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Gilburts Fruit Filled Gut[Film]
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| One of Gilburts friends is about to learn the lesson of leaving a hungy idiot alone with food. My first try at a film, Enjoy! http://lbp.me/v/yr7gn7 | 2011-03-09 23:03:00 Author: SketchNZ  Posts: 1668 |
hi there  watched your film!+++: - cool idea for a film! - nice actings! well done! - you can feel his thoughts - i smiled atthe purple stickers, and the idea with the hiding ---: - censored text - a bit short, ends very fast unexpected ideas: - i think a zoom at his face while the grumbling stomach would be funny - try to add a bit more on the end. a fitting end like a joke or something - maybe somehow he wins free dinner for two somewhere while trying to hide. get found and they eat together happy. rating: - yay F4F: i think my F4F level is a bit long... but if you got the time it would be very nice if you would review it it is called skunk bunny adventures and it is linked in my singature! thank you ~Forces | 2011-03-10 00:44:00 Author: ForcesWerwolf  Posts: 475 |
Thanks for the review! I have fixed up the word Grape being censored and have made it all look better, I will Q your level up and play it today  .I like your idea, Maybe ill add something like that at the end, like he finds some grapes in the trash or somehthing  . | 2011-03-10 04:08:00 Author: SketchNZ Posts: 1668 |
| Hey, this thread should have way more reviewws!! I mean, your sketchNZ for crying out loud! ANYWAY, it sounds good, I still haven't finished Story Mode but I'll check out this little flm as soon as I can, if I don't reply in the next 5 days just send me a message! EDIT: great level Sketch! it had me and my little brother laughing like maniacs, the house was cool,and ou did some great angling of the cameras, I would have liked it to be longer but that's fine, it was a great little movie, can't wait to see more from you on the PS3. 5 stars from me. | 2011-03-22 04:29:00 Author: LiamTheKiwi  Posts: 153 |
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