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Sackboy's Little Big Adventure

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Hello to everyone on the forum's! I recently finished and published my new level "Sackboy's Little Big Adventure" and after all my work i'm not getting the plays i was hoping for, so i thought i would make a F4F post, inviting people to play my level and leave it a review, hearts and positive reviews are welcomed, and negative reviews too, just as long as you make them constructive, and give me something to work on, so i can continue to make the best levels i possibly can. In return for any reviews ill pop over to your world and check out some of your levels (try to give me one or two specific level to look out, as i cant play all 20 or however many levels you and review them all)
So i hope this post will give my level the plays i'm looking for, the feedback i'm looking forward too, and then i can give your levels the same, i look forward to hearing from any posters.
Feel free to also check out my other level "Sackboy's Grandest Adventure"

- TreeLicker
http://lbp.me/v/3pprbr
2011-07-22 20:18:00

Author:
Unknown User


Added to queque to play later. Would you mind to play some of my F4F levels? I'll give you feedback too.2011-07-22 20:21:00

Author:
ALEXhatena
Posts: 1110


Of course, will check some of yours out now.
Hey i wen't on your profile to find your levels, but i can't find them when searching for them in game! any advice on how to find them?
2011-07-22 20:26:00

Author:
Unknown User


Qeued it up
Once I finish my feedback would you giving my Wooden Works: Part 1 in my sig some feedback?

EDIT:

Ok, I just played your level and I underestimated you greatly! You have real talent in creating and your levels need WAY more attention.

Problems:
-After the fake scoreboard to the left there is a bounce that is not glued down andcould easily flip over not allowing for the player to complaete te level.
-Also after the fake scoreboard when I soar up into the air, I can't see the magic mouth, so I suggest you change the camera angle.
-After the unglued bounce with the 2 buttons which were also unglued, I had no idea what to do. Maybe the magic mouth said it but since I was unable to read it, I wasn't aware of what I had to do. (this is the part I'm talking about:
http://i2.lbp.me/img/fl/142d0c70c5e665023c7c7d513e2645535c2e8c11.jpg)

Other than those problems, I didn't encounter any other glitches/bugs.
Oh, and BTW try to stick to one theme, because I was confused whether I was in a wooden world, or a high tech world with objects from the game Portal

http://ia.lbp.me/img/fl/6bab3336b2b177e899ad58f7baad67ede20e4ed9.jpg

PS: Thanks for reviewing my level
2011-07-22 21:19:00

Author:
Crazed Creator
Posts: 177


got it in the queue2011-07-22 21:22:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


Crazed Creator - Wood Works II
I played your level, and to be honest, there wasn't anything really i didn't like about it, was well put together, and very artistic. A lot of cut scenes, but altogether necessary to help direct you through sugh a large level. i would give it a solid 10/10. Well done, and i hope you have as much fun on my level.
2011-07-22 21:55:00

Author:
Unknown User


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