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Carnival V3

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Hi!
This is the first time I "publicate" my level on a forum, but here goes.


Carnival
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/9832/dsc00214lp4.jpg
The plane simulator
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/3818/dsc00215yu7.jpg
the plane simulator for 2 players

And more!
This level took me only 4 hours, including the design of the plane simulators and the rest.
Pretty useless, but always fun

Don't heart, just play and leave a comment here.
PS: check out my pyramid level, i need feedback on it.

Currently I'll post this and then the carnival will be publiced.

UPDATE 16/01/09.
It got updated, I gave it a new look and added some more stuff
Also deleted some stuff.

Name is now carnival V2.
Be sure to play!
This thread now supports F4F.
2008-12-04 17:15:00

Author:
oldage
Posts: 2824


The image links are bust. Nice level though. I hearted.2008-12-04 18:18:00

Author:
mongoose7
Posts: 473


The image links are bust. Nice level though. I hearted.

Yea; noticed that too.
How can I fix?

Bump - Sorry for double post.

Anyone else tried it?
2008-12-04 18:27:00

Author:
oldage
Posts: 2824


o wow i like that, cool!!
i'm gonna play that right now.
2008-12-07 11:15:00

Author:
Unknown User


Looks like a great level will check it out tonight. I also fixed up the image tags for you.

Cheers QuozL
2008-12-07 11:36:00

Author:
QuozL
Posts: 921


Bump.
It got updated, I gave it a new look and added some more stuff
Also deleted some stuff.

Name is now carnival V2.
Be sure to play!
2009-01-16 15:52:00

Author:
oldage
Posts: 2824


It's a nice break from all of the hectic levels where everyone is out to kill your innocent little sack person (seriously... I didn't do that thing everyone says I did...).

Seriously, some of the contraptions were kinda cool. My only real problem is that they aren't all very pleasing to the eyes. Dark matter and regular sponge look rather bland. Some stickers and such would probably clean up everything else. I did like the look of the big wheel though. I also think that car thing works fairly well (no big deal, but you can't get it back if you fall out while it's not at the bottom though).

Still, I can't help but feel like there's not much to do here. It's a few interesting contraptions, and nothing else. I think the level would be more interesting if it was more of a level... if you understand what I mean. A flat path with a bunch of contraptions along the way to the goal isn't all that exciting, even if said contraptions are fun to play with.
2009-01-17 05:16:00

Author:
gameguy888
Posts: 159


For right now, all I'm saying is that you need to decorate some more. Make some things look prettier. 2009-01-17 07:07:00

Author:
Unknown User


Okay.

@gameguy : thanks for the feedback, although I have to say:
1. I just made it out of boredom
2. I'm not a pro creator, I actually know 60% of the stuff you can in creator mode.
3.I agree, not much to do there, but I've heard it's fun as hell with friends.

Anywho, thanks for the feedback, will upgrade to V3 soon....but I need advice on what stickers to place where
tell me what level I have to give feedback on btw.
2009-01-17 13:27:00

Author:
oldage
Posts: 2824


Some of the objects in this level are pretty cool, but the level itself needs some work. There's just no challenge here, just toys. You should make your next level more 'level-like', with hazards, and maybe some enemies, and the toys you make should be part of the gameplay of the level (like using a ferris wheel to reach a higher place).2009-01-17 16:49:00

Author:
Entity
Posts: 274


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