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Here Is The Current News Feed And Chapters for My Novel. LUCID SKIES FO DEPRESSION is a Story About The Local Goverment's Hold Against The Country, Expect Cameo's, Drama, And ACTION....Here Goes The First Chapter! CHAPTER 1 DARK TIMES Secetary Of War's Office 10:00 > 10:50 The Phone Rang For The Hundrenth Time This Morning, Reluclantley Martin Lake Answered The Phone Call As his Job Required and Answered "Martin Laker, Secetary of War" With A fake Sound Of Joy in His Voice "How Can I Be of Assisstance" A Rather Groan Like Voice Answered "Mr Laker, We Have More Evidence About A Rebel Cult If you Wish Too Investigate" "Might As Well, Please Have My Receptionist Bring It Up to My Office" He Sighed. Martin Put Down The Phone,Turned And Stared Out The Window, There Was Something Different...The Skies....THE SKIES! THERE LUCID, This Was A sight Of which Was Never Seen Before. Unable to See The Pure Beauty Of this, Martin Just Said "That Is rather Unusual" Turned Again to His Desk and Sighed...Again, Head Bowed Only For A second as His Receptionist Enters The Office and he Raises His Head saying "What Is It This Time Stacy" She Instantly Replied "Looks Like another Suspected Weapon Workshop" She Placed At his Desk and smiled "Hang In there Martin" and Walked out. Martin Had a Confused Look on his face Now Knowing He wasn't able to Hide His Desire to Leave. He Just Sighed Though And Looked at the Evidence. Chapter 2 94 DrewMasin Road 11:00 He stood there as Donnie Milf and Read Aloud From The Newspaper "More Rumours Of A Rebel Cult. As suspected Before There are Chances of A Rebel Cult Forming Inside The Country and They Seem To Be Of the Violent Type As Reports Of a Murder Inside The town Hall and Has not yet Been Confirmed...." He Threw It Down In anger. "Calm Down Donnie" Bellowed A tall Adolescent. "How Can I Jose, They Are Framing us and Are Even Calling Us A cult, A CULT." "Do You Really Think That The People Of Craming Are That Stupid and Beside's It is A nice Day No One Could Care Less, I mean The Sky Is Litreally Glowing" Jose Remarked. Donnie Swiftly Replied "You Would Be Suprised Of what The People Can Do Jose" He Then Grabbed His Coat and And Exited The House Slamming The door Behind him" Jose Sat Down with his Head In his hands, Pulled a Sword and Said "I Think It is time I discuss my Plan With the others" The Sword Glistened! Chapter 3 The Start Of the war Heinfield Town Centre 14:00 Donnie Stumbled around the Town Centre, in fear , in fear that others would Fear him. More Than a Couple of people Knew he was the leader of this so called "Rebel Cult". Donnie Froze.....His eyes Caught those Of A Legion Guardian, The security of the Town. Donnie Held his breath as the The Guardian Walked His way towards Donnie and Told him "Are you Donnie Molf, leader Of the Rebel Cult, Violent Dictator" Donnie Was Breathless and Frozen To the Spot, Before he could Reply the Guardian Shouted "Yes, Yes You are" and Beat Donnie around the head with the Nozzle Of His gun. Donnie Fell To the floor as blood Started to drip from a cut in his head, It Dropped on the floor silentley, And so Did donnie! The Guardian Said to another close By "Take Him To cell 19, He is scheduled For Execution tommorrow Morning" What Do you Think? I Know It's A bit Amateurish but I tried Hard

2011-04-12 15:35:00 Author: butter-kicker Posts: 1061

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sounds good B-K it is better than everything i would ever write keep goin' man later if you are a great author i can say: I PLAYED HIS LEVELS YAAAY

2011-04-12 17:54:00 Author: nysudyrgh Posts: 5482

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Thank You nysudyrgh. But Im Sure You Could Write One If You Tried Man Anyway.... UPDATE CHAPTER 2

2011-04-13 10:21:00 Author: butter-kicker Posts: 1061

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This was a little tough to read with very few periods :/

2011-04-13 21:10:00 Author: anoken Posts: 1654

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no icant im like supa bad at writing stuff

2011-04-21 19:29:00 Author: nysudyrgh Posts: 5482

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yeah, I write to, im not very good, but heres my latest work: I woke up to the thick aroma of fresh coffee, a smell un-common to my quiet, shared, apartment, so I know today must be special. I step into the empty hallway and continue on into our small kitchen, where I find my older brother, Jamnes, stirring a cup of coffee."Whats this?" I say, seeing how my brother never makes coffee. He says "Can't a guy make some coffee?" "Of course.." I say, in disbelief of his sudden responsibility,"But since when did you stop buying your coffee from the convient store?" "Well today.......I'm celebrating!" "...what?" "I got accepted to begin training for the Marines!" "Well, You ARE very fit, I can imagine why they want YOU." "Your right" He says, and hands me the second cup of coffee. I take his generous offer, and sit at the dining room table. I spent most of the day talking to Jamnes about what this means, and how dangerous it could be, but he understands. "I have to make a difference," Is all he manages to say. Chapter one The next day, I’m yet again waking up to the smell of my brother making coffee, I jump out of bed and begin walking over to the kitchen. As I walk into the kitchen, when I begin to Greet my brother, All I see is a puddle of coffee where He stood just yesterday morning."Jamnes?" I yell, "Where are you?" Then I notice a card, floating towards the center of a spill of still warm coffee. It has my name on it, in blue ink. Dear Rain, I have Jamnes, We will meet some time soon. If you try to run, I WILL find you, And make sure you see Jamnes, But if you want him ALIVE,You cannot get away this time....

2011-04-24 20:35:00 Author: Unknown User

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butter-kicker, I really like your book so far, If it's ever finished, I'd love to read it. If you add to it, and if you want to show me, I can give you my email and you could send me it? It's a very interesting story, and I want to read more of it.

2011-04-24 20:41:00 Author: Unknown User

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I Love to hear someone is Liking the Story so far and H3ART_BR3AK_T3CH, your work is GREAT. You should Try and Expand It More as I would Love to read the full story. ADDING CHAPTER 3

2011-04-24 20:44:00 Author: butter-kicker Posts: 1061

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Hey, i know tht im just some creator but i have an idea for paragraph 4, When donnie woke, his head ached like never before. The floor was cold and sent chills up his spine. "Take it, stupid boy" said a voice through the small slot. There was a tray in the man's hand.The man dropped the tray on the floor and spat at donnie. "rebels are (insert rude word here?)" sighed the unidentified man. Donnie reached for the tray, carefully avoiding the mess that man left behind. He was disappointed to see that the tray only held a cup of muddy water and a crusty sandwich. Donnie scarfed the disgusting sandwich down and took a gulp of the murky water. Horrible, was the only word to describe this food. He pushed the tray to the wall and it clanked across the room. Donnie wondered how much longer he had left to live, and if execution would be better than his current predicament. You can use that paragraph if you want to, and revise it as you want, .

2011-04-26 01:07:00 Author: Unknown User

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I like my paragraph use it if ya want to, but don't use it "just cuz' it's the nice thing to do" Only use it if ya want to

2011-04-26 01:09:00 Author: Unknown User

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I Am actually going to use It becuase its amazing.....but i will extend it a bit ok! =) Thxs a bunch

2011-04-26 16:03:00 Author: butter-kicker Posts: 1061

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yay1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2011-04-28 00:43:00 Author: Unknown User

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