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Ok ive completed the the little Mario section at the begininng and now the next stage to create is the cliff to be climbed and the Swam Hut Tribes village, anyone think my storys good? Your in your SAK voyager 102 and it breaks down in the skies and you crash land in Marios world, after hearing from Mario and luigi that their land is getting destroyed by a certain people. you venture on and find a big cliff to scale. You climb it and once at the top are told the only way down is to jump. You jump down and find yourself in a tribal village. All wooden huts connected by rickety bridges held up by rope connected to the tress as it is suspended just above a swamp full of crocodiles. You find out this is the village of the Swamp Hut Tribe. You find out they have nowhere else to live since they got booted out of their world by dinosaurs so they carved out a living in Marios world. You get out of the village by swinging on ropes , using rickety bridges, dodging the swamp crocodiles. You make it out and then run through a mini jungle and finally are warned that ahead lies Dino island. You walk on hear dinosaurs and the level is finished.

2008-11-29 22:01:00 Author: Kaplan_T3 Posts: 51

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That sounds very complex indeed... not sure I followed it all, there were many ideas fired off in rapid sucession... The one thing I would change is the references to Super Mario Brothers. Make up your own characters instead. That way you have less chance of being moderated. It also might allow you more freedom to be creative as well instead of following other ideas too closely. All of those things I believe could happen with out the Mario direct references, so hopefully this helps.

2008-11-30 12:13:00 Author: Elbee23 Posts: 1280

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mm ok thnx, the mario bit is only in the begininng as i wanted a well known character to kick start the level. basically Sackboy crash lands in marios land --> climbs cliff> jumps down and lands in swamp hut tribal area , navigates his way out ---> runs through mini jungle---> warned dino island lies ahead---> end of level

2008-11-30 14:22:00 Author: Kaplan_T3 Posts: 51

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