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I will be happy to review any level that is posted here. All you have to do is post an lbp.me link, and, if you want to, you can tell me certain things to look for in your level, such as decoration, or the difficulty of your level. I will post three pros and three cons of your level, then a review. I will provide constructive criticism, so I will not just tell you bad things about your level, but how to fix those things, so that your level can be as perfect as it can. Also, I don't give hearts very easily to people, so if your level is hearted, it's awesome. 2011-03-01 02:37:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154

Here's a level for you!

PSN NAME: shimsok
LEVEL NAME: The Missing Piece
LBP.ME LINK: http://lbp.me/v/x3jd49		2011-03-01 04:08:00

Author:
Scholarship
Posts: 105

Hi . Can you play and review my 2 pyramids? 1st part of pyramid work in LBP2 but 2nd part don't work! Do you review only levels made in LBP2 or you review also levels made in LBP1?
My PSN: GILUPL
My levels:
1) LITTLE BIG PYRAMID: TEMPLE OF TUTANHAMUN
2) LITTLE BIG PYRAMID 2: SECRET OF CLEOPATRA
lbp.me link: http://lbp.me/search?q=gilupl
"you can tell me certain things to look for in your level" - my main idea was long various gameplay so please let me know if any chapter will be too hard for you. I'm still working on good balance of my pyramids so everyone can finish them.
Try also: BEST CREATED CONNECT FOUR - maybe you will like?
Here is link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jDv5apnpAhI
Thanks .		2011-03-01 07:42:00

Author:
GILUPL
Posts: 102

Hey !

Please review my last level: http://lbp.me/v/xq--dx .

It's a top down rally racer with several features. Please try to adjust to the handling of the cars before making a full judgement.		2011-03-01 09:25:00

Author:
Vergil
Posts: 155

Alright! I added each of your levels to my que, and I will play your levels this afternoon. I will then post a review. Sorry, GILUPL, but I only do LBP2 compatible levels. I will play your first pyramid, though.

EDIT: Oh, both of them don't work in LBP2. Sorry. 		2011-03-01 12:54:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154

G'day mate,

If you could take a look and review my levels "Football Kick" (http://lbp.me/v/wy-ygr) and "Zombie Horde: Single Player Beta" (http://lbp.me/v/xr7pth) that'd be brilliant.

Thanks mate; it's much appreciated.		2011-03-01 20:04:00

Author:
Unknown User

reviews

Football Kick
Pros:

1. There is an audience. This makes the scene more interesting.
2. The audience cheers when you get a goal, which made me feel like i made an accomplishment. (though I really didn't )
3. The goal moves up and down, which makes the game harder.

Cons

1. The cheer is the same every time.
2. The game is just a little to long, and it gets boring near the end.
3. This level doesn't have a third con. That's very bad.

Review

Overall, this level is really fun. The controls were good, it was just the right level of difficulty, and I think that 10 points was a good amount to award for a goal. Unfortunately, the game was a little to long. You shouldn't shorten it to much, maybe about 15 to 30 seconds. In order to fix the cheer problem, I would just attatch a randomiser to a couple of different cheers, if there are anymore. I enjoyed this level a lot, and I might play it again sometime.

The Missing Piece

Pros:
1. Good use of decorations. It looks awesome.
2. Good use of layers. Makes the game more fun.
3. Is that... The Infamous hand? It makes your bad guy look awesome.



Cons:

1. You can get squashed by the box in the beginning cutscene that the person is in. This makes you restart,and you have to watch a blank spot for a minute due to the movie camera. This can be fixed by making the box and person a thin layer in the background.
2. In the beginning, after the cutscen when you go down the stars, there's a little gap at the bottom that you can fall into. you should add more material there.
3. Some materials surfaces are not smooth on top. I would check over the hieroglyphics (did I spell that right?) cave.

Rewiew:

This level was awesome! The platforming was really fun, and the storyline was great. The decorations and objects made it look really cool. You also made good use of a bunch of materials. It was so good, I hearted it. I can't wait to play the next level!

Zombie Horde BETA:

Pros:
1. ZOMBIES!!! No matter how overused they are in levels, zombies are always awesome.
2. The Creatinator was creative.
3. You used multiple layers, which made it more challenging.


Cons:
1. Ack, that hurts! I would reccommend stopping the lights from flickering. They really hurt my eyes.
Sorry, but since the level is only a zombie survival, there isn't a lot of cons.

Review:

The level was fun. I liked using the Creatinator to shoot the zombies, and the multiple layers added to the experience. It's hard not to have fun when zombies can bounce on your head at any second. The only thing that took away from the experience was the flickering lights.

Sackboy Rally Racing Championship:

Pros:

1. The layer jumping was a good idea.
2. A variety of cars was great, I love choosing between different things.
3. You designed the course very well. It looked great.



Cons:

1. The steering is a little hard. You should map the left stick to a joystick rotator instead.
2. There were a couple of places were my car got jammed and I couldn't move. You should probably smooth out the walls, instead of having little grooves were your car could easily get stuck.
3. Having accelerate be O and brake be X felt kind of wierd to me. think it should be the other way around.

Review:

I really liked this level, even though I was playing by myself. It felt relaxing, driving around in my little car. As I said before, I liked choosing my car. The jumping was cool, though you could've provided more than two instances to use it. The course was just the right length, considering that it had only one lap.

Any levels posted after this will be added to tommorrow's to-do-list.

Sorry, but I can't review any more today. I promise I will review them tommorrow, though.

Tommorow I will review:

A run in Autumn		2011-03-01 21:54:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154

I'll go for one tomorrow if that's okay (:

The Level Thread (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=51289-A-Run-in-Autumn-(1P))

Thanks (:		2011-03-01 21:57:00

Author:
JonnysToyRobot
Posts: 324

Ok mate, I'm fixing up the cons now. The cons you stated aren't hard to fix up. Thanks again for having a look at my levels.2011-03-02 03:43:00

Author:
Unknown User

I just had a look and there are no other types of cheers I can find. 2011-03-02 04:04:00

Author:
Unknown User

^ You're welcome. Also, the cheers didn't matter that much, it was just a suggestion. Starting reviews now.

A Run In Autumn

Pros:

1. Did you make this music? It sounds really good, and I don't remember it at all.
2. This is a very creative idea for a game.
3. I like the lighting affects.




Cons:

1. In the beginning I didn't know what to do. You should probably put a sign that says "jump!" over the first pit in hologram or something like that.

2. It takes a long time for the Sackbot to respawn. I don't know what your method for this is, so I can't help you. Sorry.

3. The downhill segments are really frustrating. I often jumped, sailed over a whole entire platform,then fell in the next gap. >.< You should make the gaps bigger so this doesn't happen.

Review:

Awesome! The gameplay was very creative. The level was hard, but in a good way. The lighting was a very good idea, too. I enjoyed playing the level a lot, and although I died at least twenty times, it was so good that I kept playing until I finished it.		2011-03-02 21:00:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154

Nope didn't make the music, though I wish I did. I'd never heard it before either, which is why I decided to use it (:

Putting a sign saying jump sounds like a good idea, though I'm having a hard time editing the level (create mode freezes every 3 seconds or so with this level). The respawn is done by emitter and is set to instant, I think it lags because the game has some safeguard stopping hundreds of emitters going off at once so it's put in a queue.

Glad you enjoyed the level (:		2011-03-02 22:32:00

Author:
JonnysToyRobot
Posts: 324

2. It takes a long time for the Sackbot to respawn. I don't know what your method for this is, so I can't help you. Sorry.


Just set the frequency to 0.1s.		2011-03-02 22:32:00

Author:
creator22
Posts: 162

Okay, I'll try this and see if it works, thanks. (:2011-03-02 22:48:00

Author:
JonnysToyRobot
Posts: 324

I would love to get a review!

PSN: Dr_Vab
Level Name: Quick Switch (1P)

LBP.me link: Quick Switch (1P) (http://lbp.me/v/y8k98f)

The level is set in space and is a platformer, hope you enjoy.		2011-03-03 00:18:00

Author:
Dr_Vab
Posts: 134

Sure! I'll do it tommorrow.2011-03-03 00:50:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154

I would appreciate a review once things settle down, I just published my level that I have been working on since day one of LBP2! I think you will enjoy it.

PSN:Krondelo
Cave of Treachery : http://lbp.me/v/yfkd6s

I put a lot of work into the Aesthetics and lighting as well as the gameplay.		2011-03-03 01:29:00

Author:
Krondelo
Posts: 136

Alright! You'll be tommorrow too.2011-03-03 01:57:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154

Thanks Leafy!2011-03-03 02:23:00

Author:
Krondelo
Posts: 136

You're welcome. I'll do it this afternoon.2011-03-03 13:38:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154

I can see you can't review my pyramids but can you review my: BEST CREATED CONNECT FOUR, this level was made in LBP1 and took full thermo but it is work in LBP2.
lbp.me link: http://lbp.me/search?q=gilupl
Thank you .		2011-03-03 18:00:00

Author:
GILUPL
Posts: 102

Ok you'll be tommorow.

Quick Switch

Pros:

1. The materials look incredible.
2. The use of gravity puts "Set The Controls" to shame.
3. The switches were a creative concept.

Cons:

1. There's a grammar mistake in the beginning. The commander says "could of" instead of "could've".
2. You never explain how Rodger can see you. Small, but still important.
3. No offense to Minion, but his hat makes him look girly. You should sticker it dark blue.

Review:

Aww, to be continued?! This level is so awesome, I have to know when the next part will be out. Like, right now. The concept is great, the story is cool, and boy, does it look awesome! I had a really hard time finding cons, which is why you may think that the problems aren't very big. For the next part, maybe you should put three way color switches so it switches from color 1 to 2 to 3 then back to 1. That would be really cool. Definitely earns a <3.

Cave of Treachery

Pros

1. The level was a cave, and the materials perfectly represented that. Good job!
2. The secrets were fun. I liked the bonus bounce.
3. I can't believe you literally crushed my dreams! I was all ready to access the secret exit, then SQUISH! You squashed me with a giant rock! That was a good idea.

Cons
1. The level was a little short. You should consider adding onto it.
2. The button that opened the way to the waterfall near the end was a bit frusterating. You should change it to one-shot, because I kept bouncing up and down and turning the swithc on and off.
3. I couldn't find any other problems., sorry.

Rewiew:

I enjoyed playing this level. It was nice and relaxing, and it was the perfect level of difficulty. I liked finding the secrets. I especially liked the bonus bounce.		2011-03-04 00:44:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154

Was wondering if you could try mine out ^___^, something I came up with it.
http://lbp.me/v/ye6e30		2011-03-04 00:49:00

Author:
Bloo_boy
Posts: 1019

Yup! I'll do it tommorrow.2011-03-04 00:54:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154

Thanks for the review, I'm very glad you enjoyed it! I'll definitely let you know when the next one will be out (I'm thinking it's going to end up being a trilogy), I'm planning on republishing the first Quick Switch pretty soon (maybe tomorrow) and add more story to it so it makes more sense. Also I actually really like the idea for a three way switch, I never thought of that, I'll see if I can fit that in the series somewhere. Thanks for the idea!

Overall great review thank you very much		2011-03-04 01:02:00

Author:
Dr_Vab
Posts: 134

Haha love the review Leafy, thanks again. I will change that switch Glad you liked my Bonus Bounce!2011-03-04 03:32:00

Author:
Krondelo
Posts: 136

Me Please!

http://lbp.me/v/xyws-0

This is a movie level with newly added voice acting, so I'd really like to hear people's opinions on it. I've had great feedback so far, but I like constructive advice, so whatever you have for me is appreciated!		2011-03-04 07:19:00

Author:
rialrees
Posts: 1015

Sorry guys, I don't feel well and I can't concentrate today. I'll try and get all of you tommorrow, though. I hope you don't mind.2011-03-05 00:14:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154

The Printz Diaries: Prologue

Pros:
1. The scrolling screen that said "One boy's tale..." was really cool.
2. Voice acting. It makes the movie more enjoyable.
3. The buildings have very intricate designs. Good job using a variety of stickers and materials.



Cons:
1. Of your subtitles are wrong. It says "Ah, of course", when it should say "Ah yes, but of course".

Review:

Wow, great movie! It was a good idea for a story, and the settings, as I have stated, were great. You obviously put a lot of effort into this movie.		2011-03-05 15:15:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154

Thanks for doing this!

It'd be great if you could review this level

http://lbp.me/v/x4q412		2011-03-05 15:33:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654

Many thanks leafy, I'll take a look at the subtitles soon.

Hope you're feeling better!		2011-03-05 15:46:00

Author:
rialrees
Posts: 1015

Thanks, I am.

Best Created Connect 4

Pros:

1. A great multiplayer game.
2. A very well done replication of the original game.
3. Changing music was a good thing to put in there, since if people played it a lot they would get bored of the music.

Cons:
1. It took me a couple of minutes to figure out how to drop the chips. You should add a magic mouth with directions.

Review:

Great level! Connect 4 is a fun game. It's like advanced tic-tac-toe. The grabbing to drop a chip mechanic was a good choice, and it was very easy to use once I figured out how to use it, if that makes any sense. You should make this level a versus level so that it will grab people's attention. If people are looking for a game to play with a friend, they won't pay attention to normal buttons, and will only look at the ones with the red border.

Sunset...:

Pros:

1. Beautiful music sequencing work. It's pretty and relaxing, just like this whole level.
2. I really liked using the telescope.
3. The scenery was wonderful.

Cons:
1. The fish's eyes made them look weird. They should be a solid object so that they will look better.

Review:

Five words: This will get MM Picked. Everyone should play this level. Everything about it is just.... wow. The background, the water, the music, the easy-enough-to-enjoy-the-scenery-but-hard-enough-to-have-fun difficulty, everything. It's best level that I've ever played. EVER. 		2011-03-05 20:51:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154

Thank you very much Leafy101 . I am glad you like my level .2011-03-07 06:55:00

Author:
GILUPL
Posts: 102

Hi Leafy. Glad you're feeling better.

Would you review my level when you get a chance?

http://lbp.me/v/yp0fr0		2011-03-07 20:45:00

Author:
creator22
Posts: 162

Hey there,

i would appreciate a review on my level called Madera
if you would like to take a look at it, here's the link:

http://lbp.me/v/ymg-by		2011-03-07 20:56:00

Author:
DragonHunterEx
Posts: 84

I'm afraid that doing reviews is not as fun as I thought it would be. Doing reviews everyday, to me, is more work than fun, even though it's LBP. I would like to request that no one asks for anymore reviews.2011-03-07 22:55:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154


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