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Donkey Derby
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| hey guys please can i get some constructive feedback on my donkey derby level. its kinda like track & field but with donkeys! fun for all the family  many thanks http://lbp.me/v/zhjpvr | 2011-03-31 14:23:00 Author: Unknown User  |
| Great idea, it actually inspired me to work on an idea that I had a while back. I would just have to say that it is a little short and I would like to see it expanded. Maybe make the donkey fall over for a sec if you are in the red too long, that kind of stuff. Nice work so far though, just a little short. F4F the level at the bottom of my sig. | 2011-03-31 15:36:00 Author: tru3_skitz0  Posts: 114 |
Yea I played this with my friend and it really made fun, because... i won  no i liked the donkeys, but you could definetely improve the design. espeacially the design of the end Screen. everything looked so quickmade (design) so you gotta improve this and maybe make it more daylight, if you know what i mean. add clouds, and decoration to give it the extra touch. After all not a bad level F4F: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=54067-LabGen-A-Labyrinth-Generator | 2011-03-31 16:34:00 Author: Wohlerzock  Posts: 50 |
| hey thanks for feedback have added a boost indicator last night. i wanted to make the level simple in design but i guess it can always be improved will return fb once the servers are working again cheers | 2011-04-01 09:23:00 Author: Unknown User |
| I liked your donkey's they are adorable. The race gameplay is good. Would be great with for four players too, don't know if you would want to because the donkeys would have to be one thin layer thick. If only one player is playing maybe having A.I. control the second donkey not too fast, but fast enough to make it interesting. Good level, good concept. YAY! | 2011-04-10 17:17:00 Author: Ace29  Posts: 132 |
| Queued it up! My level is in my sig | 2011-04-10 20:02:00 Author: agsrule  Posts: 89 |
| Hey man, tried your level last night. It does what it says on the tin, doesn't it? It was a cute idea, I liked the design of the donkeys, I liked the speedometer as well. The background and scenery seemed a bit...well, non-existent? It would be awesome if you could have added spectators or even something small like that. I thought the race was maybe a bit long as well, but not by much. Overall it wasn't bad, just lacking a bit of polish here and there. My level is in my sig, thanks | 2011-04-11 12:59:00 Author: agsrule Posts: 89 |
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