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Madera

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Hey there

All of you who love classic platformer should try this level
It's the third level and the second platformer i made in lbp2. please let me hear what you think about it!

A little info on the name: "la madera" means "wood" on spain, and that's how the level was build, mainly out of wood material.
I hope you like it 		2011-03-06 16:22:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

Very good! Enjoyed this playthrough, there is one area that needs an extra checkpoint where the moon and the clouds are but other than that good!

F4F in sig thanks!		2011-03-06 16:34:00

Author:
FriedGoat
Posts: 102

Thanks a lot for your feedback

ok i will think about placing another checkpoint near the moon area, thanks for the advice!

Already played your level, just take a look in your thread 		2011-03-06 19:04:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

There should be enough checkpoints 2011-03-07 17:32:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

Queued, will write an in-game review.

F4F: Frantic (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=47909-Frantic)		2011-03-07 19:49:00

Author:
Voganlight
Posts: 60

ok thanks, queued your level 2011-03-07 20:21:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

Very well designed Level. Madera in portuguese is (Madeira) in english Wood.. and the level demonstrate really that Everything is wood.
That wood guys is very fun when we jump and he say.. You almost got the higger point.. was hilarious hehe.
Overall the level is very good and i enjoyed play it. Nice job .		2011-03-08 19:51:00

Author:
PTdragon
Posts: 176

thank you 2011-03-09 13:46:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

Update:

Added some minor details, worked on a few things that seemed to be kind of undone.
Would like to hear some new feedback 		2011-03-14 16:48:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

I really liked it. Great job. Thank you.2011-03-14 17:44:00

Author:
Unknown User

hey i just played your level and i really enjoyed it. I love the visuals made entirely of wood and the platforming is really fun most of the time. the only part i had some trouble with was the swinging part i had some trouble gettiing to the very last ball. Other than that this is great and should have many more plays.
I would appreciate feedback on my level thread too 		2011-03-14 18:53:00

Author:
hitman_472
Posts: 52

Hey, just gave your level a go. Real sharp. You had good aesthetics everything works well, great pacing and fun.

The only thing i could think of to improve wa that the camera was a little low near the beginning for me, not that it really inhibited anything

Also after the really big bounce pad, I dropped back down to grab more points, noticed that I landed on top of the arch. I cleverly walked to the left... but I wonder if I had walked to the right what might have happened.

In any case I think you have a wonderful level and i don't think you need to change anything. All I'm looking forward to is more.
Thanks for the fun play.

Please check out my latest level too: F4F in the sig.		2011-03-15 02:44:00

Author:
fei0x
Posts: 61

Great !
The only thing I would improve is placement on the bubbles for the tilted bounce pads near the beginning. You actually have to aim a little higher than the bubbles to make it onto the next platform.


Please F4F my sig if you get a chance!		2011-03-15 04:33:00

Author:
Unknown User

hey i just played your level and i really enjoyed it. I love the visuals made entirely of wood and the platforming is really fun most of the time. the only part i had some trouble with was the swinging part i had some trouble gettiing to the very last ball. Other than that this is great and should have many more plays.
I would appreciate feedback on my level thread too

Thank you for the nice feedback the last ball is supposed to be hard to reach
Queued your level.



The only thing i could think of to improve wa that the camera was a little low near the beginning for me, not that it really inhibited anything

Also after the really big bounce pad, I dropped back down to grab more points, noticed that I landed on top of the arch. I cleverly walked to the left... but I wonder if I had walked to the right what might have happened.

Thank you fei0x for this detailed review im going to look at the camera near the beginning again to set the zone a bit higher.
it was really smart to walk left there's just a free way ticket to the last checkpoint on the right side Queued your level!


Great !
The only thing I would improve is placement on the bubbles for the tilted bounce pads near the beginning. You actually have to aim a little higher than the bubbles to make it onto the next platform.


Please F4F my sig if you get a chance!

Good point, i will take a look at the bubbles again.
Thanks for the feedback Queued your level of course!		2011-03-15 15:44:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

Changed camera setting at the level entrance.
Should be fine for now 		2011-03-17 13:32:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

queued it! I'll leave a review in the game after I play it
F4F-https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=53106-MindSmasher&p=807138#post807138		2011-03-17 18:50:00

Author:
matt54123
Posts: 38

Thanks, already saw the review
queued your level!		2011-03-17 20:20:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

Added some pics (could have done this from the start but yeah, im lazy )2011-03-17 21:01:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

Looks cool, queued up.2011-03-18 00:28:00

Author:
Unknown User

thanks, i queued your level 2011-03-21 11:45:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

Did some minor changes on the level (yeah, again)

How about getting the free fall tower as a prize for winning the bet?
What do you think?		2011-03-24 21:13:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

i queue your level i will write a in game review
can you feedback my level?
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=53239-lizard-race-demo		2011-03-27 21:05:00

Author:
KRX
Posts: 110

yep, thanks for the review

queued your level.		2011-03-28 20:27:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

I played this thinking it would be a nice smooth platformer. Was it? No.
There was some nice ideas, but in terms of how well it played i must say it was pretty poor. Also, the scenery wasn't great either, so there's definetly room for improvement in my opinion. My favourate part was the title, the creatvitity in that was great, but when it fell the first word fell off, which means the balance is off slightly, which needs fixing for a smooth entrance.

Sorry bud, i didn't enjoy it 		2011-03-30 09:40:00

Author:
Unknown User

Hmm ok thanks for the review but i dont really get it.

You also wrote an ingame review which nearly completely differs from what you wrote here in my thread.
Some points are the same ok but there was no word of "Was it a nice platformer? No."...you rather said "good job" or "not much to complain about".

So what should i believe now?
You cant go left and right at the same time, only chuck norris can 		2011-03-30 14:09:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

Polished the level a bit, i hope its still working as good as before 2011-04-07 17:09:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

Hey DragonHunter,

Whatever changes you've made, the version of Madera I played was pitch-perfect. You had many creative, well-executed and fun platforming elements and all of it was greatly enhanced by the sense of being challenged by the Wedding theme mummy-monkey character-thing. Favourite room was definitely the sponge-balls-on-rope climb. So clever!

I thought the level of difficulty was fair and enjoyable throughout and checkpoints were appropriately placed. The mechanical platforming elements (which were...pretty much all of them) were very impressive.

If anything, I would suggest moving the switch above the bouncepad just a smidgen lower. I might be being a baby, but after smooth sailing for most of the level, that one bounce was the only remotely frustrating event.

In conclusion: had a good time, will definitely play again, and am very interested in your other work.		2011-04-18 06:28:00

Author:
Fobstar49
Posts: 75

uuuh yeah was a long time...but im back

First of all, thanks for the nice review Fobstar
I will take a look at the switch again.

Second, I dont have much time playing lbp 2 since theres much work to do for me atm (sad, i know....)
But I will try to be online again on lbp 2 from time to time...unfortunately this will not be enough to start a new creation

Well, I hope for some more reviews on my levels, when there's more free time i will hopefully come up with a new one 		2011-10-12 22:53:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84


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