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Highschool ~Winter Euphoria~ Part 2

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http://lbp.me/v/zzp856
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5268/5615339444_fef0806a7d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jowife1993/5615339444/)

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5265/5615652041_4482d62999_s.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jowife1993/5615652041/)
Link to first level- Highschool ~Winter Euphoria~ (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=48496-Highschool-Winter-Euphoria)

Okay so this is part 2 of the series and after about a month of procrastinating I finally have it finished. You may ask what took me so long, well part two contains voice acting by me and my family. ^^ Part 3 will be up as soon as I finish it. This level simply introduces a couple more characters to the story. I hope you all enjoy.

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5227/5614758777_773e1b9cca.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jowife1993/5614758777/)

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5262/5614758837_0bb142fd91.jpg (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=48496-Highschool-Winter-Euphoria)

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5265/5614758805_db9e43a58f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jowife1993/5614758805/)
http://lbp.me/v/w6pc9k
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5261/5614758741_b679736d02.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jowife1993/5614758741/)



http://lbp.me/v/zzp856		2011-04-13 04:28:00

Author:
jowife1993
Posts: 80

lol this should be interesting. queued2011-04-13 05:58:00

Author:
Unknown User

Thanx galaxyinapot ^^

If anyone notices and problems please be sure to tell me. This includes anything from a design flaw to a magic mouth issue.		2011-04-13 15:28:00

Author:
jowife1993
Posts: 80

the words Winter Euphoria part 2 made me automatically put it on my que2011-04-15 05:30:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

I really enjoyed your level. I found it by accident which was nice. It had a great atmosphere with some fantastic level design and camera work. The voice acting was really impressive.2011-04-15 07:44:00

Author:
Aven1981_UK
Posts: 51

Looks cool, I'll be sure to check this out when I get the chance.2011-04-15 10:00:00

Author:
CYBERSNAKE
Posts: 280

Haha, it's a sack teen dating sim? I've joked in the past about making a dating sim in LBP1, so I thought this could be interesting. Unfortunately I don't think I got too terribly far. I skipped two classes and talked to the girl about her drama and the boy about his video games. I was on my way home when I jumped in front of the school, and my sack tried landing on/in one of the pine trees in the background. This caused me to SPLAT and the level ended, evidently because the entrance was destroyed. I guess this could use more checkpoints just cause you never know when something will go wrong. I might have to check this out again later and just be more careful.

Edit: Whoops, I just realized that I'm talking about Part 1! d'oh		2011-04-16 22:10:00

Author:
discokrakken
Posts: 108

played it and you sure now how to make a good sequel.
+Love the voice acting, normally i dont like voice acting in levels (because sometimes there just terrible)
+Great movie shots, especially the scene with the cousin (was it the cousin, i dont remember)
+Fun snowmobile minigame
things that you can add if its possible
-add the snowmobile minigame again at night
-maybe add a timer to reach to the house fast before the brother comes home,and if you failed to reach there on time the normal ending will playout like a bad ending, but thats just my suggestion.		2011-04-17 05:20:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

That's a cool suggestion! I'll see if I can do that with what thermo I have left ^^2011-04-17 07:19:00

Author:
jowife1993
Posts: 80

Haha, it's a sack teen dating sim? I've joked in the past about making a dating sim in LBP1, so I thought this could be interesting. Unfortunately I don't think I got too terribly far. I skipped two classes and talked to the girl about her drama and the boy about his video games. I was on my way home when I jumped in front of the school, and my sack tried landing on/in one of the pine trees in the background. This caused me to SPLAT and the level ended, evidently because the entrance was destroyed. I guess this could use more checkpoints just cause you never know when something will go wrong. I might have to check this out again later and just be more careful.

Edit: Whoops, I just realized that I'm talking about Part 1! d'oh

I left check points out to prevent anyone from playing with more than one player		2011-04-17 07:22:00

Author:
jowife1993
Posts: 80

I left check points out to prevent anyone from playing with more than one player
Really? I didn't have any idea you could do that, but I was curious if it's possible. Do you just destroy the entrance when 1 player is detected, so it doesn't spit out players 2-4?		2011-04-17 16:06:00

Author:
discokrakken
Posts: 108

I'm not usually a big fan of these high school/3D layer glitch levels but I'll check it out. That snowmobile looks really cool!

Also, can you check out my latest masterpiece? It's a cover of the Rise Against song "Re-Education" and I think I've got it pretty much nailed perfectly You be the judge of that though lol http://lbp.me/v/z4zhf7		2011-04-17 18:13:00

Author:
Nick930930
Posts: 878

I left check points out to prevent anyone from playing with more than one player

I teleport one player while simultaneously killing all other player lol. After that u'll no longer be in range of any checkpoints.		2011-04-17 21:44:00

Author:
jowife1993
Posts: 80

Ok, here I am at the lvl right now. First of - very creative way of sounding the dialogues out. Cool. Next thing I love - the very detailed and accurately implemented interior, I love that glass table, sofa is really neat. There are even floor and wall moldings. I did it too, for some reason I find it important for the better realistic look. The chair at the desk makes you wann a sit on it, lol. Even computer monitor is widescreen! Neat! 3D race is awesome. After seing Anya, IDK what to do next and how to get out the cafeteria. Probably I haven't heard Anya's instructions. Will try it again later.2011-04-17 23:17:00

Author:
Unknown User

Ok, here I am at the lvl right now. First of - very creative way of sounding the dialogues out. Cool. Next thing I love - the very detailed and accurately implemented interior, I love that glass table, sofa is really neat. There are even floor and wall moldings. I did it too, for some reason I find it important for the better realistic look. The chair at the desk makes you wann a sit on it, lol. Even computer monitor is widescreen! Neat! 3D race is awesome. After seing Anya, IDK what to do next and how to get out the cafeteria. Probably I haven't heard Anya's instructions. Will try it again later.

Sorry I guess I need to make the exit more visible. The exit is a glowing patch on the floor that u r1 on. I have a good idea of how i can make it more visible though ^^ thanx for the input		2011-04-18 04:41:00

Author:
jowife1993
Posts: 80

Hey Jowife,

I played part 1 and 2, and I've got to say, your level has got amazing visuals. Obviously a ton of work went into character design, level layout, building detail and screenplay, and all of it shows. Well done!

The voice acting is superb as well. Quite professional, I must say.

Gameplay and plot complement each other well and are entirely enjoyable. I sure hope you end up finishing the narrative! Side note: Canadian characters are awesome.

That said, my biggest gripe (and this applies to both parts) are the subtitles and text! The rest of the levels come across as professional and polished, but some of the speech bubbles read more like IMs. While there are certain things emoticons and text-speak convey, I think it would be worth the extra effort to leave all that to Sackbot animation. You manage just fine during cutscenes, for example. There are also quite a few times when the voiceovers paraphrase the subtitles and so they don't actually match, and that comes across as a little sloppy. Obviously this could turn out to be a major undertaking, so on the short term, I would really suggest looking for typos. The most glaring one I noticed was "stear" for "steer" for the snowmobile controls.

So. Can't wait to see what you do with the series. Well done!		2011-04-18 06:02:00

Author:
Fobstar49
Posts: 75

Wow thanx for the great advice ^^ I'll remove all the faces from my text and I'll be sure to correct those mistakes =D2011-04-18 13:26:00

Author:
jowife1993
Posts: 80

really great level the voice overs were brilliant and the argue of the mother and the son was really well made 2011-04-18 18:26:00

Author:
Unknown User

Thank you ^^2011-05-23 23:48:00

Author:
jowife1993
Posts: 80

Wow great job on the level. Voice acting was awesome. Plot and dialogue was great. I appreciated the environments and how detailed they were. However, the snowmobile got stuck in a tree haha so I had to go straight to town. Maybe add some invisible bumpers to prevent that from happening? I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job!

If you could play my new level Emeria (thread (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=56855-Emeria&p=853199) / lbp.me (http://lbp.me/v/yzfc42)) and leave some feedback in my thread that would be great. Thanks for your level!		2011-05-24 04:52:00

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Unknown User


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