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Its my first LBP 2 level and just wanted some feedback on what I can fix and make better.
http://lbp.me/v/1r2ebp
2011-06-24 15:42:00

Author:
rainingblood901
Posts: 6


added to the queue.

try adding a couple screenshots to your post.

if you can for feedback give my level "nature's solitude" a try it is more a scenic platformer.

thread https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=57280-Nature-s-Solitude
lbp.me link http://lbp.me/v/0kn3j2
2011-06-24 23:35:00

Author:
juscallmeJ
Posts: 77


The colors are great in this level! The scenario is simple but it's great that way ^^
The hook is fun and the difficult is correct.

Please leave me feedback at my level https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=56955-Math-Millionaire-Quiz

Just favorited your level ^^ Regards!
2011-06-25 22:03:00

Author:
ara_que
Posts: 63


Just played your level and had a blast. The levels aesthetic was clear, retro and (dare I say), psychedelic. Gameplay was polished and there were alot of creative aspects to your level (one of my favorite parts being the red block that revealed the bounce pads). One little gripe was that some of the camera angles, particularly the very first one, made platforming a bit difficult (though that may just be part of the intended challenge), and put me off a little at the beginning. Overall really cool level. Hearted.

When you find the time please provide some feedback on my new level "Topiary Tower Tragedy"
2011-06-26 08:30:00

Author:
optimafrogg
Posts: 98


This seems pretty cool. I'm going to try it out!2011-06-26 10:31:00

Author:
sp0ngyraver
Posts: 407


i will add it to my queue. i honestly love doing things for others. i wish people would ask me to run errands more often.2011-06-26 11:24:00

Author:
nerzdadestroyer
Posts: 1527


this was a fun little level. as mentioned above some of the camera angles could have been a bit clearer.2011-06-26 20:51:00

Author:
juscallmeJ
Posts: 77


I just gave this a try, I loved the artistic style of it, very Pop Art. I will have to agree that the camera angles threw me off a few times. Remember that the camera angle can make a small platform nearly impossible to stand or jump on.

Do me a solid and try out my level "Cosmic Blasters" and tell me what you think. https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=58753-Cosmic-Blasters-A-Twin-Stick-Shooter
2011-06-27 01:38:00

Author:
sp0ngyraver
Posts: 407


Played it yesterday, but had a hard time finding this thread, so I have forgotten quite a bit at the time of posting.

On a technical standpoint, it was a very solid level. Things worked, and I encountered few glitches. It was also enjoyable, but not very original, since people have been making color based levels since the early days of LBP1. Visually, it was different due to everything being silhouetted except for the colors, but this effect is also not very original, but it still looks very good.

Although I make a point of how this level is not very original, I do believe that doing something well can more than make up for a lack of originallity, and you did well.

For F4F, press the big, pink "IT" in my signature.
2011-06-30 23:22:00

Author:
RagTagPwner
Posts: 344


Played this level today, I really like the visual style of it, makes an impression. I especially liked the white light effect on the floor when it follows you, really cool idea.

As others mention there were a couple of camera issues that made certain bits more difficult than they should have been. I also didn't really understand the colour correlation if there was any at all. Did each colour signify anything? It could be quite cool if each colour represented a particular type of puzzle, say red for bounce pads, green for grapple hook etc. As it is it felt a little unco-ordinated.

Either way, I think the visual style carried it well, some puzzles were pretty good, but there didn't seem to be a running theme gameplay wise. With a few tweaks and a bit more puzzle/colour co-ordination, you would have a great little level here.

Could you check out my level The Water Temple as F4F please: http://lbp.me/v/1m6fp5

The thread: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=58385-The-Water-Temple
2011-07-03 21:00:00

Author:
Xaif
Posts: 365


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