Home    LBP Showcase / Reviews / Recommendations    Level Showcase    Cool Levels
#1

The treasure lost by the knight templars

Archive: 29 posts


I present you my second level,dive into the merciless universe of the knight templars has the research for the treasure so desired, in a route sowed whith embuche. Good game has all !!!
http://lbp.me/v/yg40qd
2011-03-03 12:55:00

Author:
Unknown User


got it Q'd2011-03-03 23:52:00

Author:
Gutz
Posts: 175


Hello!!! Thank you for having put a smile but I saw that you did not finish my level. Why? I read your comment but I everything not understood of which grapin you speak and about the sponge also....2011-03-05 00:27:00

Author:
Unknown User


Other gamers???2011-03-07 15:37:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hi! I thought the level was really good. It had a nice atmosphere and fairly unique obstacles. Although, I found that the platforms with motor bolts a little frustrating. I was able to make it to the part with the sponge attached to the winch that was moving at a fast pace. I couldn't make the jump because I was trying to stay on the platform that was rotating. That part was a tad hard, in my opinion. Hope I helped! 2011-03-07 19:44:00

Author:
creator22
Posts: 162


Queued, will do an in-game review.

F4F: Frantic (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=47909-Frantic)
2011-03-07 19:48:00

Author:
Voganlight
Posts: 60


gamer??? where are you????2011-03-10 15:51:00

Author:
Unknown User


hi i played your level
here you go with the feedback: ^^

+++:
- nice game feeling with the background sounds!
- cute and nice design of the level! you even sometimes scared me like oh there is something comming. but it was not. thats cool.
- sometimes very very good ideas for fun difficulties.
- the moving plattforms with the sponges under it were fun! (with the fire under them)

---:
- got stuck when i had to get the first bridge to go up. (with the rubber string to take it down) it closed down and i was trapped under it... was not able to go further in the level.
- DON'T give CROWNS as point bubbles. plz never! (remove it, or people will report your level and MM needs to remove it)
- hard to see enemies behind the walls sometimes
- why is there invisible gas if you can choose which way you want to go when you go down later in the level

ideas/tipps:
- prevent that players can throw down the first sponge you need to go upstairs (the one you get after explode the stones( block the was down the stairs for the sponge block OR make an emitter which creates a new sponge cube if it falls down the stairs)
- it takes a bit long till all the stones exploade on said sponge (with the switch at the beginning)
- to grab and swing in air, don't use cubes use circle formed sponges
- at the beginning: place the grappling hook in front of the checkpoint or after it. i forgot that i don't have it anymore and jumped into death
- add more checkpoints (at the beginning part - i saw you had one to much on one part - heh)
- if you want that people cant remove the grappling hook tweek it as not removable. works better than placing everywhere new hooks
- why do you use a different colored sponge all of sudden? (there is a brown one somehwer)
- don't use old lbp1 close story mode looking enemies. they are boring
- do the arows on the smaller layer. not able to stand on it.
- credits should be shown at the beginning or at the end of a level not in the middle
- don't make bigger price bubbles than normal. looks not good. as well try to hide them better
- don't make too much long point collections. it is way more fun to chain the points with skill!
- show a source of the fire ball. looks stupid if it comes out of nowhere
- nice idea with the very small bridge looked good!! but if youplay with a friend i guess it is possible that others get trapped under it.
- try not to add prices which are totally unrelated to your level (it's ok just saying)
- cut films... make them not able to replay (same counts for musik or musik effects)
- connect your checkpoints to player sensors (wider range than the gate) that helps the player don't miss it
- like i said... if you play multiplayer you can trap people under the bridges (there are 3 this kind in your level) prevent this!
- sponge don't suit for jumping plattforms. if you fall and grab in last second... you can only jump to death.. which is frustrating.
- don't make points into the goal. they will not get count! that is frustrating for some players!

rating:
- 7/10 - needs a bit work but very worth to play! a yay

F4F:
- skunk bunny adventures (link can be found in my signature) thank you!!

~ForcesWerwolf
PS: i hope i was able to help you with me feedback!! keep it up
2011-03-10 17:45:00

Author:
ForcesWerwolf
Posts: 475


thanks you very much for your opinion!!!! very complete!!!! cool!!!!!2011-03-10 20:28:00

Author:
Unknown User


The decor is looking very nice so far, the spider webs and swords all look great. the bridges coming down were great. the part going down the area with all the candles, i think may look alot better if you made it where you filled in the bottom instead of just the jagged path, it would look more clifflike, and realistic. i dont know if you get what i mean here, ill take a pic of it and upload it, you should see it somewhere in the activity on LBP. The bridge after the cave where the boards are missing is very nice.
-the snakes with fire looks great.
-you make pretty good use of your layers, and it looks good.
-i think the part with the burning log rolling down was cool.
-very good on changing music to suit the areas your in.
-part with the grapple hook is really cool, it would be neat if you mixed up the arrangement on the spikes for each row or maybe to differnt styles of spike order and alternate between them.
-the area with the spikes and the green gas is really nice looking, and plays pretty smoothly.
-movie camera with movie blocks was nice looking and really fun obstacle to do.
-all the different places you used explosives to change the enviorment looks very very good. really feels like your making a journey.
The part going down with all the bridges and spikes at the bottom was really well done.
Very well done level nice treasure at the end. I really enjoyed playing this level. F4F play my level Candy Land and lemme know what ya think. http://lbp.me/v/xw2bt6
2011-03-11 16:51:00

Author:
PurpleIris88
Posts: 108


Level looks good, queued it,

Try my sims level, it is now in version 1.6, with the interface in version 2.5.3

This is the forum thread https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=50499-The-Sims-with-tutorial&p=787187#post787187

And this is the lbp.me page http://lbp.me/v/x48mnq*

Feedback will be great for more features.
2011-03-11 17:15:00

Author:
PerfectlyDarkTails
Posts: 269


thanks thanks purpleris!!! i'm going to play yor level!!!! thanks again for your opinion!!!2011-03-11 23:56:00

Author:
Unknown User


I'm going to play your level !!!2011-03-12 17:54:00

Author:
Unknown User


F4F got it Q'd, will play tommorow and leave a review, if you could leave feedback on my movie level 'The Machiniac' in my sig. thanks in advance 2011-03-12 20:59:00

Author:
Blanchrocker
Posts: 142


Hello Blanchrocker!!!

Ok and i'm going also to play your level!!!
2011-03-13 14:45:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hello everybody!!!!
My level waits that you!!!
2011-03-14 21:54:00

Author:
Unknown User


Other players???2011-03-16 21:58:00

Author:
Unknown User


Left my feedback in level, now try my SackSims level.2011-03-17 13:25:00

Author:
PerfectlyDarkTails
Posts: 269


hello perfectly!

I tried your level (sims) but i don't understand because i 'm french, sorry...
2011-03-17 23:46:00

Author:
Unknown User


Other players???2011-03-19 00:52:00

Author:
Unknown User


i queue your level
can you please feedback my level?
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=53239-lizard-race-demo&p=808684
2011-03-19 04:01:00

Author:
KRX
Posts: 110


interesting level very challenging i like it

sorry i couldnt finish i got stuck and the grappling couldnt reach the sponge

the bridge have a big gap and i have to jump to get there

and some of the obstacles are fast
2011-03-20 04:52:00

Author:
KRX
Posts: 110


OK thanks KRX!!!!2011-03-24 20:49:00

Author:
Unknown User


Other players?2011-03-29 14:41:00

Author:
Unknown User


My level waits that you!2011-04-06 07:03:00

Author:
Unknown User


hi!!!!!!!
Somebody wants to play my level?
2011-04-13 07:28:00

Author:
Unknown User


hello everybody!!!!!
Do you want to play my level?
2011-05-21 14:20:00

Author:
Unknown User


Pretty good level you got here. The environments are well crafted and there is a real atmosphere of mystery and trying to escape your inevitable doom. The level is really long, which isn't a bad thing. The music choices were excellent and contributed to the mood. The only suggestion I have might be to move the checkpoints so that the player is forced to walk through them. A few times there was a checkpoint that I didnt see and then I died and had to go back two checkpoints. Other than that great job!

If you could play my new level Emeria (thread (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=56855-Emeria&p=853199) / lbp.me (http://lbp.me/v/yzfc42)) and leave some feedback in my thread that would be great. Thanks for your level!
2011-05-24 05:53:00

Author:
Unknown User


hop hop hop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!2011-06-15 20:46:00

Author:
Unknown User


LBPCentral Archive Statistics
Posts: 1077139    Threads: 69970    Members: 9661    Archive-Date: 2019-01-19

Datenschutz
Aus dem Archiv wurden alle persönlichen Daten wie Name, Anschrift, Email etc. - aber auch sämtliche Inhalte wie z.B. persönliche Nachrichten - entfernt.
Die Nutzung dieser Webseite erfolgt ohne Speicherung personenbezogener Daten. Es werden keinerlei Cookies, Logs, 3rd-Party-Plugins etc. verwendet.