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Im writing a comic book called "phoenix burns bright". I currently have most of the story in my head, but the comic pages arent done. Would you like to hear some of the story? I bet you would. Our story begins in a steampunk airship named O'blimpus RINGARINGGGGGGG!!!!! need heed: *head stuck inside pillow* five.... more..... minutes..... *puts clock on sleep mode* our protagonist, need heed, a wierd furry creature with soft fur all around except for his head. he has three tufts of fur on his head, about as tall as a little tyke's basketball hoop (not counting the backboard) and is a vegetarian. he plays the clarinet. need heed : * wakes up, yawns, scratches eyes* blehh, *runs to mirror and trims eartuffs* * takes shower and sings sleepyhead* *walks into living room* bween and cubly: HAPPEH BURTDAI!!!!!!!!!! bween and cubly are sortof need heeds family. they found him crashed on the ground and said "neh, you can come with us" bween is a red midget wale that plays the kalimba, and cubly is a wierd bee dude that flies with his antenna's. need heed: its my birthday? Marvelous. bween, what did you make me. bween: a orange and lemon cake!!! need heed: O.O ill eat that later. cubly: THERE. ARE. STARVING. PEOPLE. IN. INDIA. EAT IT!!! need heed. >.> cubly, what did you get me? cubly: *hands need heed a small present* need heed: *rips it open* its a..... a broken clarinet reed? cubly: well since you LOOVE nature and want to protect it, I tried to reuse something/ Need heed: >.> <.< *punches cubly* *runs and eats some cake* bween, what are you looking at? bween: theres a bird.... need heed: seriously? a bird? bween: its on fire, its like a phoenix. need heed: * looks at it* hey, thats cool bween: need? need heed: we should get some pictures of this and send it to netscape or some other rumor website bween: NEED HEED? need heed: maybe we can get an interview on how it happened to fly here bween: NEED HEED!!!!!! need heed: WHAT!!! bween: *shakingly points at phoenix* need heed: OH CRAP! *phoenix shoots some sort of a fireball at the ship* *starts running it circles* bween and needheed: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !! need heed: *starts to run to the driving station, but its on fire* I have to save meh family, *runs through fire and starts controlling, and hand catches on fire* ....... AHHHHHH MAH HANDS ON FIRE AHHHHHHH... wait, I cant feel it..... what the heck? im immune to fire...... THATS COOL! *ship crashes into a mountain.* ~~~~~~~~~~ Nivisa: *hears big crashing noise*.... what the heck was that? our protaganist, need heed, is in love with nivisa, shes a tad bit shorter than need heed, she loves to swim, has a bad attitude, and hates needheed. nivisa: *grabs bucket of water and looks at whats outside.* hmm, whats this? * douses flames with water* needheed: *pops out of pile of ash* umm..... I mean, Hello nivisa. nivisa: Hello furby, what did you do today? thats all im gonna write of it so far, what do you think of it?

2011-04-25 18:07:00 Author: Cactii Posts: 426

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It sounds like a very sweet comic, I'm looking forward to see the full thing finished

2011-04-25 18:25:00 Author: moonwire Posts: 1627

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It does sound very cool, but until you add some art don't you think it should be in the creative writing. And if you need any help, then ask me, I'm currently writing a novel, so I could help.

2011-04-25 18:28:00 Author: daddy_doodle Posts: 199

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yeah. I already have the draft of the first three pages done that i will upload later. also, does anyone know how to copyright something? Im a moron when it comes to government stuff like that.

2011-04-25 18:40:00 Author: Cactii Posts: 426

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Need a copyright logo Hey.......I can do that as i am a master when it comes to that and any other Photoshop stuff! I can help with anything

2011-04-25 18:50:00 Author: butter-kicker Posts: 1061

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so i just need a copyright logo and it wil be copyrighted..... ..... I would think it would be longer that that.

2011-04-25 18:57:00 Author: Cactii Posts: 426

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What do you want it to be a phoneix bird And The Product name in front and a copyright message below *edit* this Is Version 1.0 If you want me to change anything or add anything I would be pleased to http://i1209.photobucket.com/albums/cc395/photoman1002/MyPhoneixlogo.jpg?t=1303758030

2011-04-25 19:38:00 Author: butter-kicker Posts: 1061

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i might make my own. thanks for asking.

2011-04-25 20:00:00 Author: Cactii Posts: 426

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Okay im fine with that *whispers to self* everyones a critic

2011-04-25 20:03:00 Author: butter-kicker Posts: 1061

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