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Space Break (Prologue)

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Hello there! I have recently finished a level I was making for a friend: Space Break (Prologue). It's the first film I've ever done, but I would like to see what people think.

And one more thing... This is published under his name, but I did make it. This is just for his level series.

Here are some images, if you'd like to see what it looks like. Can't figure out how to get better quality. There are many more images uploaded to the level itself, although the quality is even worse then these! You can barely make them out, so I figured it wouldn't benefit you guys.

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PS: I hope the images and LBP.me link makes through... If not, you should at least get the image links, and here's the LBP.me link, just in case...

http://lbp.me/v/268fpt

Also... This is my first F4F I've ever done. I know what to do, but if I forgot to mention anything, sorry. D:
http://lbp.me/v/268fpt
2011-07-13 05:14:00

Author:
Jedibrad
Posts: 85


queued it. will report back later

https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=59641-the-matrix-has-sackboy...
2011-07-13 12:29:00

Author:
wolfy_616
Posts: 202


Hm... Well, I couldn't read anything against bumping, but I'm still not sure....

Considering no one looks at the 3rd pages, it's my only hope.

^Bump!^

2011-07-15 17:08:00

Author:
Jedibrad
Posts: 85


it caught my intrest to want see what happens to the crew.
see my level https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=59988-New-3D-train-test-video-in-thread
2011-07-15 19:47:00

Author:
TSFRJ
Posts: 249


I'll check it out soon! 2011-07-15 20:55:00

Author:
Jedibrad
Posts: 85


Here is the feedback while you're playing my BLOCKS level . Good prologue, great use the tools of LBP2 to create a movie with rythm, camera angles and a nice story. It has the flaws every prologue movie have : once it's finished you want to play the actual level !

Great work overall !
2011-07-15 21:18:00

Author:
Slurm
Posts: 262


Gonna check it out and edit this post afterwards.

Check out my level, please?
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=59923-FFVII-Cloud-Sackbot-Demo!

EDIT: Played the level.

It was pretty good. The dialogue was a bit draggy, at least for me, but I do read quickly. @_@
Anyway, I also felt that the expression on the commander(aka Terrified, talking to player near the end) was a bit over the top. He seems like someone who should be in a bit more control of himself, I'd guess.

Keep up the good work!
2011-07-15 21:37:00

Author:
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