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The Hospital

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You wake up in a abandoned hospital when you start hearing screams and crys. You must escape before it is to late!

Leave any feedback you think might be helpful in the comments or below and Thank You Again!
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2011-07-19 21:14:00

Author:
Unknown User


I played this one as I'm a sucker for these horror themed levels.

And I thought the level was fun, except near the beginning where you had to pull some levers. That part was confusing as I had access to many of the levers already and as I pulled each one of them, I didn't know what the other levers did. But luckily, I was able to get out from that part and finished the level.

The ending was a nice surprise for me, but I wished you fleshed out more of that ghostly apparition.

If you have the time, would you mind testing out mine? I would greatly appreciate any feedbacks on it.
Here it is: Sinner's Redemption (http://lbp.me/v/3hcswv)
2011-07-20 04:44:00

Author:
romancrisis
Posts: 138


It had a nice theme to it, but you could tell you did not use the grid. The grid is such a GREAT tool, especially for that little puzzle you had. I've got to admit, that part wasn't very "hospital" themed. Also, what appeared to be the stairs were all slanted and HUGE steps. Perhaps if they looked more like real stairs, the setting would have looked more like a hospital. I loved the beginning of it though!2011-07-20 04:55:00

Author:
xRystar
Posts: 39


Wow, sounds cool! I think i'll play it. In the meantime, can you try my Turret Shooting Survival:
http://lbp.me/v/1t3g5r Thanks.
2011-07-20 13:27:00

Author:
TheGoldenFlash
Posts: 209


Haha well I will keep it in mind i used the grid tool then used corner editing cuz I thought they looked a bit more twisted Ill be sure to fix them when i get the chance2011-07-20 20:38:00

Author:
Unknown User


I played this one as I'm a sucker for these horror themed levels.

And I thought the level was fun, except near the beginning where you had to pull some levers. That part was confusing as I had access to many of the levers already and as I pulled each one of them, I didn't know what the other levers did. But luckily, I was able to get out from that part and finished the level.

The ending was a nice surprise for me, but I wished you fleshed out more of that ghostly apparition.

If you have the time, would you mind testing out mine? I would greatly appreciate any feedbacks on it.
Here it is: Sinner's Redemption (http://lbp.me/v/3hcswv)


There were 2 levers in the whole thing...
2011-07-20 21:16:00

Author:
Unknown User


It's a good level, but I didn't see the hospital in it either. You could add some props like beds, IV stands and maybe color it white too. There was one section where you are "zip lining" down an incline near the end. I hung on when it hit the bottom, not knowing what was going to be down there. I had enough momentum built up that I swung up and over the piece that was holding the zipline up. That was unexpected, but fun. The ending was cool. I had figured I had made it out alive when all of a sudden that ghoul popped up in the headlights and did me in. Nice finish with the clouds and the use of the floaty stuff.2011-07-21 02:09:00

Author:
CommToad
Posts: 82


Played on LBP1

Had trouble falling down the hole after pulling the white block out. Don't what that white switch does in the beginning, but I never pulled it. Didn't know how to get to it.

Would look better if the doors were a different material.

Screaming woman under the light was a nice touch

The maze seems really out of place with the theme of the level.

Th end was awesome! Won't spoil it, but the end made the level worth playing on it's own

If you would like to return the feedback, try my level: Terminator: Future Wars (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=59882-Terminator-Future-Wars)
2011-07-23 09:03:00

Author:
Unknown User


I liked the whole idea, but maybe you could consider the materials a bit, and the puzzles to go with the theme, a wood made brown hospital with a jetpack maze was not much of a hospital. Maybe some beds, more white, dead people on the floor and that you enter some rooms with people beind tortured and such.

If you'd like to give me feedback try my Morph Temple level (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=60412-Morph-Temple)
2011-07-23 22:04:00

Author:
Unknown User


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