to end up in the clouds on the top path! And the house is quite clever. I am looking forward to seeing the other world.

Maybe turn down some of the lights on the scoreboard - my PS3 slowed down considerably there, and I'm guessing it is due to the lights.

And just an idea - maybe give some glows or something to signify at the moment you have been given the stone.

Hmmm ... Thanks for the comments and advice.

Gonna follow your advice and set the inceneration mobile ( lol ... I got that word "incinerate" a series called Doctor who ) xD ... to set off a sec later .... think thats enough?

Oh and about the lights? Really slowing down? Mine doesnt >,< ... oh well ima try to tweak them off a bit then ^^" !

And that glow advice is superb ! Ima try to implement it xD.

Oh and
And there is a checkpoint in the sky above one of the buildings. I think it would be better to take it out, since you can't just walk across the electrified streets. ... I dont quite understand that one Care to clarify?

Ooooh and the new world will be a huge one ^^! Promise

Not even sure if my blueprint for Chapter 2 will fit the thermostat >,<"

2008-12-17 23:10:00

Author:
Senrir
Posts: 126


Very cool idea and all of the theming elements were very well done.2008-12-17 23:23:00

Author:
TheSpaceDood
Posts: 3


Very cool idea and all of the theming elements were very well done.

Thanks for playing the level.

Oh and more comments / advice are welcome. Thinking of enhancing the narration and the aesthetics next week.

Really busy atm on making aesthetics for Chapter 2 .
And Gawd ... PS Eye is killing me ... I like need 30 attempts to get 1 good sticker =,="
2008-12-20 01:19:00

Author:
Senrir
Posts: 126


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