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Papergame

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Papergamenysudyrgh
Hai sackfolks,
You remember that minigame I once made ?
I remade it, added stickers, make it go from slow to fast
and added a new Point system.
Heeeeeeeeeeeeeere is:
Papergame, teh special edition.

Have fun playing this.
2011-07-03 11:25:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Oh this was my favorite level of yours when you first came to the site. I'll gladly check this one out. 2011-07-03 15:37:00

Author:
WoodburyRaider
Posts: 1651


First thing I noticed was how much purdier it is than the original.
Its fun and I guess it starts out slower.
I'm just not sure if I like the new point system as much.
It sends so many score bubbles to the void.

One of the best survival challenges I have ever played: :star::star::star::star::star:

I won't be putting up a fight for the top score yet as I just got a fully bombed profile.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Hakumai/Break_Time_To_Celebrate_Onam-Onam-434_big.gif
Now I can finally play inFamous.
2011-07-03 16:29:00

Author:
Morgalaga
Posts: 164


It sends so many score bubbles to the void.

Yes, I am aware of that and I'm thinking of a solution for that.
2011-07-03 20:58:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Hey, Nys! I said I'd review this level, so here I am. As it's a survival challenge I'll skip to the scores.

Fun Factor 8/10 - Had a lot of fun with this, though it could've had a liiiiiittle more variety.
Originality 8/10 - I've seen this idea been done before by Ali, but other than original.
Scenery 8/10 - Nothing special, though it got the job done.
Story N/A
Music 10/10 - I had my PSP on mute so I'll give you 10. :x
Overall 36/40 - :star::star::star::star::star:
2011-07-04 19:02:00

Author:
Fastbro
Posts: 1277


Well here is mah feedback
Man that was awesome D
I loved that level and it was realy hard

Design :
Great absolutly really papery ;D

Gameplay : Well it's a survival so it's normal survival

Well I like to play it it's hard and I got laught xD I was so freaking close to die and I survived "phiy..."
2011-07-05 12:45:00

Author:
doggy97
Posts: 964


And of course :star::star::star::star::star: and big <3!2011-07-05 12:47:00

Author:
doggy97
Posts: 964


Papergame
nysudyrgh
Score: 5.8/10
Rating::star::star::star:

A paper based minigame.


Story:
No story here. N/A

Gameplay:
It's basically walking around the same path with lane changing. Only thing that really changes is the speed of the level. Some more stuff in the level would be better. But it is still very fun. 6/10

Music/FX:
The music is good, but there's no FX at all. 6/10

Asthetics:
The visuals are good overall. I like the sticker work and the corner editing is fitting for this level. This level doesn''t pop out at you, but that said I don't know what more you could've done. 8/10

Originality:
It's basically Magical Forest with paper-themed visuals, which you have already used before. 0/10

Misc:
Nothin' bad here. 10/10

This level is a fun level to play, but basic gameplay and unoriginality hinders this level. Next time you try to build a survival challenge, try to make something new.
2011-07-05 19:05:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


Papergame
nysudyrgh
Score: 5.8/10
Rating::star::star::star:

A paper based minigame.


Story:
No story here. N/A

Gameplay:
It's basically walking around the same path with lane changing. Only thing that really changes is the speed of the level. Some more stuff in the level would be better. But it is still very fun. 6/10

Music/FX:
The music is good, but there's no FX at all. 6/10

Asthetics:
The visuals are good overall. I like the sticker work and the corner editing is fitting for this level. This level doesn''t pop out at you, but that said I don't know what more you could've done. 8/10

Originality:
It's basically Magical Forest with paper-themed visuals, which you have already used before. 0/10

Misc:
Nothin' bad here. 10/10

This level is a fun level to play, but basic gameplay and unoriginality hinders this level. Next time you try to build a survival challenge, try to make something new.

There is ONE fx.
2011-07-05 19:58:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Alright, enough procrastination. It's time I gave my feedback!

Crowd: *Gasp* CS is finally active in the PSP section again?
CyberSora: Yes, because I have reach a all time high in something again: boredom.

The Good
I loved this level! True, it was short, but never the less it was still fun. And ah yes, the 'ole classic "rolling" survival challenge. It never fails to give joy to players, especially when you add snazzy visuals and obstacles.

The Bad
I felt like the speed just took off too quickly. Survival challenges are about taking its time to build up difficulty, and this one seemed to rush it. Not only that, but you already have a rolling-survival challenge. I know this is a better version of an old one, but excluding your previous version you already have another one, once again facing this speed problem. It's never a bad idea to try out new concepts you know.

Oh Looky
My old TL;DR level feedback style is back. Guess I should have claimed copyrights from the beginning though.

Overall, :star::star::star::star:. Nice job nysudyrgh!
2011-07-05 20:35:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


*Looks at reason of edit*

You will never succeed.
2011-07-05 20:49:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


*Looks at reason of edit*

You will never succeed.

Check the Reason now.
2011-07-05 20:58:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


Suprise Im Finnaly Giving Feed Back And Also Introucing a NEW AWARD SYSTEMTrademark



Gameplay - Its A Minigame Centered Around Walking Around A Rotating Circle And Hope you Dont fall off whilst trying to Collect Point Bubbles. The Typical LBP Minigame Level than But there Is Something Special This Level. Minus 2 Points Because To Much like A magical forest Minigame. 7/10

Visuals - Simple But Effective its Just the Use of the Games Paper Resources (As is Traditional For Nys)
But The Horrible Looking Horrible Gas At The edges (Very Plain) Let this Down A Bit 6/10

Style - When it comes to Style this Level Is full Of it And It Splashes At you In lovely Ratios Of Point Collecting Paper Rock Hopping Fun. But its A minigame so sorry but 9/10

OVERALL : 7-8/10 :star::star::star::star: And it wins A http://i1209.photobucket.com/albums/cc395/photoman1002/Darkhorseaward.jpg

Dark Horse Award Is for Levels We Didnt See Coming And Turn Out Pretty Good
2011-07-07 09:47:00

Author:
butter-kicker
Posts: 1061


Your paper zone is great It's the best survival I know

I'm playing it at the moment but you've already got my 5 stars
2011-07-07 18:44:00

Author:
Unknown User


TheNerd seems to be active since I saw that he has the hi-score. =32011-07-08 16:07:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


It was good, but way too similar to Ali's survival. :/2011-07-09 19:39:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


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