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Archeological Atrocities

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http://lbp.me/v/z2t4hn


This is my first level. I know its short, but I'm still learning. If you like it let me know.

http://i4.lbp.me/img/ft/3d4465e7deee7c7155593d339c2c289fc0ddc503.jpg

http://ia.lbp.me/img/ft/8ba037865016d90919556911d5ca929282a98a39.jpg

http://ic.lbp.me/img/ft/c8c8b6d76fec001eec4ea523482af20e0faf8d93.jpg

http://id.lbp.me/img/ft/5cd069d0780843be7d14846afc7fb78ae557f4a5.jpg
2011-04-16 08:49:00

Author:
Unknown User


Queued up, I'll check it out when I get home from work (about 8-9 hours from now). Looks good!2011-04-16 19:24:00

Author:
EvilWuun
Posts: 152


Queued, will check it out soon. Here's my level, would like some feedback (I have a thread up also, you can respond in that one).

http://lbp.me/v/zzm3ge
2011-04-16 19:28:00

Author:
Unknown User


Queued, Ill make sure to try it out soon 2011-04-16 20:01:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hello,

I've tried your level, and for a first level, it's awesome. It's maybe short, but it's a really good and fun platformer, with beautifull sceneries. The level looks really great, was fun to play, I cannot see any flaw here.

Good job !

If you have the time to look at my level for F4F, here is the link (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=54330-Dr-Who-Lost-soul-1P-Only).
2011-04-17 01:25:00

Author:
Slurm
Posts: 262


Oh Yeah!

This is one of those hidden away levels that deserves far more attention! But it's a bit on the short side.. Would love to see more.
(maybe that's why it is short, to make us want more..)

Extremely detailed and beautifully crafted. I lol'ed at the goats. Good Work!

See sig for F4F.
2011-04-17 13:48:00

Author:
Discosmurf
Posts: 210


Just went through this level, and I'm glad my Sunday started this good.

Hammertoe_1, excellent job! Motion physics of the game is calculated very carefully, cameras are perfect, lighting is just right, I love all those little details, like green ivy with a few life leaves and either flowers or berries (those little red ones), like usage of natural looking types of wood.... Those goats are super!))) You must be an artist to draw like that))))... Oh, I found the right word for this level: AR-TIS-TIC!)))))
2011-04-17 15:55:00

Author:
Unknown User


Your first level!?! Those screenshots look terrific! I already have it qued. Expect a nice juicy heart if your screenshots hold up to their promises

Also, can you check out my latest masterpiece? It's a cover of the Rise Against song "Re-Education" and I think I've got it pretty much nailed perfectly You be the judge of that though lol http://lbp.me/v/z4zhf7
2011-04-17 18:15:00

Author:
Nick930930
Posts: 878


Oh Yeah!

This is one of those hidden away levels that deserves far more attention! But it's a bit on the short side.. Would love to see more.
(maybe that's why it is short, to make us want more..)

Extremely detailed and beautifully crafted. I lol'ed at the goats. Good Work!


Thank you very much. It's short cause I don't know how to conserve thermo well. Trying to do that on part 2. We'll see how that goes.
2011-04-18 16:17:00

Author:
Unknown User


A little tip on how to improve your post a little(as well as little bump to get more attention for your lvl):

Instead of placing links to your LBP.me pics that people have to click, place the URL as a pic in the post either by using the Image button on the editor or use the your url here command.

It will look more inviting and hopefully tempt more players.
2011-04-18 16:45:00

Author:
Discosmurf
Posts: 210


Why do you excuse yourself its well looking I think Im going to play it2011-04-18 17:57:00

Author:
Erebus
Posts: 79


A little tip on how to improve your post a little(as well as little bump to get more attention for your lvl):

Instead of placing links to your LBP.me pics that people have to click, place the URL as a pic in the post either by using the Image button on the editor or use the your url here command.

It will look more inviting and hopefully tempt more players.

Thanks for the advice. It does look much better now.
2011-04-18 18:00:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hammertoe_1, you are not only a good level creator, but also generous enough to share a wise advice. Thank you for doing it at my level, now I know there are some grammar mistakes in it. The only problem is, I'm not a native English speaker, therefore it's hard for me to see my own mistakes. Spell checkers are not grammar checkers, you know - they don't work in this case. So, could you be so kind as to become my friend and help me out with that, whenever it would be convenient for you. Because I feel dramatically embarrassed of the mistakes I've done.2011-04-18 19:39:00

Author:
Unknown User


Feedback

Rated:

Positives:
+3D mountains looked really good
+Enivironment of the level looked pretty good
+mountain goats were well made
+Platforming was pretty good
+Visuals looked good

Negatives:
-No negatives
2011-04-18 20:01:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


Hammertoe_1, you are not only a good level creator, but also generous enough to share a wise advice. Thank you for doing it at my level, now I know there are some grammar mistakes in it. The only problem is, I'm not a native English speaker, therefore it's hard for me to see my own mistakes. Spell checkers are not grammar checkers, you know - they don't work in this case. So, could you be so kind as to become my friend and help me out with that, whenever it would be convenient for you. Because I feel dramatically embarrassed of the mistakes I've done.

That would be great. I'll replay the level when I have some time and offer you suggestions for the dialogue.

2011-04-18 22:54:00

Author:
Unknown User


Pleasantly surprised here. Wouldn't have guessed it was your first level. Keep up the good work. Based on this, I could see you doing some pretty cool stuff.2011-04-19 05:32:00

Author:
nextlevel88
Posts: 149


wow, from the screenshots, you wouldn't guess it to be a first level. putting it in the queue. I hope to get to it this weekend.2011-04-19 14:59:00

Author:
biorogue
Posts: 8424


Looks good. I'll Queue it up for later tonight-feedback will follow. F4F below.

J
2011-04-19 17:46:00

Author:
Unknown User


This level is gorgeous, the goats are hilarious, platforming elements are fun, and I had a great time playing the level. I eagerly await a follow-on level. I hope this one continues to draw attention. My only suggestion is a better arrangement of respawn points, or more of them, as there were a couple times I died and had to retrace a lot of steps. Also, it looked like I could jump right from the goat who's thinking of a song (I think), and that leads to death, so maybe make it clearer not to go there.

The fun, funny, and exciting style of this level reminds me a bit of my Sacknight series. If you're interested, please check it out (links in signature below).
2011-04-20 05:07:00

Author:
Hoplyte
Posts: 100


Beautiful level the mountains,the tents, the goats and the caves. I loved the rope ladders hanging it really gave that archeological vibe. Your earth was very cool looking as well.

I came across one thing though the second time through, the sackbot at the end didn't open the scoreboard until I talked to him again? The score bubbles are glued in place so they don't fall like they usually do, that's the only thing that could change. Awesome level, will be on the look out for part 2!

Try any of the levels from my signature if you like.
2011-04-20 19:54:00

Author:
Ace29
Posts: 132


Beautiful level the mountains,the tents, the goats and the caves. I loved the rope ladders hanging it really gave that archeological vibe. Your earth was very cool looking as well.

I came across one thing though the second time through, the sackbot at the end didn't open the scoreboard until I talked to him again? The score bubbles are glued in place so they don't fall like they usually do, that's the only thing that could change. Awesome level, will be on the look out for part 2!

Try any of the levels from my signature if you like.

The scoreboard is actually on a player sensor connected to a timer. There is a 4th gem hidden at the end, and I wanted people to have a chance to find it.

Thank you very much for the kind words.
2011-04-21 18:10:00

Author:
Unknown User


This level is gorgeous, the goats are hilarious, platforming elements are fun, and I had a great time playing the level. I eagerly await a follow-on level. I hope this one continues to draw attention. My only suggestion is a better arrangement of respawn points, or more of them, as there were a couple times I died and had to retrace a lot of steps. Also, it looked like I could jump right from the goat who's thinking of a song (I think), and that leads to death, so maybe make it clearer not to go there.

The fun, funny, and exciting style of this level reminds me a bit of my Sacknight series. If you're interested, please check it out (links in signature below).


I was actually afraid that people wouldn't die at all in my level; that i had made it too easy. I will keep the checkpoint thing in mind for future episodes. I may republish with an invisible wall in place once PSN is up and running again.
2011-04-21 18:13:00

Author:
Unknown User


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