LBP Showcase / Reviews / Recommendations #1
Neverynnal Reviews Inc. =) - Closed until further notice!
Archive: 44 posts
| I'm currently taking requests! The grading system is as follows: /5 ---> Appearance- is your level polished and easy on the eyes? /10 ---> Gameplay- was it, first of all, fun to play and did it keep my attention? /5 ---> Replay Value- is it worth a second or third play? Thus, a score out of 20 will be given for your level. I will give constructive criticism only, and the pros and cons of your level will be shared. Please leave your PSN ID, name of level and any other specifics you want me to pay attention to while playing. Thankyou! __________________________________________________ ______________________ On the Block 1) PSN: deboerdave Level: Log Jam 2) PSN: Elbee23 Level: A journey through the digestive tract 3) PSN: plasmavore Level: Riddle Quest- Part 1 4) PSN: PhantasyStarHero Level: Trial of Skill (Ver 1.04) 5) PSN: Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX Level: Area 52 - Live or die... 6) PSN: BassDeluxe Level: Boss Battle 1: Gelulupas 7)PSN: Ham_Salad Level: Zombie Zombiez 8)PSN: reiverx Level: Babylon Quest Upon further activity in the forums: PSN: Kirkj Level: Afraid Of Monster - Hospital 2(Garage) __________________________________________________ _____________________________ REVIEWED LEVELS: (ranked from highest to lowest score) 1) The Sands of Time, PSN- NinjaMicWZ =18.5/20 1) Timmy's Dream, PSN- Hexagohn = 18.5/20 3) The Fall of Winter, PSN-xkappax = 18/20 4) "His World", PSN- xbriandeadx = 17/20 5) The Abandoned Coal Mine, PSN- xbriandeadx = 16.5/20 6) Which Way is Up?, PSN- Walter-Kovacs =16.5 7) Centralia A Ghost Story, PSN - Catiers =15.5/20 8) Alchemy Anthology: Fire I - Antlands, PSN- Chazosulls =15/20 9) Afraid of Monster- Hospital, PSN: Kirkj =14/20 10) Hibachi Dojo, PSN: Gondito=10/20 | 2008-12-12 01:14:00 Author: Neverynnal  Posts: 374 |
| Alright, I'll be the guinea pig for Neverynnal Reviews Inc! Level name: Alchemy Anthology: Fire I - Antlands PSN: Chazosulls | 2008-12-12 01:21:00 Author: UmJammerSully  Posts: 1097 |
| I could use a review for ours. We are a husband and wife team. I do the art and story, he does the game mechanics. I hope you enjoy them. PSN - Catiers (my husband) Level - Centralia A Ghost Story Located near pennsylvania PSN - xkappax (mine) Level - The Fall of Winter Also located near pennsylvania thanks in advance! | 2008-12-12 01:52:00 Author: xkappax  Posts: 2569 |
| Neverynnal: if you plan on doing this long term, you may earn a sticky along with Aqua. Obviously I want to see the quality of your reviews before I make a decision, but I'm just throwing that out there. Also, try to do reviews in new threads instead of in this topic, for consistency and easier browsing. | 2008-12-12 02:17:00 Author: ConfusedCartman  Posts: 3729 |
I'll begin the reviews tomorrow, and a sticky would be great if you like the quality Cartman. Mine won't be horribly extensive, as I don't want to spoil the level for potential players. Anyway! Tomorrow I begin.  EDIT: Also, any glitches/fixes that need attending to I'll be PMing the author exclusively, rather than posting it with the review. | 2008-12-12 04:37:00 Author: Neverynnal Posts: 374 |
| PSN: NinjaMicWZ Level: The Sands of Time ...make sure you drop down below at the giant hourglass to find a little surprise... try and sift through the smog a little as well if you're curious. There's also a prize bubble above the giant hourglass, and one tucked into the corner, top right, of the fire room. Thanks for going to all this trouble to help out the community, guys. | 2008-12-12 17:43:00 Author: Unknown User  |
| I love your reviews, they're usually right on the dot. Please review my levels, the links are in my signature below | 2008-12-12 20:21:00 Author: xbriandeadx  Posts: 134 |
| I've played the Abandoned Coal Mine twice now, and I'm gonna give it one more go before I give it a full review. It's a long level and a lot to take into consideration, but I was thoroughly impressed man. As for the 2nd installment, I wasn't able to finish it. At the boss I let go of one of the sponges too early and it swung onto a platform above, leaving it out of reach, thus ending my chances at completing it. Anyway, anyone else want some reviews done? I'm done finals and got a crapload of time to kill until January, so lay it on me!  | 2008-12-13 02:07:00 Author: Neverynnal Posts: 374 |
| PSN - SuperPhillip Level - 0-1 The Warehouse Located eastern U.S. It's a tutorial level made as if LBP doesn't even exist. It's obviously pretty easy, but that was my goal. | 2008-12-13 02:34:00 Author: Unknown User |
| I'll get to reviewing both brians and phillip's on monday first thing. Currently tied up in drinking and hockey! | 2008-12-14 00:38:00 Author: Neverynnal Posts: 374 |
| You don't need to hurry anyway. I don't think he and I are going anywhere. Have fun this weekend!  | 2008-12-14 01:01:00 Author: Unknown User |
| hello, I'd like my levels reviewed. PSN: Kirkj Level #1: Afraid Of Monster - Hospital Level #2: Afraid Of Monster - Hospital 2(Garage) | 2008-12-14 01:01:00 Author: kirkj  Posts: 7 |
| I would love a review of my first level. I have two, but my second one isn't polished yet. So if you could review "Which was is up?" I'd love it. | 2008-12-14 01:06:00 Author: Walter-Kovacs  Posts: 542 |
| Hey Neverynnal I would love it if you reviewed my Level "Hibachi Dojo", just search my PSN Gondito, or add me! | 2008-12-14 04:23:00 Author: Gondito  Posts: 1082 |
| Hey i saw that you beat "His" World. Congrats! That level is tough! haha I hope you liked it Let me know what sponge got stuck, because I've been testing it and i have no idea how that could have happened. Thanks again | 2008-12-14 06:37:00 Author: xbriandeadx Posts: 134 |
| I've suggested it to Shining Aqua as well, but you might want to edit the first post and include links to all the reviews you've done. As time goes on these things will fall off the front page and people might want to track your entire work as a reviewer. It's better to start now when you just have a few to link than when you have a tonne and it's too hard to do. | 2008-12-14 07:01:00 Author: Elbee23  Posts: 1280 |
| If you do include reviews in your first post, it should just be: title, score, link to full review. Otherwise it would be huge. | 2008-12-14 07:09:00 Author: Walter-Kovacs Posts: 542 |
| Aye, that sounds like a plan guys. I'll do just that. As for "His World" brian, yeah I finally finished it The sponge got stuck as I was traversing the boss during my first play, but I think it was just a big fluke because in my 2nd play I pretty much tried to see if I could do it again and I couldn't. So don't worry about it | 2008-12-14 17:56:00 Author: Neverynnal Posts: 374 |
| Hey, it'd be great if you would review my level Timmy's Dream a link to the thread is in my signature. | 2008-12-15 02:26:00 Author: Hexagohn  Posts: 335 |
| You can take me off the list. I'm happy with what I have anyway. | 2008-12-15 03:54:00 Author: Unknown User |
| hey Neverynnal you could check out my levels air blasters (unique shooting air craft level) log jam (fun challenge stage based on log rolling 3 rounds of increasing dificulty) rocket sled adventures (single player recommended platforming) not much in the way of story driven but should provide some challenging fun gaming like to hear what you think later psn deboerdave | 2008-12-16 22:06:00 Author: deboerdave  Posts: 384 |
| Early indications show that the new shorter small intestine version of the digestive tract level is being well recieved. Would you be able to officially review it some time? The link to the official thread is here: A journey through a digestive tract (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=5828) I'll point out something as well which might not be obvious, and mention it in Shining's sticky thread as well... If you edit the very first post in this or any other thread, you can see a title section. If you edit this, it will change the name of the thread - but any hyperlinks to this thread will still work. This should allow you to say "taking requests" or "current review list is full, will update when openings occur" or whatever you want to say. Might help when people read the title, don't read the whole thread, and put their name down even when you are busy. | 2008-12-18 05:11:00 Author: Elbee23 Posts: 1280 |
| Thanks for the tips as usual Elbee! Sorry if people are waiting on their reviews. I'll be doing a whole wackload tomorrow morning. I'm currently working on a level in my Knight's Tale series, and I'm having so much fun with it that its been impossible to stop. Oh god...can you believe it? Actually having a lot of fun making the level and not just rushing to get it done. I think I've finally gotten the hang of all the LBP mechanics in create mode so it's more a pleasure now than a pain Anyway! Tomorrow I'll be posting 2-3 reviews! Stay tuned  | 2008-12-18 23:32:00 Author: Neverynnal Posts: 374 |
| YES! my level is number two on the list now! | 2008-12-20 16:43:00 Author: Gondito Posts: 1082 |
| If you do include reviews in your first post, it should just be: title, score, link to full review. Otherwise it would be huge. Regardless of the format, it will still be huge:eek: | 2008-12-20 21:02:00 Author: Shining Aquas  Posts: 353 |
| Yeah ain't that the truth. I think the format I have setup at the moment is fine. I may think about adding the threads soon here too. | 2008-12-20 22:40:00 Author: Neverynnal Posts: 374 |
| Got a review request, now that I finally got my first real LBP level out. PSN: Sir_Linque Level: Treetop Escape Thanks! | 2008-12-21 20:32:00 Author: Linque  Posts: 607 |
| Yay im next! cant wait to see the review nevery! | 2008-12-21 22:34:00 Author: Gondito Posts: 1082 |
| On the Block 1) PSN: Walter-Kovacs Level: Which way is up? 2) PSN: Gondito Level: Hibachi Dojo 3) PSN: Hexagohn Level: Timmy's Dream 4) PSN: doeberdave Level: Log Jam 5) PSN: Elbee23 Level: A journey through the digestive tract cool i glad your going to check out log jam. Just want to let you know you spelled my name wrong here should be deboerdave. | 2008-12-22 01:33:00 Author: deboerdave Posts: 384 |
| Can you please review my level. Riddle Quest- Part 1 PSN: plasmavore thanks | 2008-12-22 22:17:00 Author: Plasmavore  Posts: 1913 |
| Never when will my review be done? | 2008-12-22 23:31:00 Author: Gondito Posts: 1082 |
| Sorry bud. I've been really busy lately with the holidays. I'm planning on reviewing both yours and Walter's level tomorrow. I've given "which way is up?" a couple plays and written down some notes already so it shouldn't be long before I get to yours LBG. Sorry again man! | 2008-12-23 05:32:00 Author: Neverynnal Posts: 374 |
| I think the term I'm going for with this submission is "fuggin hypocrite" If you are willing (and sane enough), here is my level. I'm opening it up for interpretation, in all its horribleness: Trial of Skill (Ver 1.04) (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=5720) PSN: PhantasyStarHero I guarantee people will call me a hypocrite by the end of it.  | 2008-12-23 05:43:00 Author: Shining Aquas Posts: 353 |
| Sorry bud. I've been really busy lately with the holidays. I'm planning on reviewing both yours and Walter's level tomorrow. I've given "which way is up?" a couple plays and written down some notes already so it shouldn't be long before I get to yours LBG. Sorry again man! Hey dont sweat it man, its a really nice thing your doing so take all the time you need | 2008-12-23 15:29:00 Author: Gondito Posts: 1082 |
| Level Name: Area 52 - Live or die... PSN: Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX I'd appreciate your feedback on this level it took me a good 60+ hours to make so it should be worth your time i hope ^^p.s. Merry Christmas everyone! | 2008-12-25 14:22:00 Author: Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX  Posts: 67 |
| Sorry about the delay guys. So busy with the holidays that I haven't had a chance to even play. | 2008-12-27 06:04:00 Author: Neverynnal Posts: 374 |
| Sorry about the delay guys. So busy with the holidays that I haven't had a chance to even play. that's ok, your doing this out of your own time, so take your time,.. no need to rush :] | 2008-12-28 16:12:00 Author: Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX Posts: 67 |
| Hey Neverynnal, I'd appreciate it if you'd review my level. PSN: BassDeluxe Name: Boss Battle 1: Gelulupas | 2008-12-31 19:56:00 Author: BassDeluxe  Posts: 984 |
| when you get around to it if you feel like it you can check out my zomg zombiez level. i know you checked out my other one and liked it | 2008-12-31 19:59:00 Author: Hamsalad  Posts: 2551 |
| I know you're busy but when you get time can you review my level Babylon Quest by reiverx. Cheers | 2009-01-02 14:01:00 Author: Unknown User |
| I know I've moved up to second spot, but I've already had two reviews of the digestion level in this review section. You can take it off the list if you like and help make your list shorter. | 2009-01-04 15:37:00 Author: Elbee23 Posts: 1280 |
| Hey, i'd like a review on my level: "Hard Simplicity". It would be appreciated if you leave the feedback in my thread: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=8525 One note: It's a level about secrets, so don't expect lots of guidance as about where to go. | 2009-02-11 18:31:00 Author: ThommyTheThird  Posts: 440 |
| Would you like this list unstickied to take some pressure off you, Neverynnal? You can request it be stuck again once you get back on top of things. | 2009-02-12 10:45:00 Author: Elbee23 Posts: 1280 |
| PSN: brnxblze Level Name: Mission 1: The Bank Robbery Icon: a bank Location: USA Thread: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=9083 | 2009-02-21 19:29:00 Author: brnxblze Posts: 1318 |
LBPCentral Archive Statistics
Posts: 1077139
Threads: 69970
Members: 9661
Archive-Date: 2019-01-19
Datenschutz
Aus dem Archiv wurden alle persönlichen Daten wie Name, Anschrift, Email etc. - aber auch sämtliche Inhalte wie z.B. persönliche Nachrichten - entfernt.
Die Nutzung dieser Webseite erfolgt ohne Speicherung personenbezogener Daten. Es werden keinerlei Cookies, Logs, 3rd-Party-Plugins etc. verwendet.
Die Nutzung dieser Webseite erfolgt ohne Speicherung personenbezogener Daten. Es werden keinerlei Cookies, Logs, 3rd-Party-Plugins etc. verwendet.