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James Sack: Men in black

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James Sack: Men in blackpataponkoSVK
Join the adventures of James Sack, which runs around Phantasy World and meet different people and creatures
This is my first level, so I hope you like it Screenshots coming soon I don't know publish it now due shutdown of PSN This is only first level from series, so if you have some ideas, share it please :! Sorry for bad English, I am from Slovakia.
*UPDATE* IT?S OUT NOW !!
2011-04-23 20:24:00

Author:
Unknown User


hey a friend of mine has family there
his name ian smolderen perhaps you know him ?
for your level it sure sounds interesting ill give it a go once PSN is back up
if you can be bothered
go and give meh tree of life a go and leave some feedback
2011-04-23 21:23:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


It's out now !!!2011-05-17 15:34:00

Author:
Unknown User


FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
Cant get online :'(
2011-05-17 16:53:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


I'll be sure to try this, Hopefully I'll leave feedback by tomorrow. 2011-05-17 20:47:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


I got to play this and leave feedback as soon as I get my psp back!


Finally a new level!
2011-05-18 16:31:00

Author:
aceofthorns
Posts: 288


in this time i preparing a new version of level with secret room filled with bubbles 2011-05-21 19:06:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hai I played your level and I kinda liked it.
BUT ... theres one issue.
I cant understand the characters dialogue sometimes.
The grammar isn't that good.
But the gameplay was so you got a 4:star:'s from me.
2011-05-22 12:45:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


thanks ! I dont know English very well, but in v2 it will be fixed 2011-05-22 16:37:00

Author:
Unknown User


As promised, I'm here with the feedback.


The Bads

Inadaquate Dialogue Clearity
-Not to repeat what nys said, but a lot of the dialogue wasn't very clear; aside from the grammer. I personally found it a little confusing after I deciphered it.

On & Off
-This is a personal dislike, and I did not let it hinder the final score. On & Off in my opinion shows a lack of skill in the creating profession, unfortunately there was a lot of switches/pistons set to on & off. Not a big deal, just a personal issue.

Lack of Corner Editing
-As I was playing through this level, I did notice a lack of corner editing, and an excessive use of the brush feature.

The Goods

The Gameplay Was Solid
-It kept me involved, and left with a positive feeling

A Smashing First
-I've noticed this is your first published level (or the only one on your published levels) so, as a first this level is brilliant. I applaud the indirected talent I hastily took note of at the beginning of the level. Just stick to the feedback people give you, and you'll be an Ace at creating.

The What

"Pi♣♣ed in my Pants", Seriously?
-Just a quick note, vulgar language (though the word used is hardly classified as vulgar these days) is frowned upon on the LittleBigCommunities of the world, nothing serious, just a little denote for future referance.

Overall, I gave you 2+2 = :star: (4 stars)
Good luck on any future endeavors. ^.^
2011-05-23 16:51:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


As promised, I'm here with the feedback.


The Bads

Inadaquate Dialogue Clearity
-Not to repeat what nys said, but a lot of the dialogue wasn't very clear; aside from the grammer. I personally found it a little confusing after I deciphered it.

On & Off
-This is a personal dislike, and I did not let it hinder the final score. On & Off in my opinion shows a lack of skill in the creating profession, unfortunately there was a lot of switches/pistons set to on & off. Not a big deal, just a personal issue.

Lack of Corner Editing
-As I was playing through this level, I did notice a lack of corner editing, and an excessive use of the brush feature.

The Goods

The Gameplay Was Solid
-It kept me involved, and left with a positive feeling

A Smashing First
-I've noticed this is your first published level (or the only one on your published levels) so, as a first this level is brilliant. I applaud the indirected talent I hastily took note of at the beginning of the level. Just stick to the feedback people give you, and you'll be an Ace at creating.

The What

"Pi♣♣ed in my Pants", Seriously?
-Just a quick note, vulgar language (though the word used is hardly classified as vulgar these days) is frowned upon on the LittleBigCommunities of the world, nothing serious, just a little denote for future referance.

Overall, I gave you 2+2 = :star: (4 stars)
Good luck on any future endeavors. ^.^

as i tell, all dialogues will be fixed in v2, and i really improve my level... my next level will be better... his name is James Sack: Sack Andreas and thanks ! i hope you like my level
2011-05-23 17:21:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hey, mah lv is called sack andreas. 2011-05-23 17:47:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


Hey, mah lv is called sack andreas.

sorry ! i rename it to san sackandreas
2011-05-23 18:15:00

Author:
Unknown User


Nah, its cooler with the first name, don't change it. 2011-05-23 20:58:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


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