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Versus (Film)

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Just published my first movie level.
As it say's in the description it's nothing more of a fighting scene, but with some style and showing off, music, lots of cuts and panning shots. It has some original parts and shots, also a features some blood and mild gore.
Runtime is over 5 minutes.

I've been creating this level for more when a week (about 2 weeks exactly), really put myself into it. I am not going to say anything else, when I finally uploaded it and watched the final result I felt kind of proud of it as my first work.

Sorry for no screenshots, maybe I'll add them later. Try it up please, I'm really interested in getting feedback.

P.S. I made a mistake while creating another thread (it was not F4F), so this is not a spam.
http://lbp.me/v/yqvk3-
2011-03-08 12:03:00

Author:
Kashadooo
Posts: 11


On list when i play i will leave feedback
Can u try https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=52081-Pirates.-Chapter-2-The-Skull-Mountain. and leave Feedback?
2011-03-08 12:55:00

Author:
PTdragon
Posts: 176


On list when i play i will leave feedback
Can u try https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=52081-Pirates.-Chapter-2-The-Skull-Mountain. and leave Feedback?

Of course! I queued it aswell, gonna play it this evening and leave feedback
2011-03-08 13:02:00

Author:
Kashadooo
Posts: 11


ahah M8 this video is awsome.. the song fits in everything
Blue Wins !!
The effects of when they meet is AWSOME.. what agreat level.. Adored it !! **** what an action ..
2011-03-08 13:21:00

Author:
PTdragon
Posts: 176


Sounds good, I'll check this out If you could leave feedback on my movie level 'The Machiniac' in my sig, It would be much appreciated, thanks2011-03-08 13:45:00

Author:
Blanchrocker
Posts: 142


Queued!I am going to watch now =P
Feel free to visit my planet and try my level.
2011-03-08 17:52:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hi Kashadooo, thats a pretty cool fighting movie you got there, the fighting animations are spot on, I loved how the blue character pulled out his staff at the beginning, very cool , you also had some good camera angles as well.
One suggestion, perhaps you should edit the lighting when the characters are in the air, it as a little bright and hard to see, overall though, great first movie level, well done i gave your level a 'yay'
If you could do F4F on my movie level 'The Machiniac' in sig. cheers
2011-03-08 20:48:00

Author:
Blanchrocker
Posts: 142


Oh, neat! I'll be sure to test Might take a while thought.. you prefer feedback in here or in lbp?2011-03-08 21:09:00

Author:
Sillipurkki
Posts: 14


Thank you all, but circumstances made me unable to play all your levels till tommorow. I'll be sure to play your levels and leave feedback very soon!2011-03-08 22:34:00

Author:
Kashadooo
Posts: 11


here are my notices i did while watching:

- nice start with the switch. liked it
- level? i thought is a film heh
- ohhh a bit unexpected what happens in th film - but thats good heh!
- but the background need a bit more design and details the bots are amazing! loved it!
- very very good animation and tricks!
- i missed a bit a backgroundstory but thats ok. but would make it even better!

if you would do a small review bout my skunk bunny level i would be happy link can be found in my signature! thank you!
2011-03-08 23:49:00

Author:
ForcesWerwolf
Posts: 475


Kashadoo, well done!

I thoroughly enjoyed the cinematic -- Blue really kicked butt (and thank goodness).

You went with the no-dialogue route, and I dare say that worked for you. There was plenty enough character facial and other animation to let viewers know what's going on. I could tell all the camera and animation work must have taken ages...kudos to you! The butterfly/beetle spawning moments were a little awkward, though, because the bugs were all too similar in their flightpath, size and orientation. If you wanted to, I think modifying them a little bit would give a much more realistic feel.

Thanks for a great show.
2011-03-10 05:35:00

Author:
Fobstar49
Posts: 75


Sorry for not doing feedback on your levels yet, was insanely busy. Going to do that's do be done today2011-03-11 11:01:00

Author:
Kashadooo
Posts: 11


I have played, commented and left feedback on all of your levels. Thanks again for playing it - your critic was helpfull aswell!

Still would have appreciated more feedback. And anyone knows if someone could make some screenshots from my level? Or even record it?
2011-03-13 13:27:00

Author:
Kashadooo
Posts: 11


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