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|New Spheres| - My new series!

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Hello there!

I want to introduce to you my new series 'New Spheres'! It is like a sequel of the story mode of Little Big Planet 2 with new characters, enemies and so on! It will be great, that is my promise to you!

At the moment there's the Teaser Trailer and the Intro published. In this thread I want to show you New Spheres Act I : Introduction of a new Evil.
Reviews and suggestions or any mistakes in the language I used are very welcome! I always try to do my best and with suggestions and so on I get closer and closer to perfection :3
Feel free to <3 if you liked it

Well, see you soon!
http://lbp.me/v/yxj7zr		2011-03-15 12:14:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196

Looks good so far ;-)
If it were me I would slow it down just a bit, since I wasn't always able to read the text fast enough.
And I think "look after Eve" should probably be "look for Eve", right?		2011-03-17 02:55:00

Author:
zabel99
Posts: 179

Yes right Please tell me if you find any other language mistakes or improvements 2011-03-17 13:50:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196

Your titles look good. Clives part: Why do you say it like something befalled her doesnt sound just right... maybe instead of befalled use the past tense of the word befall....which is befell. REally cute how my sackthing eats all the food on the way out. LOL ok so ill heart and am looking foward to seeing the levels finished if you want to F4F you can play one of the levels in my sig.2011-03-17 14:58:00

Author:
PurpleIris88
Posts: 108

How embarrassing -.- Even I should have known that the past tehnse of befall is befell (like 'fall' and 'fell&apos. Thanks for showing me that mistake

I will play one of your levels as soon as I got time 		2011-03-17 16:33:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196

Seems to be interesting, im looking forward to seeing the rest of the movie, i didn't find any bugs or anything you need to fix... Good Job!
F4F- https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=53106-MindSmasher&p=807138#post807138		2011-03-17 17:30:00

Author:
matt54123
Posts: 38

Well, my illness and my mood change which means I was in a mood for action games and school prevented me to continue working on my series.
But since I'm not sick anymore and I'm back to my creative mood I'll continue today
Just wait 		2011-03-25 17:55:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196

Hey, I just queued your level! Hopefully I'll be able to get a review in tonight. Meanwhile, do you think you could check out my level, too? It's a coproject handled by me and a couple other creators. http://lbp.me/v/y4n7x0

The F4F thread: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=53375-The-Missing-Piece-Part-1		2011-03-25 21:12:00

Author:
Scholarship
Posts: 105

Hey StarrKable (or is it EmilDaRose?),

I watched your trailer and it left me wanting more, so well done. I can't wait to sally forth in search of Eve! I love how you've preserved the personalities of all the characters and (very importantly!) hold yourself to a high language standard. Music and decor choice really made the level come together professionally and entertainingly. Besides, how could I argue with feeding my ravenous Sack Thing?

That said, I'm no expert with movie cameras, but the scene changes felt abrupt. Have you experimented with cross-fades or other transitions? I also thought Professor Higgin Botham made far too much sense. You went for the obscure metaphor, but from my understanding of him in LBP2, he's completely insane and makes zero sense. If you're suggesting he's doing better mentally after the events of the game, maybe you could point it out explicitly (have him thank Eve for her care, maybe?).

So, obviously, I am nitpicking in the hopes of seeing something amazing next, so give yourself a pat on the back. A bang-up job.		2011-04-05 06:14:00

Author:
Fobstar49
Posts: 75

Thank you very much for the review!

I'll see what I can do about the transitions and scene-changes...

And about Higgin Botham...I remember that after the virus of the Negativitron was gone his metaphors make a little bit more sense. Right? 		2011-04-05 17:57:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196

Ha ha ha...perhaps, Starr, perhaps.

*doubting inside*		2011-04-05 20:46:00

Author:
Fobstar49
Posts: 75

Idk I like my metaphor! It's Hippie-ish with a deeper sense

You've got a better idea? 		2011-04-06 20:33:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196

Well, I took quite a long break, but today I continue with the sequel! 2011-04-22 10:06:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196

So, the sequel is finally done!

Here you go:
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=63735-New-Spheres-Act-I-2-The-Sour-Apple-Path		2011-10-04 15:42:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196

So, the sequel is finally done!

Here you go:
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=63735-New-Spheres-Act-I-2-The-Sour-Apple-Path

I watched your intorduction not too long ago. It's a great intro to your series. Your character work and humour thrown in was spot on. It impressed me enough to go on and try the remaining levels. So I'm going to follow the link you've given above and continue there.		2011-10-05 16:09:00

Author:
LittleBigDes
Posts: 920

A little update:

I changed one of the silhouettes of the villains since I had to change some stuff of the concept for the future of my series! 		2011-10-22 19:57:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196

My first push without any updates! 2011-10-27 11:48:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196

Can't wait to try it out!2011-10-27 13:02:00

Author:
RainbowtipsFort
Posts: 144

I'd like to push this thread and make it easier for you by posting the link for every following part:

https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=63735-New-Spheres-Act-I-2-The-Sour-Apple-Path
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=64916-New-Spheres-Act-I-3-Madhouse-gone-Mad
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=65348-New-Spheres-Act-I-4-Hit-the-Road-Sack

I'd really like to know what people think about it now as I'm thinking about either continuing this series or starting a new one. It'd be really nice if you help me out! ^_^		2014-09-23 14:25:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196

I'll try to check out at least a couple today.

Here's mine if you are interested.

https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=91715-Tale-of-the-Storm-Stones-Remastered		2014-09-23 16:22:00

Author:
Biv
Posts: 734

I queued it! 2014-09-23 17:19:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196

I played most of the first level before I ran out of time. The platform section, where you warned us about timing, is murderously hard. I never managed to get past it.

Overall I enjoyed it quite a bit.		2014-09-24 00:05:00

Author:
Biv
Posts: 734

It's kinda sad, that I made the plattform section too hard. Because after you get out of the temple something really great awaits you. I say "controllinator" and a spectacular boss!

But trust me, it's doable. :'D		2014-09-28 13:16:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196

It's kinda sad, that I made the plattform section too hard. Because after you get out of the temple something really great awaits you. I say "controllinator" and a spectacular boss!

But trust me, it's doable. :'D

Grrrr....I'm going to try again. I've heard a similar complaint about difficulty at the end of Goop Factory.

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Okay, I made it through this time...and your right, the beastie and boss was good fun.

I almost got bogged down again at the spiky section after the timed platforms. You know, grapple-swing-bouncepad, platform-grapple-slide past the spikes-baby grapples to move right-grapple up.

Just seems like the margins were too tight. If you has slid things apart just a bit, and maybe gave just a bit more light, it still would have been difficult without bordering on Contra.

I enjoyed it, however. Hearted and liked.

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Anna check out a Goop Factory level? 		2014-10-07 16:52:00

Author:
Biv
Posts: 734


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