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Steam [Spotlighted]

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Steamnysudyrgh
Hey, I'm back ... with a better level.
Its located in a world of steel, steam and magma.
Visit the Tecnix and explore the magma cave.

Thanks to Morgalaga for the screenshots.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Hakumai/steam2.jpg
Machines with magma ... K then.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Hakumai/steam3.jpg
Is it getting hot in here ?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Hakumai/steam1.jpg
Ooh, is that a valve ?
2011-06-22 19:54:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Those spinning cogs towards the end ,maybe middle, of the level were mean mamma jammas.
I jumped on them wrong and it turned into a treadmill of doom.
But I got to the trick of it eventually.

Scenery elements looked good, particularly the pipes the machinery.
And the obstacles were also pretty good.


:star::star::star::star:


If you don't get pictures sometime soon I'll attempt at taking a picture.
Chances are it'll be blurry.
But I'm going to wait till night as I'll probably be able to get a better picture when its dark.
2011-06-22 21:53:00

Author:
Morgalaga
Posts: 164


Wow this is such an improvement! To be honest this really surprised me. I loved the environment you created, it was full of detail in most places. And the characters look awesome!! However there's a few things you should keep in mind. The earthquake, I thought was a little too shaky. I'd suggest slowing down that piston. Other than that I really liked this one.

You're getting much better nys, keep up the work. :star::star::star::star::star:
2011-06-23 02:42:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


Nice!!!!

Will provide feedback ASAP!
2011-06-23 03:30:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


Here are some pictures I took.

Also after playing it again I gave it a <3
Because it was fun to play again.

(Forget that wrong stuff I said earlier, I blame it on dehydration. Edited my post to make it more correct)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Hakumai/steam2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Hakumai/steam3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Hakumai/steam1.jpg
Bluuuuuuuuurry
2011-06-23 05:23:00

Author:
Morgalaga
Posts: 164


Big thanks to y'all for the feedback.
And thank you morgalaga for the Pics.
And I'll make the next earthquake less shaky val.
2011-06-23 10:35:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Will download tonight nys, looks good mate.2011-06-23 16:44:00

Author:
JetArtois
Posts: 232


Wow ^^! That was really great! I thought it was challenging and really well made. And I like how you used your guest entry signature here as well. =)

I'll write more detailed feedback when I get back. Sorry, I know I've said that a lot of times and owe a couple of other levels feedback as well... I'll try to get them all done as soon as I can. ^^
2011-06-24 17:45:00

Author:
Phalaina
Posts: 181


WHAT I HAVE DONE!!!!! MISSED A NYS LEVEL.....please forgive me I will download tonight...
Your Majesty
2011-06-24 18:49:00

Author:
butter-kicker
Posts: 1061


Remember when I said your previous level seemed like a step backwards? This is a step forwards from the point that was a step back from. This is a great level. It looks good, it plays well, it's all-around good. More detail when I'm less out of it.2011-06-24 21:50:00

Author:
BlackWolfe
Posts: 299


Remember when I said your previous level seemed like a step backwards? This is a step forwards from the point that was a step back from. This is a great level. It looks good, it plays well, it's all-around good. More detail when I'm less out of it.

I expected that answer, however I was actually working for a step further than The Tree Of Life ...
Finally getting some feedback.
2011-06-24 21:54:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


I expected that answer, however I was actually working for a step further than The Tree Of Life ...
Finally getting some feedback.

That's what I meant. You succeeded. Still waking up -- previous post was made when I should have been asleep -- so detailed feedback will have to wait.
2011-06-25 01:04:00

Author:
BlackWolfe
Posts: 299


Played it and loved it!

:star::star::star::star::star: and a <3
2011-06-25 01:09:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


Great level, has a ton of detail.2011-06-25 19:25:00

Author:
Unknown User


Congrats on the spotlight Nys! I'll have to give this a play! 2011-06-25 22:18:00

Author:
WoodburyRaider
Posts: 1651


Ooh, spotlighted.
Never thought that to happen when I published it.

Internet party!
2011-06-25 23:17:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


good work nys. well done on your first spotlight.
i hope to see many more spotlight-worthy levels from you in the future!
2011-06-26 01:14:00

Author:
darcyh
Posts: 191


Congrats on ur spotlight nys! You're becoming quite a skilled creator, so be sure to keep up the work! 2011-06-26 02:45:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


Hello my friend!!

For me gameplay is so important, and you have become one of my favorite creators over the last couple months. This level is so good on so many different aspects. The platforming is gold. The aesthetics are wonderful. The levels designs are some of the best I ever played. Those characters all look amazing. The story is engaging, and kept me interested throughout. This is the total package.

Hearted of course.

Congrats on the spotlight brother, you will have many more I am sure.
2011-06-26 03:28:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


Well, shoot, you've got a spotlight. You don't need full feedback now.

I kid, I kid.

Stuff I Liked
Wonderful detail work on the environment.
I loved your sackpeople. Good choice of stickers on 'em.
Absolutely phenomenal choice of materials.

Room For Improvement
(Yeah, I've renamed this section to be less negative. Sue me.)
As has been mentioned before, there's no real sense that we got out of the area at the end of the level.
If this is a story-driven level, the story could use a bit more fleshing out.

Overall
:star::star::star::star::star:<3
2011-06-26 15:20:00

Author:
BlackWolfe
Posts: 299


WHAT I HAVE DONE!!!!! MISSED A NYS LEVEL.....please forgive me I will download tonight...
Your Majesty

You better did this by the time, coz Teh Hoardah isn't the only one with a whip. :kz:


Wow ^^! That was really great! I thought it was challenging and really well made. And I like how you used your guest entry signature here as well. =)

Yeah, I even put some stickers on it to somewhat make it fit the scenery
I forgot to put LBPC in tho. :/


Room For Improvement
(Yeah, I've renamed this section to be less negative. Sue me.)
As has been mentioned before, there's no real sense that we got out of the area at the end of the level.
If this is a story-driven level, the story could use a bit more fleshing out.

I know, stories just seem to hate me.
I'll try and come up with something better next time.C:
2011-06-27 08:08:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Hi nys. Tryed your level dude and it's to your usual high standard. Nice little platformer. Liked the part where you have to control the platform. The whole level worked well and looked good. The cog set got me a bit, but it's not that bad, actually quite like it once ya get the hang of it (unlike the spinning wheels n spikes on Tree of Life, still fills me with rage). All in all great stuff mate, enjoyed playing through it. Oh and congrats on the spotlight dude, thought one was on it's way.2011-06-27 21:51:00

Author:
JetArtois
Posts: 232


Hello nysudyrgh. Played through this level twice now and rated it 5 stars and a heart. I thought this was brilliant throughout. Great visuals, characters, gameplay and machinery that would fit in a mine type level. My only problem was with the platform at the end which seemed to have a mind of it's own at times! It was constantly going back when I needed it to go forwards. It worked fine for me on the second playthrough though.

I will be taking a break from this site for the forseeable future and will not be making any more levels but if I return I will be sure to check out any more of your levels.
2011-07-01 16:44:00

Author:
MrObycyek
Posts: 50


Right, reviewing as I play...

From the offstart, I like it. Nice Scenery. Love your stair design, though prehaps the level needs a bit more sticker work? Lovely logo, very well made! 'kog'? Shouldn't that be capital, it doesn't really matter but it just looks better... Now for some fiery action, yay! Fantastic use of the camera shaking technique!! This section is absolutely fantastic, the platforms rising out of the molten magma.... Why are the walls so bland though> It's beginning to get my goat! Some more platforming, nothing special but nice. Good spinning plaforms... This platforming grabbing segement could get irritating, but it's original. Me likey black spinny gears. Very nice. And... it's over. The ending seemed a bit lackluster, though I enjoyed the level as a whole. Here are my scores...

Fun Factor 7/10 - I had it's moments, some sections were really fun.
Creativity 6/10 - The design was original, but a lot of the gameplay was basic.
Scenery 8/10 - Loved the scenery, though I deducted two points due to the constantly blank background.
Story 6/10 - It didn't seem to... go anywhere. A stronger plot would've helped this level greatly.
Music/SFX 9/10 - Good music choice, and the hissing for the fire was a good move.
Overall 36/50 = :star::star::star::star: and a <3

Good work!
2011-07-04 18:53:00

Author:
Fastbro
Posts: 1277


Your level was awesome and fun! It was a blast to play your level from beginning to the end! I liked the level a lot and the characters looked awesome! I gave the level :star::star::star::star::star: and <3. Sorry for the late feedback and i hope you keep creating more amazing levels like this. 2011-07-15 16:59:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


i need a new PSP SO I CAN PLAY YR LVLS!! tis looks so good, gah! i hav to wait like, a year before i can get a new psp. so, well done anyway. im sure its fantastic.2011-08-15 10:17:00

Author:
nerzdadestroyer
Posts: 1527


Played it yesterday, I really liked it, it looked really nice, the stage and the characters! It was fun running through the lava, the gears and all. Nice work!2011-08-15 23:52:00

Author:
Unknown User


Congrats on your spotlight pal. Thats a pretty good job you've done. 2011-08-16 09:54:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378


Hey, sorry it took me so long to post this...but here is it...

Things That I liked:
I thought that the character were both pleasing to look at and creative.
Both the music and sound effects fit nicely.
The platforming was really fun, and really enjoyed the bubble collecting.
All the machines and such looked like they would in real life, nice job.
Overall visually pleasing.

Things I didn't like:
Nothing really, it was overall a very pleasing and fun platforming level.

Something Special:
I really enjoyed the transporting pipe in cave number 2, and I also liked the tilting platforms afterwards.
With all of the fire, I would've expected some lag, but as I played through, I didn't get any, very nice and very smooth.

Overall I gave it a 5 stars and I even hearted it. Very enjoyable and fun to play. I had no problems with anything, and the creativity put into the level was nice.

:star::star::star::star::star: + <3 = Great level
2011-08-17 15:39:00

Author:
Unknown User


D: Oh my... I haven't made review of this master piece!
Review:
Story : Sackboy is like tourist in this level I had that feeling when played first time
Awesome things : hidden or how do I say... "Hard to get bubbles"
Bads: Well machine what transport you to go forward... I made a glicth on it some how...
And what you will get : :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: and lovely big <3
2011-08-17 20:37:00

Author:
doggy97
Posts: 964


I made a glicth on it some how...

You made it glitch? D:
And what exactly happened?

@Rest-: Thanks for the feedback guys, very much appreciated.:star:
2011-08-17 20:50:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


It happened ones, so no need to worry!
Whut happened : when i pressed the R buttom it started to shake like crazy old man! Then i had to try again... and i commplited it without glitches (So not need to worry)
2011-08-17 20:56:00

Author:
doggy97
Posts: 964


It happened ones, so no need to worry!
Whut happened : when i pressed the R buttom it started to shake like crazy old man! Then i had to try again... and i commplited it without glitches (So not need to worry)

Peculiar ... Well, it fixed itself so no need to worry.
Glad you enjoyed it.
2011-08-17 21:03:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


I don't have much feedback for this one. I liked it. I alreadly played it a couple days ago and had to replay it today to remember what it was about. So it wasn't one of those levels where by looking at the name I instantly remembered the level. But other than the unfitting name, and the cog wheels at the end.. lol. I loved it. I twice gave it 5 stars!

... Now the log game, I could play that all night. And I did. Have the high score to prove it.
2011-09-06 17:18:00

Author:
Bitter Sweet
Posts: 95


I don't have much feedback for this one. I liked it. I alreadly played it a couple days ago and had to replay it today to remember what it was about. So it wasn't one of those levels where by looking at the name I instantly remembered the level. But other than the unfitting name, and the cog wheels at the end.. lol. I loved it. I twice gave it 5 stars!

... Now the log game, I could play that all night. And I did. Have the high score to prove it.

Unfitting name you say?
Explain please.
2011-09-06 17:24:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Yes I hate the cog wheels because of them I'm still failing with acing the level and beating your highscore... wait...did I say that loud?2011-09-06 18:03:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378


I love them, in this level, I tried to think of original platforming, and I don't remember seeing this earlier so Ithought it was cool and new.
But everybody hates them. *Sobs*
2011-09-06 19:07:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


I'm Sorry. You could make them move a bit slower. But still you'd get a spotlight! 2011-09-06 19:26:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378


Just that there is only one part with 'steam' and you don't even get to play in the smoke. lol2011-09-09 20:28:00

Author:
Bitter Sweet
Posts: 95


Pros: great sound effects and music. good corner editing. details. obsticles


Cons: you could tell you used all turbo kit stuff

5 stars overall
2011-12-03 21:18:00

Author:
unc92sax
Posts: 928


Cons: you could tell you used all turbo kit stuff.

How's that a con?
2011-12-03 21:27:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


pros: good sound effects and music. good corner editing and details. not too hard.

cons: you can tell that alot of the turbo kit was used

4 stars
2011-12-03 21:28:00

Author:
unc92sax
Posts: 928


cons: you can tell that alot of the turbo kit was used

Cons: you could tell you used all turbo kit stuff

I'm asking it again: HOW is this a con?? :confused


4 stars

5 stars overall

Eh, wha-?
What's it now?
2011-12-03 21:32:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Congrats on the spotlight Nys! I'll have to give this a play!

great level.

5 star
pros: everthing
2011-12-03 22:08:00

Author:
unc92sax
Posts: 928


great level.

5 star
pros: everthing
lol wut?
...
2011-12-03 23:08:00

Author:
Schark94
Posts: 3378


Steamnysudyrgh
Hey, I'm back ... with a better level.
Its located in a world of steel, steam and magma.
Visit the Tecnix and explore the magma cave.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Hakumai/steam2.jpg
Machines with magma ... K then.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Hakumai/steam3.jpg
Is it getting hot in here ?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Hakumai/steam1.jpg
Ooh, is that a valve ?



Great level. has details!
2011-12-04 01:22:00

Author:
unc92sax
Posts: 928


Another request, another review.

And wow, was this ever a terrific level. I know I say a lot of levels are great (which they are), but this was truly awesome. Firstly, the theme was wonderfully executed. Everything fit within it and I completely bought that I was in a cave and a mine. And the gameplay was fantastic. Surprisingly, it didn't rely on any of the old tricks of the trade like balls of sponge on string or spinning balls that shoot you across the level/ to another one. I truly can't think of a single bad thing to say about this level. It was great and difficult. I died plenty of times, especially on the spinning cogs (ingenious, btw). Then, when I figured out the secret to them, I felt smart which is exactly what a level should do. Puzzles built straight into the platforming. This is a fantastic level that earned you five stars and a heart as well as a creator heart. Wow.
2011-12-23 16:36:00

Author:
Fading-Dream
Posts: 164


Review:
Good things:
The visuals were really good.
It reminded me of a turbo level without the cars.
Characters were detailed and looked good.
Of coarse, the spotlight makes it better.

Bad things:
Nothing really, but it ws a little short

Overall:
5 stars. Good level.
2012-02-08 23:06:00

Author:
unc92sax
Posts: 928


This level was(is) hard.Can't...beat..it!2012-06-16 10:24:00

Author:
ILOVEMYGF52
Posts: 242


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