Archive: 7 posts

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Pretty much my first level here. I did a quick racing one before. Took me quite a while to make this level. Hopefully some people will enjoy it. http://lbp.me/v/ypg77q http://i5.lbp.me/img/ft/505d146882b04f1c77fac50d8d30fb8d17b8e1c9.jpg http://i3.lbp.me/img/ft/d7365f8dd25ca07b9f7521e6d7d27692385940f5.jpg

2011-03-07 23:18:00 Author: Unknown User

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Queued!

2011-03-07 23:21:00 Author: creator22 Posts: 162

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Hey Chris, Er...interesting concept, heh. I thought your level stuck to the theme quite well and was generally bug-free. Environments were recognisable, traps and challenges made sense and the monsters deserve gold stars. As for recommendations, I have several. First of all, I would reduce the ceiling height for most of the level. Either that or decorate the enormous, blank walls, but I would think narrower passageways (even 3-4x Sackfolk height) fit better with a sewer theme. Second, that toilet at the beginning! The rest of the level looked quite good, but the toilet really stuck out like a sore thumb. As the first thing players see, it didn't give a good first impression (I am glad I stuck around, though). Finally, I never finished the boss. I could get some brains and climb to a couple of spots on it, but there was too little contrast between poop, poop and more poop for me to figure out what to grab/stand on/avoid. I could tell parts were moving, but it was all too brown for me to navigate. Perhaps you could add some contrasting or colour detail to the poop boss? Overall, a great level. it sucks that I couldn't save the kid, though.

2011-03-17 04:41:00 Author: Fobstar49 Posts: 75

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LOL, the only advice i have is to maybe come up with a more appealing name and a more eye popping badge for your level. F4F-https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=53106-MindSmasher&p=807138#post807138

2011-03-17 06:36:00 Author: matt54123 Posts: 38

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Queued heheheheh.... Plop... Hehehehe, k back to work.

2011-03-17 12:52:00 Author: BasketSnake Posts: 2391

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added some more decorations near the end so not as much blank space now. Also changed the boss a bit so you can see what you need to grab.

2011-03-20 23:08:00 Author: Unknown User

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So I have this one queued simply because of the name. It has me intrigued. Will leave review in game. if you like platformers, check out my level "A journey of epic proportions (part 1)"

2011-03-26 03:12:00 Author: FreaK_144 Posts: 9

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