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Capturing Da Vinci

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Hi,

This level was the first of a series of levels that I've made over the last month. It was first published over a month ago and had only managed around 25 plays, which is disappointing considering the amount of effort that has gone into this level and the rest of the series.

The end of each level links to the next in the series, so if you want to play them as well they won't be hard to get to.

Anyway, if you decide to, thanks for playing. Hope you enjoy it.
http://lbp.me/v/xpbb3k
2011-04-02 23:27:00

Author:
TehSpecialOne
Posts: 2


It may help posting as an F4F thread instead and then play and give feedback on other F4F levels. And mate, stay positive

Qued your level and if you want to, check this out: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=49447-Secrets-of-Science-Chapter-1-No-Time-to-Lose

Feedback is highly appreciated, good and bad. And please, post in the thread if you choose to give FB.

EDIT: Ok, just played your level and here's some HONEST feedback.

Thing is, when it comes to level design, you've done a pretty good job. Good flow and pacing!
I can tell that you spent some time playtesting a couple of the bouncepad "combos". Love it!
But, then again, there is one aspect that you haven't spent any time on, and that's appearance:
Every level that starts off with just an entrance on a level floor is going to put a looooot of people off!
It's one of the Unwritten Rules of Level design.
And it wouldn't hurt to add some decorations and stickers and maybe try not to make everything look so.. "square".

Bottom line, this is a good start. Now build on it.
I still liked it.
2011-04-03 11:14:00

Author:
Discosmurf
Posts: 210


queued i'll make sure to play it later 2011-04-03 15:25:00

Author:
Unknown User


Thanks for the advice. I'm never really sure what to do to make levels look nicer though. Always spend a while trying to make sure the levels are fun to play, guess I don't put enough thought into how it looks.2011-04-03 20:28:00

Author:
TehSpecialOne
Posts: 2


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