Archive: 11 posts

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i've been writing a story over the past few days, called Sentinel. It is set in a world that is like ours, but not ours. The dominant species are the Sentinels, split up into 28 elemental tribes. Our main character is Chourft (pronounced SHAFT). He's a Fire Sentinel in training. Here are the first two chapters, I would suggest you don't read them unless you are over 12: WARNNG: Contains Gore, Swearing such as S***, and hard to pronounce names. Think you're up to the challenge of reading this? GO!: Here is my gallery of all the chapters so far: http://jakest123.deviantart.com/gallery/30116749 If this is too offensive, feel free to ask someone to delete it.

2011-05-07 17:44:00 Author: Jakest123 Posts: 319

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Nice, I want more chapters

2011-05-08 21:38:00 Author: Squidge99 Posts: 203

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Nice, I want more chapters I do a chapter a day they're all in my deviantart Chapter 4 is coming soon.

2011-05-09 16:05:00 Author: Jakest123 Posts: 319

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I would have thought it was done by a real author I hadn't known it was you.

2011-05-09 16:35:00 Author: craigmond Posts: 2426

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Sentinel! XD In my 'Universe', the planet of [2nd Craft Earth] is dubbed Sentinel I would have thought it was done by a real author I hadn't known it was you. Why is he not a real author? Because he is not known?

2011-05-09 17:10:00 Author: Nurolight Posts: 918

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No I just didnt think thats what he is. Mabye he is, or isnt but FINE too quick to judge.

2011-05-09 19:13:00 Author: craigmond Posts: 2426

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No I just didnt think thats what he is. Mabye he is, or isnt but FINE too quick to judge. I think you mean published author? Anyways, I have been published in the past, but the reason I am not published is because I am 14 hopefully I might do a second draft of this story though and get it published when I'm older PS - Chapter 4 features explosions and stabbing - not for the faint hearted or squeamish

2011-05-09 20:52:00 Author: Jakest123 Posts: 319

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chapter 4 is released! click the link to go to the gallery, then find Sentinel - Chapter 4!

2011-05-09 21:57:00 Author: Jakest123 Posts: 319

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Chapter 5 is up

2011-05-12 16:21:00 Author: Jakest123 Posts: 319

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Chapter 6 and 7 are up

2011-05-14 15:54:00 Author: Jakest123 Posts: 319

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chapters 8 and 9 are up. Chapter 8 contains a lot of stabbing, a lot of cutting and killing, so don't read it if you find it inappropriate.

2011-05-16 17:13:00 Author: Jakest123 Posts: 319

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