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Hey whats happening guys with the pies and the girls with the..twirls!

(Dont worry, i'm never gonna say that awful ryhme ever again )

I have a great idea for a series that i'm gonna do, called "The Office"

But in no way is it related to the comedy central show "The Office".
Because they both have the same name, i'm thinking of changing it, but for now, it's The Office.

It is set in an office called (INSERT NAME HERE PLZ), and nobody likes working there. The manager is called "The Boss" and he is evil and wants to..well your gonna have to find out . Nobody likes The Boss either.

And now the hero of the series is Jeff, who is dumb, nearly always happy, and does stupid things to pass the time (Eg. How many stuff can you break when you slam the photocopyer into The Bosses Office.) (He is cliche, I know)

Secondly there is his best friend who is named (INSERT NAME HERE PZ). He is basicly like Jeff but stronger and cleverer. (Only, like 2.3% cleverer than Jeff, but meh, it's enough).

Then there is a strange guy, called (INSERT NAME HERE PZ), who is keeping two swords in his back for protection, and hardly ever speaks.

After that there are two weirdos that no one likes called ClockBoy and CakeBoy. ClockBoy has a cake on his head, and CakeBoy has a clock on his head (yes, I did not make a mistake, it's meant to be like that). They are the only people in the place they work who like working there.

And last but not least (last so far anyway), there is a girl called Cassandra, who Jeff likes (Cliche bell). She is hard working, always gets the job done..and when she is bored sometimes gets involved in Jeff?s stupid plans.

So, what do you think? Good? Bad? Super clich??
There will be minigames for The Office (usually your player as Jeff, and you have to do one of his pranks or other stupid antics) that I will make around episode 3.

So, tell me what you think guys!
2011-03-21 08:59:00

Author:
Doooomguy
Posts: 68


P.S
Dont steal my idea or I will cut of your lower horn (Futurama Refrence ).

P.S.S
If you manage to help me in any way, your name will be in the credits (Special Thanks or something).
2011-03-21 09:00:00

Author:
Doooomguy
Posts: 68


Hello, a you know, I'm crap at logic so I could help make the office(INSERT NAME HERE PLZ) ?
*sigh* I just deleted my Demon's Souls data. -_- back to work......
2011-03-22 21:55:00

Author:
TheLittleSoAndSo
Posts: 181


[QUOTE=TheLittleSoAndSo;811405] I'm crap at logic so I could help make the office ?
QUOTE]

So you want to help me make V.H.V Office (Verry Happy Values Office, the new, cool, hip name! ) because your crap at logic? Lol.

But as everyone (whos met you) knows, your great and making detailed objects and stuff, so you could help design VHV Office!

I''m sorry that you deleted your Demon's Souls data..(unless you did it on purpose)

My LBP2 data got corrupted on the last level, and I had to start. All. Over. Again.
2011-03-24 21:29:00

Author:
Doooomguy
Posts: 68


Hello....

I have some ideas.

And some issues.

Ideas: (YAY!!! Always make them feel happy first)

1. I say the boss man is short. And before it ever shows him, the characters talk about what he looks like and what they've heard about him. Like he eats belts for breakfast and drinks the blood of unicorns. (Or tigers)

2. Maybe make jokes about what they do. Like "Today men, we will make doilies." Then the next episode they make coffee cups or nuclear warheads.

3. The outside of the facility could look like a giant metal factory. With steam chimneys and the giant logo.

4. Maybe there's a guy that they always blame the things on. He always gets dragged away and tortured. Then he returns like nothing happened or he's scared or scarred, maybe even jumpy. Maybe even a scene where he's dragged off-screen and all the viewer sees are sparks coming from where he was dragged. Also, yelling. Maybe it zooms onto the main dude's face and he's watching and smiling, then a sad face.

5. Cake and Clock could have the stupidest personalities. Like they do what ever they're told. Be it the boss or Jeff.

6. Instead of the girl doing the pranks with him, maybe Jeff could be trying to impress her, but she likes Ima Spii. Because his name sounds "exotic". Ima's not interested though. (refer to Issues: #5 below)


Issues: (THEN WRECK THEIR SOULS INTO THE GROUND!!! :kz

1. The name. What is wrong with you... O_o lol IT'S PERFECT!!! Sort of. Why not just call it "Happy Values Inc." or "Insert Name Inc." You can have a logo that's a smily face, but looks a little creepy.

2. Mood. How much of the silliness will you use. We talking "The Office" silliness, we talking "Ren & Stimpy" psychoticness here, or is it the EgoRaptor way?

3. There needs to be a reason as to why he never gets fired.

4. The main guy should always be the center of attention. If the friend is better than the main dude, people won't care for Jeff as much. Maybe the friend is just as dumb, not cleverer, and they come up with ideas together.

5. The guy with the swords sounds too anime-ish. Maybe you could switch him out for a not-so-good-at-his-job FBI spy. His "name" could be, "Underc Over" or "Incog Neeto". Maybe even "Ima Spii". And he wears a suit or a shirt that says "FBI" or "I'm not FBI, seriously".


I can't think of anything else right now, but I guess these are good ideas.
2011-03-24 22:33:00

Author:
Devious_Oatmeal
Posts: 1799


[QUOTE=TheLittleSoAndSo;811405] I'm crap at logic so I could help make the office ?
QUOTE]

So you want to help me make V.H.V Office (Verry Happy Values Office, the new, cool, hip name! ) because your crap at logic? Lol.

But as everyone (whos met you) knows, your great and making detailed objects and stuff, so you could help design VHV Office!

I''m sorry that you deleted your Demon's Souls data..(unless you did it on purpose)

My LBP2 data got corrupted on the last level, and I had to start. All. Over. Again.

Lol it was an accident, I was only trying to get rid of a save profile on lbp1 but i wasn't listening lol - I also think the guy above me has some good ideas...
Tell me what you want to make and it's done, you know me ibby (:... I think :S
2011-03-24 22:50:00

Author:
TheLittleSoAndSo
Posts: 181


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