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Hey guys this is a level i've been working very hard on for a while now. Its not quite complete but maby you guys could take a look a it nd give me some feedback. Thanks if you do. there are 3 more parts to it i need help with.
http://lbp.me/v/2-gmtg
2011-06-30 00:15:00

Author:
Unknown User


this sounds interesting will add it to the queue and leave some feedback after i get to it.

if you can check out my level "Nature's solitude" which is more of a scenic level.
link below in sig
thread https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=57280-Nature-s-Solitude
2011-06-30 00:55:00

Author:
juscallmeJ
Posts: 77


this sounds interesting will add it to the queue and leave some feedback after i get to it.

if you can check out my level "Nature's solitude" which is more of a scenic level.
link below in sig
thread https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=57280-Nature-s-Solitude

thanks man will do
2011-06-30 01:04:00

Author:
Unknown User


This seems cool... By the description, it's probably very artistic, right?
Already in queue, I'll play when I get home.
Since this is F4F, I'd like you to check my level, The Jungle (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=59048-Jungle-Level). It's my first finished, so take it easy
TY

EDIT: Ok, so I played the level...
It's really really beautiful, you really got some level designing talents.
But saying nice stuff about you won't make you a better creator, so I'll go to the cons...
The only thing that annoyed me is the water sound(of the rain), but since there's no way to stop it... What you could do, maybe, is put a rain sound on top of that, to make it stand out less... And some of the water puddles on the ground are not so pretty as the others, like the one on top of the underground lake... That's it I think...


Also, not complaining, just curious, but what's the point of the level? I mean, in part one we just walk on these beautiful places, but no real purpose... Will it change in part two or is the purpose just art?
2011-06-30 01:11:00

Author:
Unknown User


OMG This seems cool... By the description, it's probably very artistic, right?
Already in queue, I'll play when I get home.
Since this is F4F, I'd like you to check my level, The Jungle (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=59048-Jungle-Level). It's my first finished, so take it easy
TY
Thnks and don't worry ill take it easy on you this is only my 3rd published level.
2011-06-30 01:33:00

Author:
Unknown User


BTW, could you please leave some feedback rather than just playing the level(which you already did), since I need to know what I need to make better in the level...

EDIT: Oh sorry you left it on the level... I didn't see it... You use a keyboard on your ps3 right?
Well, thanks, I'll take on consideration when updating it to 1.5
EDIT2: BTW what do you mean with small float bridges? lol
2011-06-30 15:05:00

Author:
Unknown User


nice rain effect, though this seemed more like a tech demo than a full level.2011-06-30 15:41:00

Author:
juscallmeJ
Posts: 77


Hi! Played your level.

Pros:
- The ambientation is perfect. Liked the raindrops and the lightning.

Cons:
- There's nothing to do but walk and some jumps... even not bubbles!
- In the 2nd part, if you advance and then walk back, there's a point where you can see the rainy clouds in the sky (don't know if that's a camera error). They look quite "ugly" compared with the rest of the scenario :/

I think that's the main point. Anyway good work.

Please leave me feedback at my level https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=56955-Math-Millionaire-Quiz
2011-07-01 17:25:00

Author:
ara_que
Posts: 63


Queued. will try it out and leave some feedback, will you do the same for me? https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=59163-Cosmic-Carnage-Beta%28Twin-Stick-Shooter%292011-07-02 01:49:00

Author:
arsenalfan_1995
Posts: 229


Quequed, i will leave feedback as soon as i can.2011-07-02 12:08:00

Author:
Flame Dragon
Posts: 312


Okay, the level has got no real gameplay, but the visuals look absolutely stunning. It's a really good "artistic" level, gratz!
However, i got stuck at the part with the Waterfall, there was an invisible platform, that took me inside a cave, but this cave was a dead end. Also in this section with some careful jump you can get on top of the waterfall and all your logic and lights can be seen!

It would be nice to see a level made with this scenery, unfortunately i'm pretty sure this gives a really hard dent on the thermometer, so it's just a dream i guess.

Please give feedback on my levels! F4F!
2011-07-02 17:57:00

Author:
Flame Dragon
Posts: 312


Just finished playing. The levels look nice but i think you should add some platforming just to keep it fun and add a bit of gameplay2011-07-02 18:36:00

Author:
arsenalfan_1995
Posts: 229


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