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Hey all..
After an awsome comment of a player on my RIP level ive decided to Re-Edit it making some changes and Re-Share it.

RIP was one of my 1st levels.. almost 2 years ago.. Ive spent something like 1 full month ( not all days working on it ) but toke me many time to try make this level very well polished.
The level is short.. is more a Visualy beauty than something hard to cross.. like ive said.. i tried to make a polished and cute level to have some fun crossing it.
There is 3 hidden areas with objects to collect.

So here it is again RIP - back to LBP2

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/4610/umafoto13.jpg
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/3514/umafoto14.jpg
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/5876/umafoto15.jpg

I will not Re-Edit it anymore. This level never got many runs i cant understand why .. but is the level i love more and its ok like this. I hope u like it like ive loved to create long time ago.
Feedback is welcome.
http://lbp.me/v/ppsnrq
2011-03-08 16:27:00

Author:
PTdragon
Posts: 176


Cool level, it's very detailed and has a good atmosphere

it's a bit short thought but no criticism there because you already said that it's short and that you mainly focused on the visuals. And the visuals look great
Also liked the theme, there are not many (good) levels which rely on a dark atmosphere.

Want to see more stuff like this, maybe a bit longer? ;D
Thumps up!

Oh and if youve got some time, please try may Madera (link in the sig).
Thanks
2011-03-08 18:07:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84


Thanks for the review
Yeah the level is Short but Thermo is blowing up.. ive used 1 object from history at the end (bats) but oh well thats a minor excuse
As ive said ive focused on the time in the Visual Quality and on the Details ^^ i still think its one of my best levels

I will try your Madera level and soon a review
2011-03-08 18:42:00

Author:
PTdragon
Posts: 176


Hey PTdragon,

This level has a great atmosphere. You took and used the Wedding theme elements very well! The coffin-with-a-moving-lid was especially creepy for me. Good night nothing scarier than a bobbing skull came out...

The platforming destroys me, but that reflects poorly on my skills, not yours. I swear someday I'll complete it...!

I would recommend you try modifying the logic controlling the elevator. Right now, the door opens and closes repeatedly and the elevator moves down, even if the player jumps out of the elevator and stays above ground. It makes for a bit of a wait and looks a little silly. maybe a plane-specific player sensor could make sure players are inside the elevator before closing the doors and moving down?

Anyhow, still a fun and attractive level, for sure. That scoreboard is a tease!
2011-03-10 05:39:00

Author:
Fobstar49
Posts: 75


Thanks Fobstar for play RIP
Rip is fo rme my Best level.. the one i spent more time and i really did it with "love" becouse i like very much that kind of games with dark atmosphere.
Ye the elevetor ^^ Was 2years ago .. i was a noob with sensors.. its a good idea change it now with some easy Logic ^^ tks for the Tip.

No one can beat score?
1 PTdragon 13.860
I will tell you the secret After open this Lever on following image.. just w8 some seconds then try make best combo
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/3514/umafoto14.jpg
2011-03-10 06:59:00

Author:
PTdragon
Posts: 176


Ok im playing as im writing your feedback so im going to try to do a good review.
-I love your lil fences they look good. Lightning is nice effect.
-the eyes in the wall is a good add too. im going to have to restart the level bc i messed up at the elevator. maybe use a player sensor set to same layer. that might keep the elevator from riding off without you.
-heres an idea...on the parts where you are waiting for a switch to move something, like the one or two switch then the floor pulls out, or the coffin, maybe add a movie camera, a nice angle maybe even some camera shake for effect. and some sound effects to go along with it.
-the "house" is nice pictures with eyes, classical
-cool idea with the swinging across the chain, i havent seen that before.
-if you have alot of obstacles like spikes and such, infinite checkpoints are not a bad idea. thing is if you are perma dead, not alot of ppl will restart the level. if you want your level played all the way through, odd infinte checkpoints.
overall very nice looking level. Well done
if you participate in F4F take a go at my level Candy Land. http://lbp.me/v/xw2bt6
2011-03-11 14:47:00

Author:
PurpleIris88
Posts: 108


It's a really good level. Great job. Play my level too https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=52416-Little-Adventure
Sorry my bad english.
2011-03-14 10:11:00

Author:
Unknown User


PurpleIris88 - Tks for so detailed review this level was one of my 1st creations.. and i say like ive said and i will say its the level i love more ^^
I can and i will edit soon the elevator.. when i did it i didnt knew how to work very well with sensors etc
I did change 1 chekpoint or 2 cant remmeber and added the bounces (before was just a rope with a skull on it) to try improve the level but Thermo is Exploding ^^
- Added your level to queue soon ill post a review^( to busy with Rl work but i will play it dont worry )

DrDeath - Tks for play it.. ive alredy f4f your level.. great one ^^
2011-03-16 08:01:00

Author:
PTdragon
Posts: 176


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