Home    LBP Showcase / Reviews / Recommendations    Level Showcase
#1

Prius_The Sack of All Trades

Archive: 2 posts


I have recently become active in LBP Central. I had no idea about this site until I stumbled upon it. It's great! I get to showcase my levels and stuff. Well I am ready to check out anyones level who's going to check out and RATE my Prius contest entry level. I have worked about a month on it and all my hardwork seems worthless as I'm not getting very much views. My level is actually pretty good looking., I won't lie. If anyone would want to play my level, then I will surely play their level back. Please feel free to ask any questions, comment on bugs, or what I should do in the future. I really want to be a good creator. I work very hard on my levels and I see other very under rated but very good levels. I've given some pictures of my level. Please, please respond as I guarantee you that I will play your level and RATE IT. But please be kind enough to do the same in return. Well, thanks in advance. Hopefully, my rating will make a difference in your level as your rating would for my level. Please, visit my level. Link below:-
[http://lbp.me/v/ygh4z7][/http://lbp.me/v/ygh4z7]
http://lbp.me/v/mrahman377
2011-03-05 06:13:00

Author:
mrahman377
Posts: 11


Since you're enraged and felt the need to post two moronic and unrelated comments on my level, I'll give you some impressions on why I rated your level badly.

When you start the level, you're dropped in a pretty cool-looking forest environment. I realize I'm prompted to go in two different directions from the start. Confused, I head over to one side where I use a grappling hook to cross one chasm only to have it removed immediately afterwards. After one more segment of swinging over weird-looking fish, I go in the water and am trapped for no reason whatsoever. There are a couple easily avoidable fish and that's the end of the first level. I'm then sucked into a level link.
I wasn't really feeling the first level since it was so short and just oddly designed, but I had hope for the second.
You start off underwater. As you swim to the surface, there's a giant sticker cut-out duck with four controlinators just slapped on it and a sticky note that covers them all up so you can't even see what you have to do. After guessing which one of the four controlinators actually did something at all, I went to the right for a few seconds, ejected the seat and started a cutscene. The movie had some good visuals witht the town and whatnot, but it was unnescesarily long for what you were trying to accomplish. Even then, I didn't feel like I walked away from it with any more knowledge of the story than what I had before I started.
After going through another level link and initiating another cutscene, I felt like I didn't want to waste my time playing a level that only gave me "meh" gameplay in really small bits and a lot of potentially tedious cinematics.

I'd suggest just adding a LOT more gameplay to each individual level. Each one lasted 2 minutes long. Also, spend less time doing crazy stuff with movie cameras when a simple transition is faster and more efficient.

Sorry you were upset over my rating, hope that explains why lol.
2011-03-05 19:48:00

Author:
Sack-Jake
Posts: 1153


LBPCentral Archive Statistics
Posts: 1077139    Threads: 69970    Members: 9661    Archive-Date: 2019-01-19

Datenschutz
Aus dem Archiv wurden alle persönlichen Daten wie Name, Anschrift, Email etc. - aber auch sämtliche Inhalte wie z.B. persönliche Nachrichten - entfernt.
Die Nutzung dieser Webseite erfolgt ohne Speicherung personenbezogener Daten. Es werden keinerlei Cookies, Logs, 3rd-Party-Plugins etc. verwendet.